How rather utterly disgusting. Infidelity always does tend to bring up bile in my throat, no matter how well one writes it, and this just takes the cake. Perhaps it's because Hermione is the one who falls first to these so called 'wiles', because she's always thought of as pure and faithful, and yet here you depict here as being anything but like that.
Granted, I realize I'm rambling too much on what is supposed to be a one-shot smutfic, but still... the bile won't leave. Nor will my erection, hence my problem.
Granted, I realize I'm rambling too much on what is supposed to be a one-shot smutfic, but still... the bile won't leave. Nor will my erection, hence my problem.
Good job.