I really like the way you write. This reminded me of Valis2's The Pond. How creepy and fascinating, the idea of being suspended in a medium, with your mind fully intact--sort of my idea of hell. And what Snape chose in the end...woah. No delusions of 'I'm free to live my life now' here.
Don't think Donne would mind; he had a healthy appreciation for the world, the devil, and the goodness of fleshly pleasures, in particular. :
Don't think Donne would mind; he had a healthy appreciation for the world, the devil, and the goodness of fleshly pleasures, in particular. :