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vamphile ([info]vamphile) wrote in [info]qaf_drabbles,
@ 2008-01-16 20:01:00

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Entry tags:author: vamphile, challenge #48: angst, epic series: hustler!j/whore in a hoody

Whore In A Hoody
Title: Hustler!Justin LXII (Whore in a Hoody)
Author: Vamphile
Condoms: Two to Justin

|Hustler!Justin | II | III | IV| V | VI | VII | VIII | IX | X | XI | XII | XIII | XIV | XV | XVI | XVII | XVIII | XIX | XX | XXI | XXII | XXIII | XXIV | XXV | XXVI | XXVII | XXVIII | XXIX | XXX | XXXI | XXXII | XXXIII | XXXIV | XXXV | XXXVI | XXXVII | XXXVIII | XXXIX | XL | XLI | XLII | XLIII | XLIV | XLV | XLVI | XLVII | XLVIII | XLIX | L | LI | LII | LIII | LIV | LV | LVI | LVII | LVIII | LIX | LX | LXI |




Hustler Justin LXII
Whore In A Hoody




I’m running as fast as I can. he’s catching up. I’m scrambling over a heap of trash when he grabs my leg, pulling me backwards. I’m on my back. I can see his face clearly. He’s smiling, “I’ve missed you.” I push him away. He seems surprised. He flips me over, stripping my clothes. his weight pressing me into the asphalt. “Isaac!” he laughs. “Thought you might have forgotten about me.” I try to move but it’s like he has more arms and legs than I do. I’m trapped. I struggle harder, begging him. his arms wrap tightly around me.


~~~745~~~
There’s no answer on his cell phone or Debbie’s phone. All the lights are out. it’s only eleven. I open the door; it’s not locked… what the fuck? I take the steps two at a time knowing he won’t be there. Knowing he’s off somewhere, in trouble, hurt, alone… or worse, not alone. I push open his door and don’t actually trust what I’m seeing. He’s sprawled across the bed, mumbling, kicking at something. I slow my breathing and try to hold him. He’s calling Isaac's name and struggling. "Justin! Justin, wake up.” I wrap my arms tightly around him.

Cont...

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[info]secretsolitaire
2008-01-17 01:07 am UTC (link)
Oh, you are evil. ;-)

Although I shouldn't say that because at least Justin is safe in bed!

Any chance of more later tonight? *tries not to be greedy*

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[info]vamphile
2008-01-17 01:47 am UTC (link)
there may be more tonight, the garbage disposal guy is here, and i'm being forced to haggle with him... then we'll see, i still haven't eaten much today so dinner wouldn't be the worst idea.

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[info]ex_4cupcakes771
2008-01-17 01:08 am UTC (link)
please tell me 744 is a bad, bad, bad dream...

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[info]vamphile
2008-01-17 01:47 am UTC (link)
if it was a dream, i think it would qualify as a bad one, yes.

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[info]ex_4cupcakes771
2008-01-17 02:53 am UTC (link)
that is a very cryptic answer, I must say.

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[info]besamislabios
2008-01-17 01:12 am UTC (link)
Thank God, it was just a nightmare...right?

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[info]vamphile
2008-01-17 01:47 am UTC (link)
probably.

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[info]pendulumchanges
2008-01-17 02:37 am UTC (link)
*see icon*

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[info]gmta_nz
2008-01-17 01:20 am UTC (link)
I knew it was "just" a nightmare!

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[info]vamphile
2008-01-17 01:41 am UTC (link)
yeah, i kind of broadcast that. but then... i'm evil but not THAT evil.

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[info]herefordroad
2008-01-17 01:49 am UTC (link)
i'm relieved justin is in his own bed even if he is kicking and struggling...and did i mention how glad i am that brian is with him!!

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[info]vamphile
2008-01-17 01:54 am UTC (link)
yeah, once he wakes up and stuff, i think he'll be glad brian's there too.

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[info]singlewoman
2008-01-17 02:02 am UTC (link)
OMG I was so scared after reading 744. Had to read it a couple of times to make sure what I was reading was real. Thank heavens it was only a dream.

You are very evil!

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[info]vamphile
2008-01-17 02:11 am UTC (link)
I know, it was wronger than wrong.

I'm sorry, but see, justin needs to remember he's not as okay as he thinks... and brian can see that he's basically pretty safe.

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[info]court1429
2008-01-17 02:16 am UTC (link)
HA! Sneaky & evol you are, you are. I love it. ;)

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[info]vamphile
2008-01-17 02:38 am UTC (link)
why thank you.

i pride my self on my sneakiosity and my evolity.

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[info]notreallyme10
2008-01-17 02:17 am UTC (link)
I was scared for a minute there. Nice way of handling this. Justin still needs him, but isn't in serious trouble.

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[info]vamphile
2008-01-17 02:37 am UTC (link)
see, isn't that a nice balance, scared, nightmare having justin... that's better than beaten, facing isaac, who we're not sure he could say no to justin... right?

Well, even if you don't think it is, Brian thinks it is, and i think Justin's beginning to think it is.

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[info]notreallyme10
2008-01-17 02:45 am UTC (link)
It is better. Brian can still help and yet maybe we can start feeling like Justin will be safe.

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[info]pendulumchanges
2008-01-17 02:27 am UTC (link)
Fuck man! I thought Justin really got attacked by Isaac! Jesus.

*deep breath*

Goodness, who would have thought 94 words (I figured out it was a dream when I got to that last sentence) could get me so worked up? Well... 74,394 words...

This icon makes me feel better.

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[info]pendulumchanges
2008-01-17 02:29 am UTC (link)
And I snagged this icon a few days ago and finally uploaded it last night. I'm glad I didn't need to use it today. Pretty sure I'll still get a chance to use it before this story is done :P

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[info]vamphile
2008-01-17 02:36 am UTC (link)
well, if you can't use it before the story is done you can use it once it is for all the people who keep telling me they don't know what they'll do once it's over.

and yeah, i don't know if justin's going to need that again... i do know that i'm a little proud of myself that it took you 94 words to figure out it was a dream.

go me.

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[info]vl_redreign
2008-01-17 02:43 am UTC (link)
I hate your garbage disposal.

Stupid piece of shit.

*kicks it, hurts toe*

Vamp...have mercy!!!!!

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[info]vamphile
2008-01-17 04:20 am UTC (link)
Yeah, they wanted 375.00 to replace it. i was like...hang on... checked online, the guy was saying it was a 250.00 garbage disposal... it wasn't. it was an 80.00 garbage disposal...

so i haggled, hard, and still got fucked without lube for 275.00. new garbage disposal installed... it took him like, fifteen minutes.

he was complaining, "but see, it's nine pm"

um, no, it's eight, and i've been in the house waiting for you since two...

then he accused me of being drunk.

but now i have a garbage disposal.

and i DID have mercy, i let you know it was a dream, (probably) before i stopped writing.

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[info]witchdragon
2008-01-17 03:42 am UTC (link)
OMG my heart is in my throat *sobs*

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[info]vamphile
2008-01-17 04:21 am UTC (link)
this was just me, fucking with my readers, which is mean and unforgivable and i promise never to do it again.

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[info]witchdragon
2008-01-17 05:54 am UTC (link)
As if I'd believe that *grins*

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[info]pgcwmt
2008-01-17 04:17 am UTC (link)
Well, I definitely do not want Justin to be attacked by evil Isaac, but, I cannot help but fantasize bout Isaac getting what he deserves!!!! Also, I wish Justin were strong enough to spit in his face, while Brian beat the shit out of him, and then call the Police, and Isaac go to jail and be raped daily by inmates!!!!!! Man, I think I am taking this too personally....... I can understand Justin regressing at times, with dreams, memories, insecurities, while trying to move forward with his life. He needs Brian, but, now I think Brian needs him. Whatever happens, please, let there be great, glorious SEX between them!!! What a Story...........awesome, as always.

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[info]vamphile
2008-01-17 04:22 am UTC (link)
you know, i have whole stories dedicated to great sex between brian and justin... i mean, Chapters and Chapters of NOTHING BUT great sex... this just isn't that fic. and they've still had some decent sex... i'm just sayin' if you're looking for vamph!porn... i've got it... check the index of my fiction.

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[info]rosy5000
2008-01-17 04:32 am UTC (link)
You almost had me running around screaming my head off, throwing things at the wall, wanting to hunt down Isaac myself.

745 made things a little better, but that's one hell of a nightmare for Justin to have. Sadly, it sounds like Brian holding him like he is is just feeding the nightmare.

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[info]vamphile
2008-01-17 05:20 am UTC (link)
i know, i'm kind of... evil... but see, it's Brian's worst fear and Justin's genuine nightmare, so together they can face it.

right now, he probably is feeding the nightmare but he'll figure that out and back off and wake justin up and then comfort the shit out of him.

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[info]noteverything
2008-01-17 04:41 am UTC (link)
Short and sweet. I don't know why really, but the first one seemed like a dream from the get-go. I enjoyed them. :D

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[info]vamphile
2008-01-17 05:23 am UTC (link)
i write dreams a little differently, i don't worry about logistics as much, so that they have that dream quality, you know, when you're standing in your living room arguing with your english professor and then when you turn around to get a soda it's in the purple 'fridge next to the school office, and your english professor now looks like your second cousin, except her hair is darker and you think that but don't say it...

that kind of thing.

glad you enjoyed justin in terror and brian panicking... you are one sick little girl :P

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[info]noteverything
2008-01-18 04:39 am UTC (link)
So I *should* have realized it was a dream. And here I thought I had some special gift. :-D


you are one sick little girl :P

*does not try to deny that*

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[info]vamphile
2008-01-18 06:11 am UTC (link)
no, you should be proud of yourself, most people don't notice things like that, but when i write dreams, i kind of let go of the bits of reality that i build in my head when i'm writing regular stories...

like i know that brian sometimes wakes up, barely sober from the night before, curses, showers quickly picks up a latte and then justin in that order, but see, that's a lot of words when i only have 100 so i say. "i knock on the door lightly, the aspirin hasn't worked yet." and thus, all that i needed to say is right there, without all the um... words.

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[info]passing_through
2008-01-17 04:44 am UTC (link)
First Project Runway, now this.

Mean.

*is having a rough night*

Only TWO drabbles? Where is the rest of the story??????

I'm having Hoody withdrawls :P

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[info]vamphile
2008-01-17 05:24 am UTC (link)
havent' seen project runway yet...shhh...don't spoil me.

i had garbage disposal issues today so the rest of the story will have to wait til tomorrow...

seriously i spent ALL DAY waiting for the guy, and why that kept me from writing... well, it jsut did... shut up.

i'll write more tomorrow... you know i'm good for it.

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[info]passing_through
2008-01-17 05:28 am UTC (link)
LOL! Yes, I know you're good for it.

I posted my reaction to last night's update at your broken disposal post on your IJ. I was a tad bit anxious over there too :D

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[info]pgcwmt
2008-01-17 04:44 am UTC (link)
I can assure you, since this is my first story with you, I now have you bookmarked, and plan on reading ALL of your stories. I may be just coming in, but I will continue to move forward and try to catch up to the present........little bits.

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[info]vamphile
2008-01-17 05:29 am UTC (link)
oh, i wasn't just pimping my stuff to pimp it. there are many other excellent porn writers out there. Xie being one, triciaqaf being another and luce, and rhiannonhero and and and... i mean [info]qaf_retread just did a PWP rec, wonderful stuff.

and [info]bj_action is nothing but PWP challenges, the most recent being just... GUH GUH GUH worthy.

i'm simply explaining that sex, in drabble form, isn't that easy to do, and while i do it, and try to keep it kinda hot, it takes me at least five to seven hundred uninterrupted words to write the kind of sex that B/J deserve, and when i do it right, we're talking about two to three thousand words.

for that you want

You bet your ass

or

Mirror Sex
or
Whatever makes him happy
or
Pulchritudinous
or... i'll stop but i have a lot of PWPs that are full of the love and the sex and nothing else.

the stories with chapters usually have some kind of plot, and some shcmoop and snark, but sometimes not. You bet your ass is 13 chapters of porn.

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[info]pgcwmt
2008-01-17 08:12 pm UTC (link)
Hey, Thanks, and you can bet your ass I will go to these sites and see what I have been missing!!!!!

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[info]not_yet_defined
2008-01-17 10:44 pm UTC (link)
that was teh wrong.

more please. :P

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[info]vamphile
2008-01-18 06:05 am UTC (link)
there's more up now... read and comment please.

don't hate me... i wrote many more tonight.

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