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vamphile ([info]vamphile) wrote in [info]qaf_drabbles,
@ 2007-12-03 18:09:00

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Entry tags:author: vamphile, challenge #41: justin's hoodie, epic series: hustler!j/whore in a hoody

Challenge #41: Justin's Hoody
Title: Hustler!Justin
Author: Vamphile
Condom(s): 14 Justin 2 to Brian

A/N This is pure Emotional Porn...um, with some real porn thrown in for good measure.

I will continue this story, in drabble form and it will NOT count for anyone's condoms (until I put their clothes back on.) But here are Sixteen Drabbles about Hustler!Justin in a black Hoody and Protective!Fucked!Brian.




Hustler!Justin





Justin zipped up the black hoody, crossing his arms against the cold. His ears were burning from the icy breeze but he didn’t want to pull the hood up. He knew that his blond hair was a huge selling point. He stamped his feet a few times trying to regain feeling in his toes. A black jeep drove by. He took a provocative stance and smiled. Blinking from under his lashes, then raising his head to make eye contact. The jeep stopped and he approached the driver. Unzipping his sweatshirt he leaned against the window and licked his lips. “Hey.”




Two
Brian watched the blond kid sidle up to his window. He couldn’t be over fifteen. His nose was red, his eyes were blue and Brian leaned over to open the door. “Hey.”

The kid sat down, holding his hands in front of the heater, drawing his knees up practically wrapping himself in the black hooded sweatshirt. Brian turned the heat up a little higher.

“You can park around the corner. The cops don’t bother us too much there.”

“How much for the night?”

“Huh?”

Brian moved his face closer to the blond’s. “Is that a particularly difficult question?”

“Three Hundred.”


Three
Justin couldn’t believe his luck. The guy wasn’t even balking. This time the smile wasn’t for show. He relaxed back in the seat and almost chuckled as the man leaned over him to fasten his seatbelt. Well, apparently requiring safety wasn’t gonna be an issue.

Justin watched their route, making sure he knew how to get back. The man was drumming his fingers on the steering wheel and occasionally glancing in his direction. Several times he’d looked like he was about to say something. He never did.

Justin followed him up to a huge loft. He shrugged off his sweatshirt.


Four
Brian watched as the kid took off his hoody and then reached for the hem of his shirt. Brian stopped him. “What’s your name?” He looked startled. Brian waited, staring.

“Justin.”

Brian nodded. Not offering his name in return. He held out a tab of E but the kid shook his head. Brian shrugged and swallowed it himself and then moved closer to the boy, pulling him forward, covering his mouth, sucking his tongue, and running his fingers through that blond hair he’d been itching to touch since he’d seen it under the streetlight.

It was softer than he’d expected.


Five
Justin almost lost himself. This guy was hot, loaded, and knew how to kiss. He wondered why he needed a professional. He decided not to look a gift horse in the mouth. Speaking of mouths, he wasn’t sure this kiss would ever end. He wasn’t sure he wanted it to. The guy was backing him towards the bed. Justin stumbled when his ankles hit the first step. The man wrapped an arm around his waist.

“What’s your name?” Justin asked breathlessly

“Brian.” He pushed Justin onto the bed.

Justin could barely make out his hoody sprawled over the sofa back.


Six
Brian efficiently removed the kid’s jeans and tossed it towards his hoody. He sat back a moment, straddling his legs and just enjoying the view. Justin looked up meeting his gaze, head on.

“So what are you into?”

Justin seemed puzzled. “Whatever you want.”

“What do you want.”

Justin shrugged and his body melted into the bed as Brian’s warm fingers wrapped around his cock. “This is good.”

Brian stroked him slowly watching as Justin's eyes darkened a little. His pink lips got redder as he bit them. “You can make noise. My neighbors are used to it.”

Justin moaned.

Seven
Justin shuddered, and not from the cold. Suddenly he wanted his hoody back. He felt exposed and a little nervous. Did this guy just say, “Scream, no one will hear you?” He watched Brian’s face and saw an odd expression. His hand was stroking his face. “You’re scared.”

“Um…”

“I’m not going to hurt you. I promise. I meant that I bring guys back here a lot. That’s all.”

Brian's hand sped up. Justin’s body arched in response. Brian stopped. “Don’t come yet.” Justin moaned and tried to will himself not to. Brian’s hands didn’t stop. He gasped and came.

Eight
Brian laughed. He couldn’t help it. Then he felt like shit. The kid looked scared, he was twisting his body out from under Brian’s thighs, moving to make a grab for his sweatshirt. Brian followed him, wrapping his arms around him and feeling a slight flinch. “Hey. It’s okay.”

“I’m…sorry. I’ll go.”

“Hey!”

Brian was sure he didn’t imagine the flinch this time. Justin’s movements sped up. If Brian didn’t stop him quickly he’d be dressed and out the door. “It’s okay.”

Justin headed away from him. Brian grabbed his wrist gently. Justin struggled out of his grasp and left.

Nine
Justin was pulling the hoody on as he ran down the steps. He was cursing himself. He hadn’t collected the money up front. No one had seen him get in Brian’s car. He could have ended up beaten, or dead. He stormed back towards his corner, hoping to score something to kill the fear and anger. Stupid, he fucking knew better. And now he’d wasted the night. His stomach rumbled and he checked his pocket. Two dollars. He shook his head and continued walking. Trying to block out the cold. Not noticing the black jeep until it was beside him.

Ten
Brian decided to blame bad drugs for his need to track Justin down. Luckily, he wasn’t too hard to find and as he pulled up beside him he tried to get his attention. He knew he had it even though Justin had pulled up the hood on his sweatshirt and was pretending to ignore him.

“I’m sorry. It’s freezing out here. Come back. C’mon, I’ll still pay your for the night.”

He came to a complete stop and just looked at Justin. He sighed in what could NOT be relief when Justin climbed into the car and fastened his seatbelt.


Eleven
Justin stared straight ahead. He would not cry. He would be more careful. And he would get the money up front.

“You said three hundred.”

Brian dug into his jeans pocket and handed Justin the money. Justin looked down. “You’re not wearing shoes.”

The car moved again and Justin leaned forward, ready to unbutton Brian’s fly but Brian pushed his head away. “We’ve got all night.”

Justin tucked the money into the zippered pocket of his hoody and nodded. He tried to ignore the fact that again Brian tried several times to say something but always stopped. He sighed softly.

Twelve
Brian wanted to ask what had spooked the kid so badly but he had a sick feeling he already knew. By the time they got back inside the loft his feet were freezing. He should have put on shoes first. He ignored the discomfort and peeled the black hooded sweatshirt off of Justin’s body. Again pushing him back towards the bed. Kissing his neck, nibbling his ear, watching as Justin’s hand never let go of the black cotton. The kid wasn’t losing sight of his money. Brian understood, “we’re both freezing. Let’s shower.” Justin brought the hoody into the bathroom.


Thirteen
His shower is bigger than the apartment I looked at last month. His hot, hard cock is pressed against my ass, and speaking of huge. I feel him slide between my thighs while he massages shampoo into my hair. “We need a…” I sputter as the water gets in my mouth. He nibbles my ear and reaches out towards what I thought was a soap tray, waving a shiny square in front of me. “Smart boy.”

I nod. But he doesn’t put it on; he just keeps sliding his cock between my soapy thighs while his hands wash my chest.


Fourteen
I could come just like this. His strong smooth thighs tightening around my cock. His skin flushed red from the heat of the shower, and judging by his leaking erection, his desire. Eventually I do. I come hard and hold his back flush against my chest while I work my fingers slowly into his asshole. He moans and lets his head fall back on my shoulder. The hot water runs out and I turn off the shower quickly. Drying him off with a warm towel and enjoying the soft sighs he makes. Eventually we move to the bed. “Roll over.”


Fifteen
He’s ready to fuck me. I roll over quickly but it’s not his cock I feel at my hole. It’s his tongue. He drags it along my back and then spreads my cheeks. Most tricks that ask for a rim job get a flat no. I’ve never had anyone want to eat my ass before. Then again, most of my tricks are married closet cases. He clearly isn’t. I’m embarrassed at how loud I’m being. Then I remember that he wants to hear me. I let loose and come as he fucks me with his tongue while stroking my cock.

Sixteen
I put his ankles on my shoulders, and hand him the condom. He slides it on me, and curves his body under mine. his eyes squeezed shut. He looks like he’s bracing himself for something painful. I slow down, moving a lubed finger into him, stretching him, hitting his prostate. His eyes open. He stares at me. I shake my head. “I’m not trying to hurt you.”

The confusion in his eyes makes me sick.

I press into him and he opens up to me as I slide home.

“Good boy.” I whisper as I stroke his face. He’s crying.

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Cont...


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[info]zaipixie
2007-12-03 11:25 pm UTC (link)
Fuck....

Is there more? I think I need to read this again... and again....

Small thing though: In fourteen I can't really get the logistics to work out in my head, here: ...and hold his chest flush against my back... I might just be stupid though and suffering from lack of coherent thought.

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[info]vamphile
2007-12-03 11:47 pm UTC (link)
back, against my chest. I'll go edit.
there's more, but it's in my head.

so bear with me.

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[info]court1429
2007-12-04 01:54 am UTC (link)
lol I thought I was the only one who tried to figure out the positions! I'm bad about trying to figure out timelines and distances, too. I have totally stopped reading a fic in the past and gone to an airline site or mapquest to check distances and times when I read something that sounds off.

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[info]vamphile
2007-12-04 03:02 am UTC (link)
LOL... i check airline times, distances and always make sure i can picture it in my head, and keep little markers in the story so that you can follow... that way Brian never gets from Laguardia to LAX in 3 hours, and justin's chest is never pressed against brian's back WHILE brian's fingers are in justin's ass. i just fucked that one up.

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[info]vl_redreign
2007-12-03 11:36 pm UTC (link)
dlkjfasl;fjafljsf!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

NO!!!!! MORE NOW PLZKTHX!!!!

Who hurt Sunshine?!?! Inquiring minds wanna know.

Vamp, you kilt me. I'm kilt.

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[info]vamphile
2007-12-03 11:51 pm UTC (link)
kilt? Kilt Ded? On Noes!

and yeah, eventually there will have to be some non expositiony exposition about who hurt Sunshine. 'cause you know how you want to know... well, the most inquiring mind right now is Brian's and here's what he doesn't know...

1. who hurt his Sunshine
2. That Sunshine is his, knthnx.
3. That he's totally fucked.

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[info]vl_redreign
2007-12-04 12:03 am UTC (link)
Yes!!! Ded!!!! See my tongue hanging outta my mouth!?!?!

Brian was fucked the second his bare feet hit the pavement. lol Or it could be when he saw the blond hair and stopped.

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[info]vamphile
2007-12-04 12:10 am UTC (link)
It might have been seeing the blond hair. It might have been the minute he turned up the heat in the car. maybe we'll NEVER know the exact second, i think we do know it happened within the first 400 words, so that's pretty fucked pretty fast.

also, i need your icon so i'm tkaing it, kthnx.

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[info]vl_redreign
2007-12-04 12:21 am UTC (link)
OMG, and I'm so stealing yours!!!! Look at those eyes!!!!

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[info]pendulumchanges
2007-12-03 11:41 pm UTC (link)
Excellent story. Emotional porn is exactly what I'm looking for tonight. I wish I could write like you vamp. I don't know how you keep writing amazing drabbles every day... or in this case 16 freaking amazing drabbles in one day. Right from the first one I was hooked.

Brian turned the heat up a little higher.

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[info]vamphile
2007-12-03 11:54 pm UTC (link)
I think that... Brian turned the heat up a little higher is the EXACT moment in which he became totally and utterly fucked. not sure when he'll know that, but running out after Justin in the middle of winter, with no shoes on might have been a clue.

it's total emotional porn. I needed it, and i wrote it, and yeah, this is one of those stories i would never write for realz... but see... protective!fucked!Brian and Hustler!wounded in the past!Justin are just too good a combo to never write ever... i mean, there's a reason they're a staple of the crack!fic genere.

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[info]pendulumchanges
2007-12-04 12:06 am UTC (link)
But when you write them it immediately stops being crack!fic (and definitely doesn't go anywhere near bad!crack!fic as it most definitely would in less capable hands) and is just an AU... a wonderful guilty-pleasure hurt/comfort emotional porn AU.

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[info]plasticine_star
2007-12-04 12:12 am UTC (link)
Crap woman you trying to kill the fangirls with this... Emotional porn asdfghjk!

I might be crazy but I see a little bit of super star in this drabble series?

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[info]vamphile
2007-12-04 12:28 am UTC (link)
Superstar was TOTAL emotional porn, so if it seems similar, it's because when I give in to my fic kinks, i go all the way, and also because in superstar it was a re-telling of their first time with a bit of a twist. same thing here.

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[info]noteverything
2007-12-04 12:20 am UTC (link)
Damn. This proves I lie when I say I don't like AU. 'Cause I read it straight through and went back and read it again and Brian going after Justin with no shoes on (when it's that cold...in S1 the weather wasn't freezing) TOTALLY rules me.

You really are a genius when it comes to these two. (I was feeling all proud of myself because I wrote four today for my Christmas stuff...PSHHHHHHHHHHHH! You could do that in twenty minutes!)

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[info]vamphile
2007-12-04 12:31 am UTC (link)
um, don't base your personal pride on what I can do. I can crank out drabbles, and when i choose to write emotional porn, and my own fic kinks...my god, i stopped and posted because if i kept going there would have been thirty or forty. there still might be eventually.

but the hoody is gone for the moment and that's one of the reasons i stopped here. plus, you know, we got to..um... the end of a chapter (if you want to call it that) so now we can move on to what happens next.

i'm not even sure but i know it'll be full of protective!brian and Hustler!justin.

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[info]noteverything
2007-12-04 12:39 am UTC (link)
um, don't base your personal pride on what I can do. Point taken.

BUT, just because you can crank them out quickly doesn't negate the fact that you are very good, k?

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[info]besamislabios
2007-12-04 12:23 am UTC (link)
Excellent. Emotional porn, real porn, great porn!
And there're more of these?

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[info]vamphile
2007-12-04 12:32 am UTC (link)
There's more of these...in my head. i think i'll write them now since i'm avoiding the things I SHOULD be doing... but if you're gonna avoid life, what better way than by writing real and/or emotional porn?

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[info]court1429
2007-12-04 02:04 am UTC (link)
since i'm avoiding the things I SHOULD be doing... but if you're gonna avoid life, what better way than by writing real and/or emotional porn?

Oh you are so singing my song right now.

*looks around at messy house*
*calculates hours until company arrives*
*wishes for bad storm to close airport for one day*

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[info]vamphile
2007-12-04 02:07 am UTC (link)
LOL...

exactly

*looks at laundry to be done*
*sees boxes of stuff she brought in from her car*
*remembers the dishes in the dishwasher are CLEAN*
*wonders if she should leave thurs. instead of Wed to go to PA*

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[info]rosy5000
2007-12-04 12:28 am UTC (link)
First of all... love Hustler!Justin. *grins*

Now... who hurt Justin????? WE MUST KNOW! So Brian can track him down and avenge his angel.

*draws hearts around protective Brian* ;D

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[info]vamphile
2007-12-04 12:33 am UTC (link)
yes, Brian is going to need to know who hurt Justin, he's already upset just imagining it.

so now i have to figure out who hurt justin, because leaving Brian not knowing is all mean and stuff.

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[info]sidhe
2007-12-04 12:31 am UTC (link)
*hugs you* I loved this - really and truly. Hustler!Justin, protective!Brian - what is not to love about this? I'm so glad to know you're going to continue this. :)

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[info]vamphile
2007-12-04 12:35 am UTC (link)
It's crack!fic, without the baby's and the mpregs and the... well, without those two things, the rest of it...pure unadulterated crack!fic/emotional porn. and i'm not ashamed, not even a little. i am kind of proud of it (i don't know why it's not like anyone was thinking...pfft, vamphile can't write crack!fic.)

but i just think it's kinda cute.

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[info]j_ange
2007-12-04 01:14 am UTC (link)
I loved them
Thank you

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[info]vamphile
2007-12-04 01:20 am UTC (link)
Thank you for reading my little set of self indulgent crack drabbles.

and hey, keep your eye out, i'm apparantly not done with this story.

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[info]gmta_nz
2007-12-04 01:28 am UTC (link)
Jesus. Emotional porn is exactly right.

Wonderful stuff.

Possibility of a sequel?

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[info]vamphile
2007-12-04 01:31 am UTC (link)
oh, i'm writing it now... because this is like, a mean place to leave it and never pick up.

and yeah, it's just exactly what i said, emotional porn, in bite sized portions for the emotional porn addict on the go :P

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[info]court1429
2007-12-04 02:01 am UTC (link)
Emotional porn me, baby! I've got no problem with it in the right hands. Such as yours.

You know, at first I thought this was going to be a sex game they were playing. Mostly because of this line:

Brian watched the blond kid sidle up to his window. He couldn’t be over fifteen.

I'm assuming we're going to find out hustler!Justin is well over 15, but would Brian really fuck a 15 year old? 'cause I kinda thought 17 was pushing it a little bit. except, you know, they were otp and nothing could interfere with their luv.

Will be watching for the continuation!

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[info]vamphile
2007-12-04 02:06 am UTC (link)
Oh, yeah, i'm going to address that, and i kind of wanted you to think that it was a sex game at first. just you know, them, playing... but it isn't...it's just me, writing my emotional kinks.

i'm writing the continuation now.

16 is the legal age of consent in PA... But that doesn't matter when i go AU, i rarely stray from any canon i don't HAVE to...

does that make sense?

also, whenever i'm writing emotional porn, or humor, i have brian thinking justin looks really young. it's really just there to amuse me.

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[info]exmptfromsanity
2007-12-04 02:45 am UTC (link)
guh!
-dies and is dead-

Oh my god, there are just no words. Really. That last one made my mind just go blank for a minute it was so good.

The imagery is amazing.

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[info]vamphile
2007-12-04 02:56 am UTC (link)
Thanks. I'm on drabble 26 now... (hey, i've had laundry and stuff to do between posting and continuing this story) i'll post them when i get a few more written)

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[info]notreallyme10
2007-12-04 02:52 am UTC (link)
I'm officially hooked. I NEED more!

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[info]vamphile
2007-12-04 02:57 am UTC (link)
that's what crack does to you, yo.

i'm more than half way done the second posting...

so hang in there.

i'm insane and completely aware of it.

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[info]secretsolitaire
2007-12-04 04:18 am UTC (link)
ACK! What a place to stop. I have all sorts of questions, like why Justin's so freaked out and why Brian is getting a hustler and WHEN WILL THERE BE MORE??

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[info]vamphile
2007-12-04 04:22 am UTC (link)
More's up now.
i posted it like five minutes ago.

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[info]xanister
2007-12-04 11:38 am UTC (link)
Wow I'm glad I read these this morning, that way I can appreciate Huster!Justin I and II.

These are really good, reading your drabbles on my day off (due to unplowed roads) really sets a good tone for the day. Off to read the other post :)

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[info]vamphile
2007-12-04 07:42 pm UTC (link)
Glad you found them and can enjoy them.

Thanks!

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[info]ohfreckle
2007-12-04 08:22 pm UTC (link)
alkjsdskdskjkla

Cracky broken!Justin and protective!Brian. And you made Justin come by being rimmed. ILU, kthx.


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[info]vamphile
2007-12-04 09:32 pm UTC (link)
Thank you... i'm having fun with this.

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[info]not_yet_defined
2007-12-09 10:55 pm UTC (link)
*bounces and then runs off to read the next part while rudely neglecting to take the time and leave you proper feedback*

why don't i have a hustler!justin icon?

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[info]vamphile
2007-12-09 11:56 pm UTC (link)
I don't know why you don't have a hustler Justin Icon.

I do, it's this one.

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[info]happier_bunny
2007-12-16 02:35 pm UTC (link)
Okay aside from the creep Justin looks 15 reference I liked this. You sucked me in and I want Justin to not be scared anymore. *sobs* And I'm scared that you're not going to fix that quickly.

Plus, I love what you did with the hoody.

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[info]vamphile
2007-12-16 07:49 pm UTC (link)
I am fixing him... I really am. It does get worse before it gets better but he's not as scared anymore and he's not scared of Brian anymore, which is good.

i'm glad you liked what i did with the hoody... the prompt is responsible for the origins of this fic.

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[info]happier_bunny
2007-12-16 10:53 pm UTC (link)
Vamp, I had to stop. I'm sorry, I just can't read Justin like this, not right now at least and I'm not at all into physical pain for him. I tried. I got to where Brian was cutting his shirt off and I just can't go on from there. :(

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[info]vamphile
2007-12-16 11:11 pm UTC (link)
That's where Xie stopped too. It gets better after that, i swear... but if you can't read it now, just at some point try again. It's me... can you trust me a little?

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[info]fun_demented
2008-12-02 01:14 pm UTC (link)
Oh my gosh. At first I was wondering whether I should be ashamed for liking this much. But then you assuage any guilty feelings I might have by writing so carefully and lovingly of your characters, even while you're fulfilling your audiences kinks. I momentarily forgot that each section was a drabble that could stand alone. VERY IMPRESSIVE! *READS ON*

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[info]vamphile
2008-12-02 09:01 pm UTC (link)
um, you realize, it's 80K words, right? it's a total emotional kink story, thanks for reviewing.

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