Well look! It's the friendly neighborhood pr0n writer. *g* We should have a wanking contest in our room at Terminus.
The tone you manage to strike in your fics impresses me. It's suitably entertaining and reads almost cracky but it seems realistic and completely serious at the same time. I empathize with Harry (having fallen for my best friends all the time) and feel the emotional component. I think it's largely your tone and voice--you seem aware of yourself as a writer and it makes your stories stronger and convincing. *nods* (Who said feedback on PWPs couldn't be constructive? *g*) I also love Harry's stuttering, panicked narrative. :D
The sort of thing that – that - ruins lives and blights existences, Harry thought.
The odds were on his side, surely?
*smirks* Never, Harry. Never.
But this scenario is genius to play out the kink. The casual setting, the more intense feelings (forbidden in both slashiness and fancying your mate), and voyeurism. Ngggghh. And I love, also, that you take your time. Harry's panic is almost foreplay. And the bypassing of the blowjob for rimming...gah.
Yay, and I'm glad it ended on a non-platonic note.
We should have a wanking contest in our room at Terminus.The tone you manage to strike in your fics impresses me. It's suitably entertaining and reads almost cracky but it seems realistic and completely serious at the same time. I empathize with Harry (having fallen for my best friends all the time) and feel the emotional component. I think it's largely your tone and voice--you seem aware of yourself as a writer and it makes your stories stronger and convincing. *nods* (Who said feedback on PWPs couldn't be constructive? *g*) I also love Harry's stuttering, panicked narrative. :D
The sort of thing that – that - ruins lives and blights existences, Harry thought.
The odds were on his side, surely?
*smirks* Never, Harry. Never.
But this scenario is genius to play out the kink. The casual setting, the more intense feelings (forbidden in both slashiness and fancying your mate), and voyeurism. Ngggghh. And I love, also, that you take your time. Harry's panic is almost foreplay. And the bypassing of the blowjob for rimming...gah.
Yay, and I'm glad it ended on a non-platonic note.