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Shelly ([info]shellydkitty) wrote in [info]daily_deviant,
@ 2008-07-28 10:26:00

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Entry tags:*fic, 2008-07, author: shellydkitty, character: draco, character: harry, content: anal, content: blowjobs, theme: fornicatory dolls

Fic: Take Me Down (Draco/Doll, Harry/Draco; NC-17)
Title: Take Me Down
Author: [info]shellydkitty
Characters: Draco/doll, Harry/Draco
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: see theme ;)
Themes/kinks chosen: Fornicatory dolls
Word Count: 1,125
Summary: For one single moment, Draco could pretend that this was real.
Author's notes: This is my first piece for Daily Deviant, and I'm very excited about it. Thanks so much to the mods for inviting me! And special thanks to [info]lilithilien for providing the much needed beta, though all mistakes, as always, remain my own.


It wasn't that Draco couldn't pull a bloke. His sex life was more than ample, if he did say so himself, and he regularly shagged his share of tall, dark and handsome. Or he had done—still could in fact, if he wanted to—if he hadn't realised more than a month ago that every man he brought home had black hair or green eyes. Or worse, there was that time when the bloke had had both, and Draco had scrunched his fingers into that hair to pull the strands in every direction like a hedgehog, then fucked him raw while calling out Potter's name.

But that wasn't the worst of it—wasn't his low point. Oh no, that was now. Inking out a lighting bolt scar with a red marker across a plastic 'fuck-me' doll's forehead was definitely rock bottom.

Merlin, wouldn't someone have some compassion and Obliviate him already?

Draco stared hard into the plastic doll's face. Spelled green eyes met his, flat and vacant, and a tuft of black hair fell over the painted-on scar. The wig was an extra touch as well, affixed to the doll's head with a sticking charm that would hold no matter how hard Draco tugged on the strands. And then there was the doll's mouth, a perfect round hole made for a cock—his cock—and already warm and slick with lube, gagging for it.

"Cock whore," Draco muttered, and he pushed the doll down to his groin.

Draco's fingers flexed in the wig's course hair and he teased himself, stretching those plastic lips just around the head of his cock. He rolled his hips once, letting the lips catch on the crown, then pushed all the way inside as he closed his eyes, drawing forth the memory of the real thing.

It had only happened once, six months ago at the Leaky Cauldron. Potter was full of firewhisky and bravado that night—his stag night, of course, last bit of freedom before bonding with the ickle Weaselette. Draco couldn't remember why he hadn't left as soon as the group had come in, but he'd stayed at his corner table in the shadows, trying not to watch as Potter's friends plied him with more and more alcohol, clasping his shoulder in turns, congratulating him on his perfect match. Draco was sure Potter hadn't noticed him, but he'd been wrong. While his best mate and future brother in-law ordered another round, Potter followed Draco into the loo, shoved him against the grimy stall, and sank to his knees to pull Draco's cock out of his robes before Draco could even take a breath.

It wasn't the same—it couldn't be the same; Potter's hair was so soft, no matter how prickly it looked, and it didn't matter how many warming charms or how much lube Draco spelled into the doll, nothing could replace the fire of Potter's mouth, his tongue gliding over Draco's shaft as he sucked Draco in, his fumbling fingers tugging on Draco's balls. Potter couldn't hide his inexperience, but he'd been eager, working Draco with his mouth, in and out, in and out, until Draco's cock had swelled large enough to choke. Potter hadn't even slowed to catch his breath. He'd wrapped his fingers around the neglected length and rubbed and sucked and swirled…

"Stupid wanker," Draco hissed, shoving his cock inside the plastic mouth again. He looked down into dull green eyes, but he saw Potter's instead, his gaze locked into Draco's like a lion stalking his prey. Draco twisted his fingers into the wig and mashed the face into his crotch, holding back the groans he hadn't been able to that night.

He'd tried, Merlin knew he'd tried. He bit his lip until he tasted blood and still couldn't stop the needy whine hissed through his teeth. He yanked on Potter's hair in retaliation, but that only spurred Potter on, and he swallowed Draco whole, the head of Draco's cock bumping the back of his throat with every thrust. Draco flooded his mouth in an embarrassingly short amount of time, and sagged against the wall, panting.

By the time Draco had opened his eyes, Potter had disappeared.

"Fuck-" Draco jerked the doll off his cock and it flew across the bedroom, landing in an ungainly heap at the foot of his wardrobe, arse in the air. And there was another hole for Draco, willing and ready to be filled. But Draco had never had the chance for that, had he? Potter had left without a word and married the ginger twat the next day as if he hadn't spent his stag night with his mouth full of cock.

Draco stomped over to the doll and grabbed it by a lock of its hair and threw it back toward the bed. He mashed the face into the mattress and gripped the rubbery hip, lined the head of his cock up with the hole, then slammed inside. Potter's wife couldn't give him this, couldn't give him a cock so far up his arse that he saw stars. Potter didn't know how good this could feel—couldn't know; he hadn't given Draco his turn. Draco would have shown him, right there in that grubby stall. Draco would have bent him over and stretched him with slick fingers and maybe even his tongue until Potter was close, so close, until he was begging for Draco to fuck him, now, please and only when Potter was completely undone and shaking with need would Draco show mercy and slide inside.

And then Draco would pound him into the wall, hard and fast, and Potter would plead for more still; he'd moan and scream and shout Draco's name so loud that everyone in that pub would hear—everyone would know, and Draco would wrap his fist around Potter's cock and bring him off in a few short strokes. Potter would spray over the stall as Draco rocked into him again and again until he was coming too, his cock pulsing inside Potter's tight heat-

Draco squeezed his eyes shut; his fingers dug into the doll's hips and he thrust once more inside, crying out, and he was coming hard. His orgasm rushed over him in a hot flush, and for a moment, one single moment, he could pretend that this was real.

But it wasn't.

Draco flopped over on the bed and rolled to his back to stare up at the ceiling. He tried to catch his breath; his cheeks felt sunburned and his eyes stung, but that was just physical—just over-exertion; nothing to be concerned about.

And it didn't matter that when he came he cried Harry's name. Not Potter; Harry.

No, that didn't matter at all.



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[info]angela_snape
2008-07-28 09:44 am UTC (link)
Potter had left without a word and married the ginger twat the next day as if he hadn't spent his stag night with his mouth full of cock.

Great line... and I love Draco here. Someone Obliviate the poor boy, already!

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[info]shellydkitty
2008-07-28 12:54 pm UTC (link)
Thank you! :D

Poor Draco--I think he might beg for a memory charm right about now.

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[info]snegurochka_lee
2008-07-28 09:45 am UTC (link)
Oh, a;skljga;lsg. GOD. What a fantastic scenario. I loved Draco's desire at the beginning, but then to learn it was based on that one real encounter, mmmmmmmmf. Awesome. Also, bathroom-stall!sex ftw, seriously, and Harry just quietly following him to the loo at his own bloody bachelor party?? *dead of hot* Also also, Draco/doll non-con, sorta? ;alskjg again. Totally, totally loved this.

Welcome to the comm!

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[info]shellydkitty
2008-07-28 12:56 pm UTC (link)
Oh yay! I don't think I've ever inspired keyboard mashing before--thank you so much!

:D I'm excited to me here, thank you.

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[info]shellydkitty
2008-07-28 01:03 pm UTC (link)
err that is to be here, not to me here--since that doesn't make any sense at all. *facepalm*

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[info]kabal42
2008-07-28 11:04 am UTC (link)
Wow, great job! Goodness. So hot and frustrated and full of anger and desire. Perfect. I do hope he gets his turn with Harry - and vice versa.

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[info]shellydkitty
2008-07-28 12:58 pm UTC (link)
Thank you! I'm so glad you liked. :D

Yes, in my mind the story continues with Harry showing up at Draco's door and they shag like bunnies...and well, yes, things go from there. ;)

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[info]alisanne
2008-07-28 11:38 am UTC (link)
Damn.

*weeps for Draco*

Brilliant premise and execution. GuH!

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[info]shellydkitty
2008-07-28 12:59 pm UTC (link)
I know! Poor Draco. :/

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed. :D

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[info]goddessriss
2008-07-28 12:34 pm UTC (link)
Wonderful! So hot. I love your Draco hugely.

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[info]shellydkitty
2008-07-28 01:01 pm UTC (link)
Thank you! *hugs* I'm glad you liked this Draco--I know how you feel about him. ;)

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[info]goddessriss
2008-07-28 01:28 pm UTC (link)
Hehe..I think the world knows how I feel about him! Seriously, though, this one's delicious. *tackle hugs you*

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[info]shadowess
2008-07-28 02:01 pm UTC (link)
oh this was very hot. I love Draco's obsession and his rage at the feeling. Poor boy, someone write this boy a sequel where Harry gets cold feet and shows up on Draco's doorstep...please =)

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[info]shellydkitty
2008-07-28 06:50 pm UTC (link)
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! And yes, in my personal opinion, of course Harry's just as obsessed and will be showing up at any moment.

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[info]ships_harry
2008-07-28 02:20 pm UTC (link)
YUM YAY LSKDFJLKSDF:LJK"L!

Oh man. I was all over the fantasy, with the sorta grubby desperation, but the memory... nice. I've such a weakness for the aggressive blow-job :D. And fngh, the fucking of the doll with that internal narrative of what Draco would *like* to do to Harry - such yum.

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[info]shellydkitty
2008-07-28 06:52 pm UTC (link)
Yay! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I had fun torturing the poor boy. :D

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[info]whitestar
2008-07-28 02:22 pm UTC (link)
Poor Draco! He has it bad. It's not too late. Harry's only been married 6 months. Maybe he'll realize he made a mistake and he can return to Draco. Any chance of a sequel? ^_^ Great job :)

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[info]shellydkitty
2008-07-28 06:54 pm UTC (link)
Yeah, Draco's just a tad bit obsessed, isn't he? ;) I don't know about a sequel, but my personal opinion is that of course Harry gets his act together and shows up at Draco's door. :D I'm glad you liked it!

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[info]eeyore9990
2008-07-28 03:03 pm UTC (link)
Ah, this is fantastic! Angsty and hot and brutal and just perfect! I love it!

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[info]shellydkitty
2008-07-28 06:54 pm UTC (link)
Yay! Thank you! I'm so glad you liked. :D

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[info]lotrwariorgodss
2008-07-28 03:38 pm UTC (link)
Poor Draco! At least he had that one night to remember his Harry by. And his doll, of course, lol. But seriously, someone really should Obliviate him *sniff*.

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[info]shellydkitty
2008-07-28 06:56 pm UTC (link)
Yes, poor Draco and that poor abused doll! I did have fun torturing him though.

Thanks for reading! :D

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[info]secretsolitaire
2008-07-28 05:04 pm UTC (link)
Oh, yes. Hot and angsty and delicious.

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[info]shellydkitty
2008-07-28 06:57 pm UTC (link)
Thank you! Glad you liked. :D

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[info]andreth_47
2008-07-28 06:52 pm UTC (link)
Oh. My. God. This is brilliant!

You did it, you combined all the things I read fanfic for: a hilarious sense of fun, self-irony, in-character depth, hot hot smut, bathroom wall sex, oh: and real true emotional connection to the character.

And all in a thousand words. You rule.

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[info]shellydkitty
2008-07-28 07:00 pm UTC (link)
Oh thank you, hon! You're making me blush. :D I'm so glad you read and enjoyed this!

and GUH, that icon *pants*

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[info]jennybliss
2008-07-28 07:11 pm UTC (link)
Oh poor Draco. *hugs him, then hits Harry over the head with a club*

Why would Harry want to marry that ginger twat? She is not as hot as Draco.

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[info]shellydkitty
2008-07-28 09:37 pm UTC (link)
Clearly Harry's completely mental! ;)

Thanks so much for reading! :D

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[info]lilithilien
2008-07-28 11:55 pm UTC (link)
I adore this story. You know, I think you write twisted obsession better than anybody around. It makes me both love and fear you.

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[info]shellydkitty
2008-07-29 12:19 pm UTC (link)
Ack! Thank you...I think? ;)

I'm so glad you liked it--I was pretty nervous about the whole thing, and thank you so much for beta-ing it for me! *hugs* you aren't scared of my hugs, are you?

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[info]melusinahp
2008-07-29 10:19 am UTC (link)
*lower lip trembles*

Poor Draco.

This was gorgeous.

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[info]shellydkitty
2008-07-29 12:20 pm UTC (link)
I know--I feel pretty horrible for Draco, myself.

Thank you! :D

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[info]bonfoi
2008-07-29 02:25 pm UTC (link)
Oh, I could weep for Draco.

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[info]shellydkitty
2008-07-30 11:56 am UTC (link)
I know, poor Draco. :/

Thank you for reading! :D

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[info]iulia_linnea
2008-07-30 12:51 am UTC (link)
You've made me ache for Draco—and worry for Harry, a bit. ;) It's a good kind of disturbed.

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[info]shellydkitty
2008-07-30 11:57 am UTC (link)
Haha! Well, I'm glad it's the good kind and not the bad kind. ;)

Thank you for reading! :D

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[info]inamac
2008-07-30 03:50 am UTC (link)
Oh, that was so sad. And so real. Wants to cuddle poor Draco (and hit cock-tease Harry).

Beautifully written too - killer last paras.

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[info]shellydkitty
2008-07-30 12:00 pm UTC (link)
I'm sure Draco could use some cuddling, not that he'd admit it. ;)

Thank you! :D

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[info]celandineb
2008-07-31 05:58 pm UTC (link)
*sniffles* *pets Draco* I really enjoyed how you portrayed his obsession here!

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[info]shellydkitty
2008-07-31 07:07 pm UTC (link)
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. :D

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[info]iamisaac
2008-08-01 12:19 pm UTC (link)
Oh, this is fucking marvellous. And hotter than hotter than hot.

And a Draco who IS Draco, who has all of Draco's arrogant Slytherinness but is human and vulnerable and...

Bloody Potter. Doesn't know what's good for him.

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[info]shellydkitty
2008-08-01 04:14 pm UTC (link)
Thank you so much! :D

Harry needs a good slap to the head, definitely.

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[info]twilightsorcery
2008-08-01 05:25 pm UTC (link)
Oh, Draco!

This was fantastic! *loves*

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[info]shellydkitty
2008-08-01 08:12 pm UTC (link)
Thank you, hon! :D

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[info]dbassassin
2008-08-01 08:41 pm UTC (link)
Oh ho, canon Draco! Angry and jealous and completely at a loss how to cope in any way other than to lash out.

This is lovely and a very, very believable scenario for these two. And desperate!aggressive!Harry? Yum!

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