Gorgeously written! I loved the pairing, thought it's not one I've read before. It worked very well. I, too, loved Percy taking control and Marcus trusting him to make things good, despite his inexperience. He's definitely a quick study! The details were all perfect, too. Percy's window shopping for his family, even though he knew he wouldn't be buying, the unexpected background for Marcus... Really well done, MA!
I loved the pairing, thought it's not one I've read before. It worked very well. I, too, loved Percy taking control and Marcus trusting him to make things good, despite his inexperience. He's definitely a quick study!
The details were all perfect, too. Percy's window shopping for his family, even though he knew he wouldn't be buying, the unexpected background for Marcus... Really well done, MA!