Well done, darlin'! You've written a short fic about the character I can't stand and made it really enjoyable for me!
This was so realistic in its grubby guiltiness. I loved the way that things progress, almost as though he can't help himself, even though he knows how hollow his excuses sound. The complicated relationship he has with his wife is perfect, too.
You've written a short fic about the character I can't stand and made it really enjoyable for me!
This was so realistic in its grubby guiltiness. I loved the way that things progress, almost as though he can't help himself, even though he knows how hollow his excuses sound. The complicated relationship he has with his wife is perfect, too.
And a fabulous last line!