First of all, I have to tell you that you're my SS/SB-hero!^^ This totally unexpected kind-of-tenderness, sort-of-caring for Severus saved the fic from becoming too violent, too hard, for me.
I *loved* the Sirius/Regulus hints, and Regulus' mark on Severus' arm!*.*
All the characters were perfectly IC, some of the things Sirius and James said made the bile rise in my throat (just like their comments in the HP-books did^^), the careless, cheerful way James was playing with Sev's health (and/or life, considering they had no idea what was in that bottle!) was so perfect (though it made me want to shake some sense into him, of course^^). And Remus - cowardly, unforgivably passive Remus - what he said to James, encouraging the rape, shocked me, but in a "good" way, because I thought "Yes, of course!"... somehow, it is so like him to stand aside and watch and *enjoy* the bloody show without getting his own hands dirty. ...You reminded me of why exactly I was so digusted with him when I read the books.
Beside all this, I have to say that holy shit!, the sex was so wrong and *hot* and oh so well-written; you managed to give me this orgy-feeling, where you're not certain whose mouth and hands are where and you don't care either because the only thing that counts is the pleasure... or so.^^
And the double penetration... wow. I don't think I have ever read it like this, from the perspective of one of the penetrators and so detailed... I mean, I could almost feel James' cock pressing in next to mine - and I don't even have one!^.^
I should tell you something about your wonderful writing style and how you took my breath away with the first few sentences, and to be honest I could write on and on for hours, but my mother is annoying me with her questions about my internet habits being, perhaps, a bit exessive... blah, blah...
Just know that this is a fabulous story that made me think and that will most probably be on my mind for a long time. Thank you!
Bye, prayer:-*