Oh, boy, *fans*. That was hot! And you really had me with the PoV, because it felt *so* like Snape's own fantasy at first, and then I was so totally sucked in by the action that I forget about it altogether until the end ;). You go, Charlie! I love your imagination :D.
The Snape/Black dynamics were fantastic, and I loved the stuttering revisions of fantasy at the beginning. That, and the imagery was just amazing - I could picture them both so vividly. Loved a lot of the little touches - the manacles and why they wouldn't do after Azkaban, for example, and the incoherent last paragraph before the PoV becomes clear. Amazing writing, and a great way of building up suspense. And, yes, omg, hot!
The Snape/Black dynamics were fantastic, and I loved the stuttering revisions of fantasy at the beginning. That, and the imagery was just amazing - I could picture them both so vividly. Loved a lot of the little touches - the manacles and why they wouldn't do after Azkaban, for example, and the incoherent last paragraph before the PoV becomes clear. Amazing writing, and a great way of building up suspense. And, yes, omg, hot!