Oh wow! I'm so sorry I didn't comment earlier. I just saw that I had a new gift!
You have captured them wonderfully-- the banter, the way they play, the cuteness that is them when put together-- and the wit!
One sudden gust of wind and the two usually responsible adults were left completely starkers and frozen. Tonks was the first to notice. And the first to shriek. But Charlie wasn't far behind her - with the shrieking that is. The extremities that might immediately become frost bitten were rather dear to him.
This paragraph alone left me grinning so widely.
And the sex, even arguing during (so them!), so hot!
You have captured them wonderfully-- the banter, the way they play, the cuteness that is them when put together-- and the wit!
One sudden gust of wind and the two usually responsible adults were left completely starkers and frozen. Tonks was the first to notice. And the first to shriek. But Charlie wasn't far behind her - with the shrieking that is. The extremities that might immediately become frost bitten were rather dear to him.
This paragraph alone left me grinning so widely.
And the sex, even arguing during (so them!), so hot!
Thank you so much, Mystery Author!