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Fic: Taste (Remus/Sirius, NC-17) 
4th November 2011 17:59
Title: Taste
Author: [info]snegurochka_lee
Pairing: Remus/Sirius
Rating: NC-17
Theme Chosen: Stretch yourself: blow jobs
Other content: IDK, just 17- or 18-year-old boys being all in love and showing it through blow jobs, basically.
Word Count: ~1,800
Summary: It hit him like a Bludger in the middle of History of Magic, that sudden, burning desire to feel Remus's cock in his mouth. That was four bloody hours ago. They haven't had a second to themselves since, and Sirius hasn't been able to focus on anything else.
Notes: So, I was pretty sure I wouldn't be able to come up with anything for this month's theme (stretch yourself, ie: do something outside your comfort zone) because I kind of write different pairings and themes all the damn time. But then! I remembered how much I despise and avoid blow jobs. :) Seriously: a shiny dime to anyone who can find an actual BJ scene in any of my stories. I hate the very thought of them. It's one of the main reasons I stopped having sex with men. Actual serious. And so, here you are: a BJ scene. Also stretching myself a little bit in trying to keep it to absolute PWP at 1,000 words, because I tend to get carried away with backstory and word counts and what not. I did fail a bit at that, but still, it's pretty short. Thus, I chose a pairing that in my mind needs zero set up. :D



TASTE

by Snegurochka

*


Sirius is already on his knees by the time Remus gets the hint and slides up the bed, wiping his mouth with the back of two fingers after trading slow, melting kisses with Sirius amidst the messy bedspread and overturned stacks of books. They're still in their uniforms, ties tugged loose and shirts untucked but still clothed, dammit, and Sirius needs that to change right bloody now.

"Is this why you were acting so weird at dinner?" says Remus, biting his lip over a grin. He leans against the headboard and slowly opens his trousers, his fingers sliding the zip down and unbuttoning the top. He grips each side of the placket, his eyes on Sirius.

"Weird?" Sirius is smoothing his hands over his thighs where he's kneeling, the coarse fabric of his trousers buzzing against his damp palms. He can't take his eyes off Remus's hands.

Remus pauses in what he's doing. "Padfoot. You were salivating."

Sirius knows he should have some smart retort, but he honestly can't care. He can barely keep the basics of this conversation straight. Why are they even having a conversation right now? The kissing was soft and deep and made his blood sear almost instantly, Remus's fingers tangled in his hair and his thumbs pressing at Sirius's jaw. Now he wants to talk about dinner? "Moony," he growls, "I'm going to actually slaughter you if you don't get your trousers off, like, yesterday."

There's that grin. Making Remus grin is usually Sirius's mission in life: that slow, subtle curve of his lips that he always tries to hide, preferring to look stern or responsible or whatever. Seeing that grin, being the one who made his face light up like that, always makes Sirius even more eager to pull Remus on top of him and spread his legs. Today, it hit him like a Bludger in the middle of History of Magic, that sudden, burning desire to feel Remus's cock in his mouth.

That was four bloody hours ago. They haven't had a second to themselves since, and Sirius hasn't been able to focus on anything else.

"What's got you so eager?" says Remus softly, but he's shoving his trousers and pants down his hips, so Sirius doesn't care; he can talk as much as he wants now. Remus is already flushed, ducking his head down the way he does when things get heated like this. They've been doing it for six months already, hiding behind bed curtains to press into each other, panting breaths and low moans spilling out over their skin until they both come in a rush, clinging to each other and whispering words that still make them blush.

Sirius crawls forward, helping Remus tug his trousers down over his hips and then leaning forward, unbuttoning Remus's shirt and shoving it aside to let his lips brush Remus's chest. "Just... you." The words come out breathless. He can't explain it any better than that, but Remus seems to understand. He curls his fingers in Sirius's hair again, drawing his mouth down to his chest and stomach.

"Oh," he breathes when Sirius's teeth catch on his nipple. "Okay."

Sirius moves down Remus's body, pushing his shirt out of the way and curling his fingers in the edges of Remus's trousers where they're sitting at his hips. His prick is swollen and dark, stretching up towards his navel, his balls barely free of his pants. Sirius touches Remus's sac, the dusting of hair there light against the pad of his thumb. It makes Remus's thighs tense and his breath hitch. Sirius's mouth really is watering, cliché and all.

Of all the things they've done, this is what he loves most – feeling Remus's full, gorgeous prick press between his lips, filling his mouth and earning the most delicious moans from Remus. He runs his fingers over Remus's shaft now, a light touch that makes it get even harder right before Sirius's eyes, and Remus's stomach muscles clench. "Padfoot," he breathes. His fingers skim over Sirius's cheek and into his hair, pressing him down with a slight bit of pressure.

Sirius groans. They've never talked about it, but Remus knows: Sirius loves taking direction like that, having Remus push his head down until his lips are stretching around Remus's cock. He obeys without question, letting his nose slide down Remus's stomach as his fingers move up his abdomen. He clasps the base of Remus's cock between his thumb and two fingers as his mouth moves down the shaft, inhaling deeply and just letting the soft skin, and the hardness underneath, touch Sirius's lips. He presses a few soft, open kisses up Remus's shaft, his fingers pressing in a circle at the base, until Remus is breathing a bit harder.

Sirius raises his head. Remus is watching him, his eyes heavy lidded and his lips wet. Holding Remus's gaze, Sirius lets the tip of his tongue peek out, tasting the head of Remus's cock. He's already wet with fluid, and it seeps onto Sirius's tongue in a burst of sensation. "Oh, Padfoot," Remus whispers. "Oh God."

But Remus can hardly play the seduced young innocent, because his fingers are still tangled in Sirius's hair and they push again, trying to get his mouth to do more.

Grinning, Sirius can't help but oblige. His tongue still touching the tip of Remus's cock, Sirius opens his mouth further and takes in the head. Remus's hips arch up immediately, his head thunking against the headboard. Sirius groans at the sensation, his mouth stretching wide to let Remus push in further. His lips slide down slowly, so slowly, pausing to retreat back up and use his tongue to press against the underside of Remus's cock. Remus is big, Merlin. Not that Sirius has a lot of experience with these things, but he has enough, and he knows that getting a cock like Remus's into his mouth is a feat to be proud of.

He loves how heavy and thick it feels on his tongue, the way his jaw has to adjust to accommodate it. His fingers fall away from the base and instead press against Remus's balls, massaging lightly as his mouth works further over Remus's rigid cock. He slides back up for a breath, resting the head of Remus's prick against his lips for a second. "You're so hard," he can't help but murmur, almost choking on the words, because that always fills him with wonder. This is what gets Remus so hard, the very thought of pushing into Sirius's mouth like this and thrusting, fucking, coming. Sirius's head swims.

"Yeah," is all Remus can say, his voice breathless, and then Sirius is moving faster, parting his lips again and going deeper.

His hand curls into a fist at the base of Remus's prick, squeezing each time his mouth reaches the top again. He plunges back down as far as he can go, his tongue working steadily against the underside of Remus's shaft, curling over the head each time he comes up. He can't even imagine what he must look like, kneeling between Remus's thighs and going down on him like his cock is made of honey or something, but he can't even give a fuck. This is his own private version of heaven, hearing Remus make those noises from watching him, feeling Remus's prick thicken even further in his mouth.

"Oh," Remus breathes. "Oh. Oh. You're– I have to–"

It's not like Sirius needs the warning. He knows Remus's body inside and out by now, and he knows exactly how it feels right before Remus comes. His thighs stiffen and his stomach clenches. The fingers that had been tight in Sirius's hair flatten out. And his prick swells in ways Sirius wouldn't have thought possible had he not felt it himself in his mouth. Remus's body tells him it's going to happen, a thick pulse widening his shaft even before Sirius can taste semen.

Sirius curls his fist around the base and pumps hard, his mouth closing over the head of Remus's prick as Remus begins to come. His breath catches in an adorable, sexy gasp, and Sirius almost wants to raise his head to watch Remus's face right now, but he doesn't dare. Warm, thick fluid pulses into Sirius's mouth. He knows he could pull off and finish Remus in his hand; he's done that before – but only when he's feeling too shy to admit how much he loves the taste of Remus's come on his tongue. Tonight, he's not feeling shy about that at all.

He arches his neck to meet Remus's gaze, his mouth still sealed around Remus's prick. Remus is a wreck – his hair is mussed, his face is pink, and his dry lips are parted as he pulls in heaving breaths.

"Padfoot," he sobs, closing his eyes and arching his head back. Sirius swallows the first few pulses, his blood hot and his senses flipping in excitement at the act. He loves doing anything that makes him feel dirty, and swallowing another boy's come is all that and so much more.

One swallow isn't enough, though, because Remus is still filling his mouth, another pulse coating Sirius's tongue. He pulls off to breathe, almost accidentally, and it spills over his lips. He keeps his mouth close to Remus's slit, his fist moving up Remus's shaft and his thumb swiping through the mess. He licks his lips and swallows again, his mouth still hot against Remus's prick. When he looks up again, Remus is watching him carefully, his chest heaving and his eyes dark. He's looking at how filthy Sirius has let himself get; Sirius knows he is. So Sirius pushes the head of Remus's softening prick over his lips again, parting them and letting his tongue slip out to taste. He closes his mouth lightly and sucks, one last time, another drop of come sliding down his throat.

Then Remus is all over him, cursing and panting and hauling him forward. Remus frames his face with his hands and kisses him hard, his mouth insistent against Sirius's as he tastes himself on Sirius's tongue. "Come here, God, you're so– I just–"

Sirius pours everything he can into that kiss, everything that makes him feel so close to Remus when they do this. He breaks the kiss at last, grinning against Remus's mouth as he works himself further up the bed. When he's straddling Remus's chest, he bends to give him one more kiss, pulling away slowly and rising to his knees. Remus gives him a hungry look, even though his ears are pink with shyness. Without saying a word, Sirius unzips his own trousers, pulling his pants down over his balls. He can't believe he hasn't come yet just from the sensation of feeling Remus in his mouth like that, but he hasn't. He's been waiting.

Because as much as he loves the feeling of a cock in his mouth and come on his tongue, he knows Remus loves it even more. He circles the base of his prick with one hand in front of Remus's face, watching Remus lick his lips.

Then he pushes forward.


-fin-




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Comments 
5th November 2011 00:40
Whatever you write is brilliant. I'm always amazed to read your stories, so full of freedom, characterisation, plot, language.
I never dared to comment your fics before, but if you went out of your confort zone with this fic, I thought I might do the same and express my respect.
And this fic is great, as usual, no sign of having a territory you normally don't like. (Btw, you hide it well, never noticed you intentionally avoid BJs, you are too good in the plots to ever miss it.) I love how natural, free, caring and genuinly young your boys are. And all emotions expressed through BJs? It works :) Cute and hot.
It was a great read.
5th November 2011 03:28
*This* is a fabulous comment. Yes, so much yes.
5th November 2011 03:57
Oh gosh, that's a terribly generous comment for a little bit of BJ porn. :) Thanks so much for coming out of lurkerdom! I really appreciate it. Hee, I'm glad you haven't noticed a glaring absence of blow jobs in my stories before. *hides it well* :D I haven't written this pairing in yonks, so it was great fun to revisit my original OTP boys. :)

♥♥♥
5th November 2011 03:27
Unff. Major unff.

Omg seriously. and I cracked up at your notes, including the reason for your 'stretching' yourself. Still LOLing at that one, and I halfway agree with you, actually.
5th November 2011 03:58
Wheee, thank you! IDK if I'm the only slash writer in the world who never writes blow jobs or what, but just, uggggh. :) Good thing Sirius disagrees...
5th November 2011 03:46
've never noticed you avoided writing BJs in fics, and from the way you wrote this I couldn't tell you don't like them! This is fabulous and, well, delicious. Truly, it made my mouth water (shuts up now before it gets a bit TMI-y).
Suffice to say, great job! :)
5th November 2011 04:01
LOL, thank you! I had to stop and gag a few times, ngl. But I'm glad it worked overall! :D
5th November 2011 14:59
I am another who has never noticed a lack of BJs in you fics, though I know you don't like them. (Still thinks of Fleur's line, "That's men's work.") I find I like the idea of them, as I do with a lot of fictional smexing, when there are no bad smells, bad tastes, ugly looking things, or mess.

As to this fic? Lol - it's great! Sirius' desperation comes across so well, as does their genuine affection for each other. And, it's hot!

I also marvel, once again, at how well you use words. You have an enviable ability to paint vivid, complete pictures with so few words. The first sentence, honestly, I paused after it and shook my head at how perfect it is. The small details that give us such a clear picture of not just the setting but the mood.
6th November 2011 23:03
Hee, I always think of that line of Fleur's, too! That was why she said it! *cackle* Character chanelling author there, for sure. :) I guess I don't mind reading about them, sometimes, but I hate writing them. I especially hate them in het for some reason, but slash is slightly better. It IS men's work, after all, la.

Anyway, thank you!! I'm glad you liked this! :)
8th November 2011 12:10
Could you direct me to that fic with Fleur? *is curious*
10th November 2011 12:35
Oh! Haha, sure:

On the Proper Appreciation and Manipulation of Pricks, by Fleur Delacour, Tri-Wizard Champion (Snape/Lupin/Bill/[Fleur], NC-17). Specifically:

So, okay, I wanted cock, and Bill wanted cock, and let us be honest here: it was not the first time we had done a thing like this. We are both young and healthy people, after all. It is not natural to stay at home, not to be curious! My husband is very curious, and it is something he likes, that I watch him with other people.

Well, don't look at me like that. You think I am abused, then? That my husband forces this on me? The French do not do anything that is not our idea first! I make him think it is his idea, you know. Men like to think this. But I am the one who puts the ideas in his head. Here, I will tell you a secret: I tell him things when we are together, when he is on his back, sweaty and panting and hard for me. I tell him about the things that I want to see him do – with men, with women, it does not matter. I tell him this, with my hair so beautiful over his chest and my mouth –

Oh, no. No, no, no. Not there. My God. Sucking cock is men's work. This is my opinion. My mouth is beautiful. Come here, look at my lips! They are soft and luscious. I do not put them near anything that will strain them like that. Besides, his cock is better suited for other body parts, do you not agree?

Anyway. My hair falls over his chest and my mouth is soft against his neck, telling things to him that make him come. I tell him I want to watch him fuck a man's mouth. I tell him I want him on his hands and knees with a cock buried inside him. I tell him I want to see him push up inside another man while his eyes are on me, fucking me in his mind while his body fucks someone else.

What? You do not have fantasies like this? I do not believe you! They are natural to have! We tried to behave, after our wedding: no sex with other people for a full month! But at this time, we were both beginning to want it again. It was something we did together, to enjoy. So what?
10th November 2011 12:54
Thanks! Off to read the whole fic ;)
5th November 2011 18:27
Well, speaking as someone who has no objections to the act, I couldn't tell this was a squick for you at all, well done, gagging all the way or not!
6th November 2011 23:04
Ahaha, yay, thank you! If I can please you BJ ladies, then I'm happy. ;)
6th November 2011 04:00
No, no, no NOT Fin.
*Lays on floor and throws temper tantrum*
<3
6th November 2011 23:05
Ahaha, sorry! The next bit is that... Remus also goes down on Sirius. *nod* It was hard enough to write once; I couldn't do two. ;) Glad you enjoyed!
6th November 2011 04:30
Very sexy, and it's a treat to get this pairing from you. I hadn't ever noticed the lack of BJs in your fic, but I can understand the reasoning now! You've done a fantastic job making it sound sexy here, though, and from reading it I would never have guessed, so bravo!
6th November 2011 23:06
Thank you! This is my original OTP, but I find I don't have plotty ideas in my head about them anymore. They're great for a quick PWP, though. ;) I'm glad this came across well. I really do hate BJs. Sirius, fortunately, vehemently disagrees with me. :)
7th November 2011 01:23
Different from your usual, but spectacular all the same!
7th November 2011 13:51
Thank you! Different, really? Besides the BJ, I thought it was kind of standard for me. :) I'm glad you liked it, though!
7th November 2011 19:11
I think different b/c it kind of went right into it, as opposed to the slower build-up you usually employ, ya know?
7th November 2011 20:46
Ah, okay! Good, then -- I was trying to see if I could do straight-up PWP without preamble, since usually I cannot. lol. ♥
7th November 2011 20:50
I may or may not have started reading, then gone back to double check the author *whistles*
7th November 2011 03:22
Heh. I don't know as I'd ever noticed a lack of blowjobs in your fic either... there's certainly always plenty of fantastic smut of one sort or another anyhow (in the DDs that is - not all your fic is totally smut-focused after all). But this was a yummy one. *coughs* And no, no setup needed for this pair!
7th November 2011 20:46
Thank you! Hee, yeah, I hoped R/S would be kind of enough for PWP. ;)
7th November 2011 17:43
Hee, I'm another that hadn't noticed the absence of that particular act, nor felt it's lack (for all that I like the things). This was lovely, the boys <3. Though, given the A/N, there was a point where I wondered if Sirius' talking about how he loved XYZ was taken out of your head with "love" swapped from "hate" ;).
7th November 2011 20:48
Ahaha, whoops. Maybe there is a bit too much eagerness, trying to mask something for the author? :) And now I wonder if it would be read completely differently had I left off those notes, whereas now readers are going into it expecting to gag a little bit. :/

But thank you! I think writing (and maybe drawing?) "hot" sex scenes really does require the creator to think they're hot. La.
7th November 2011 19:13
My original OTP too! Ooh I loved this, the emotion laced throughout, the hunger... UNF. that little moment if Remus directing Sirius made my brain short circuit, esp. because they don't acknowledge it out loud. Fucking hot. Thanks for this fic!!
10th November 2011 12:40
Whee, thank you! I haven't written these two -- or even Remus, come to think, who I used to write all the damn time -- in ages, so they were fun to revisit. Remus being just a little bit Dom, in his very quiet way, is the fanon that brought me to HP fandom back in the day. Nnnnnrg. Glad it worked for you! :D
7th November 2011 20:20
Reading this, I would never know blowjobs were a stretch for you. Extraordinarily HOT. PERFECT EVEN.

<3<3<3
10th November 2011 12:41
Oh good, thank you! I'm sure the Notes up there affect the reading of it, which is bad. Heh. Now I have readers gagging right along with me. But I'm glad it worked for you!
8th November 2011 19:15
Ahaha, someone else who hates BJs! *high-fives you* Although, strangely, I don't mind writing or reading them at all. RL ones, however...no love. Damned overactive gag reflex...

ANYWAY, this was sizzling hot, and I loved how much they loved it, even though it's not particularly my thing. (Cunnilingus, however, is very much my thing. I have yet to write a het fic without Harry giving someone head. *g*)

Wonderful job, dear! Way to get out of your comfort zone!
10th November 2011 12:46
Ugh, hate the very thought, including writing them. Reading I can do sometimes, but I usually skim. Art I can do, though. There's some really hot fellatio art in HP after all. :) I guess I'm more interested (for fic, too) with what it does to the person receiving than how it tastes for the person doing. :/

Like, this is one of my fave pieces of art ever, and it doesn't even really show the act. But the look on Ron's FACE is so epic, I can hardly deal: Fellatio by [info]ericahpfa (Harry/Ron, NWS)

La, anyway, thank you! (and also: *eyes roll back* Yay to Harry giving women head. That IS hot, no matter what). :)
10th November 2011 05:11
Oh, oh, yes. Sirius wanting Remus so bad he's, you know, gagging for it is my favorite thing ever, yes? The little nod to dom!Remus, yes! Everything you write is sexy and this is so, so hot. What makes this hotter than hell is how much they want each other.

LOL, and when I saw your notes, I also immediately thought of Fleur because I agree with her.
6th December 2011 00:39
Eee, thank you! :) Ungh, yes, super strong desire between these two is what makes the pairing so awesome. I'm glad you liked! And ahaha, yes, poor Fleur. ;)
19th November 2011 17:03
Mmmm. Mmmmmmmm. See, you can make anything hot. ;-) Remus pushing him a little (because Sirius likes it) is the most delicious part.
6th December 2011 00:38
You just reminded me I had unanswered comments here! I think I had you in mind for this, when I decided to do BJ porn as the "stretch yourself" thing but needed a pairing. R/S porn, la! Now everyone else go write more. :)
6th December 2011 03:14
I think I had you in mind for this

*tickled pink*
31st August 2013 17:56
Oh, bloody hell, so hot.
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