Dec. 14th, 2008


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Fic: In This Together (Part 4/5)

Original poster: firebolt87

Title: In This Together (Part 4/5)
Genre: Drama/Angst
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: A bit of strong language.
Word Count: 3,812 (don't kill me? Please?)
Summary: My take on events after Luke gets expelled and Noah breaks up with him.
Disclaimer: I own nothing whatsoever, sadly (except my keyboard).
Notes: Here are the first three parts - Part 1 Part 2 Part 3 (the first contains the general notes for the story). Believe it or not, I decided to split this fic yet again, but the fifth part will 100% be the last. I apologize for this part being so long - I hope you bear with me and have the patience to read it all! I honestly didn't know I had that much to write here until I sat down to do it (which often happens to me). The last part, which is kind of like a denouement, will be normal length again; I'll be posting it very soon. An important note: this is the first time I've ever tried switching between characters' POV's - in this case, Luke and Noah - during the same segment of a story. Please tell me if you thought it was smooth enough, or if it didn't work. As always, I really really really apperciate your feedback and comments - they feel great, they make me smile, and they help me improve as a writer. Hope you enjoy reading.



A couple of hours later, Luke woke up to an unwelcome combination of nausea and a massive headache.  )

Nov. 29th, 2008


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Fic: In This Together (Part 2/5)

Original poster: firebolt87

Title: In This Together (Part 2/5)
Genre: Drama/Angst
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Underage drinking, some strong language.
Word Count: 2,073
Summary: My take on events after Luke gets expelled and Noah breaks up with him. As per usual, pay no attention to the messed up text.
Disclaimer: I own nothing whatsoever, sadly (except my keyboard).
Notes: My general notes for the fic can be found in Part 1 - thanks again for all the lovely comments it received. For this part, I'll just add this: I got the idea for the story after already reading the spoiler about the Luke/Brian kiss, but before I saw the actual scene, so this is my version of it, which is a bit different from the show (for example, this happens during the day and the part when Noah takes drunk Luke home probably didn't happen, since it wouldn't fit the timeline here). Oh, and it's a bit lenghty, hope you don't mind. Enjoy the read, feedback is wonderfully appreciated and really one of the best things about writing these pieces. :)



Luke sat in his grandmother's kitchen, pouring himself yet another shot of the Johnny Walker Blue he'd snagged from the Snyder liquor cabinet.  )

Nov. 22nd, 2008


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Fic: In This Together (Part 1/5)

Original poster: firebolt87

Title: In This Together (Part 1/5)
Genre: Drama/Angst
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Some strong language.
Word Count: 1,666
Summary: My take on events after Luke gets expelled and Noah breaks up with him. As per usual, pay no attention to the messed up text.
Disclaimer: I own nothing whatsoever, sadly (except my keyboard).
Notes: The election storyline is the topic of really heated discussion these days, and it seems that Noah telling the dean the truth about Luke's cheating has separated them more than ever. I've been noticing for a while now that a lot of people blast Noah for having hurt Luke so many times, yet some people feel that Luke is the one being unfair to Noah in many situations. This trend is reaching its prime with the election - if you watch the YouTube clips, most comments take sides and are either "God, Luke, you're a jerk!" or "God, Noah, you're a jerk!".  I'm personally on the fence, as I've always been. I think both of them have messed up a lot of times in the past, as a result of the difficult situations they faced - sometimes I was mad at them, sometimes I wasn't, but I always understood the reasons. I don't feel that either of them has yet done something to make me stop liking him. With the election, I started out being fully on Noah's side, but now that he's left Luke I think both of them have hurt each other and are in the wrong. This story is about how they deal with the fallout and try to fix things (Casey and Alison get some love in the first part too, because they're awesome). I hope you enjoy it, feedback is lovely and gets me out of bed in the morning!

 
 
Noah sat on the bench in Old Towne, sipping his cup of coffee ever so slowly.  )

Dec. 18th, 2008


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Fic: In This Together (Part 5/5)

Original poster: firebolt87

Title: In This Together (Part 5/5)
Genre: Drama/Angst
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: A bit of strong language.
Word Count: 1,329
Summary: My take on events after Luke gets expelled and Noah breaks up with him.
Disclaimer: I own nothing whatsoever, sadly (except my keyboard).
Notes: Here are the first four parts - Part 1 Part 2 Part 3 Part 4 (the first contains the general notes for the story). The final part is a resolution of sorts, though it's not all smiles and roses. Now that I've completed the story, I'd like to thank everyone who followed it and offered their lovely comments, especially those who've been posting feedback all the way (like the wayyyy too kind flyitalian). I really appreciate it and feel encouraged to keep writing by it. I hope you don't get angry at me if I make a small plug (I'm only human!) - my first Luke/Noah story, "It's Over", got very few comments, with the last part getting none at all. If you enjoyed "In This Together", it would mean a lot to me if you take a look at "It's Over" (here's the first part). The first two parts are mostly suspense, while the third is aftermath drama in the style of "In This Together".
Well, now that I've rambled to my heart's content - thanks again for your support of this story. I hope you enjoy the final chapter as well, and remember that your feedback means the world to moi!



Whoever Kevin expected to see as he opened the door to his dorm room the next morning, it couldn't have been Luke. )

Oct. 15th, 2008


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Fic: It's Over (Part 3/3)

Original poster: firebolt87


Title: It's Over (Part 3/3)
Genre: Drama
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None really.
Spoilers: Up to present day.
Word Count: 2,267
Pairing: Luke/Noah
Summary: Life could be ironic in the cruelest ways. Just when you thought everything couldn't be better, that you'd finally found happiness and peace, something terrible would strike and it would all be gone.
Disclaimer: I own nothing whatsoever, sadly (except my keyboard).

Here is the third and final part of the fic. Strange how it came out the longest, I hope you guys bear with me and read the whole thing, heh. Here are the previous parts: Part 1 Part 2
This was my first Luke/Noah fic; I have to say, I really enjoyed writing it and hope you enjoyed reading nearly as much. If I have any more ideas for stories I will definitely get to work on those as well. As always, I very much appreciate feedback, including constructive criticism. Enjoy!
P.S. This has a few mentions of Lily - she is totally Martha Byrne as far as I'm concerned.


Mere moments ago, he was completely focused. His mind was clear, all his energy and determination focused on a single task: finding Luke.  )

Dec. 9th, 2008


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Fic: In This Together (Part 3/5)

Original poster: firebolt87

Title: In This Together (Part 3/5)
Genre: Drama/Angst
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Underage drinking.
Word Count: 874
Summary: My take on events after Luke gets expelled and Noah breaks up with him.
Disclaimer: I own nothing whatsoever, sadly (except my keyboard).
Notes: Here are the first two parts - Part 1 Part 2 (the first contains the general notes for the story). I was only going to have one more part, but it was coming out soooooo long that I decided to split again. As a result, this part is pretty short. The fourth (and almost definitely last, but I never say never...) part will still be War and Peace length, but I had to make it a >little< shorter, so there. I hope to finish the story ASAP, maybe even in the next couple of days - in which case posting this part would be kind of silly, but whatever. Enjoy the read, and remember that feedback is the best! :)


The happy, hopeful feeling Noah had as he headed to the Snyder farm evaporated the second he walked in the door.  )

Nov. 25th, 2008


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One-shot: Then and Now

Original poster: firebolt87

Title: Then and Now
Genre: Drama
Rating: PG
Word Count: 474
Summary: Noah reflects on what being a man means to him now, as opposed to in the past.
Disclaimer: I own nothing whatsoever, sadly (except my keyboard).
Notes: While trying to get some inspiration for the continual of "In This Together' (which received incredible feedback I'm highly grateful for, BTW!), I just had this idea for a one-shot about Noah and it quickly took form in my head, so... ta-da. It's my first one-shot, actually. It's Noah-centric with only a couple of Luke/Noah references, though there's an obvious allusion to how much meeting Luke has affected Noah in this regard. The theme might be a bit "heavy" for a PG but I still thought that rating would be enough; let me know if it needs to be changed. The weird text should be ignored. Anyway, enjoy reading and I really appreciate feedback (especially detailed)!

Growing up with Col. Winston Mayer as his father, his only family, Noah learned a lot of things...  )

Nov. 14th, 2008


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Fic: Noah's Wedding Night

Original poster: firebolt87

Title: Noah's Wedding Night
Genre: Drama/Angst/Romance
Rating: R
Warnings: Sex, a bit of strong language.
Word Count: 2,232 
Summary: On his wedding night, Noah asks his boyfriend for a chance to show how much he loves him. Luke's POV.
Disclaimer: I own nothing whatsoever, sadly (except my keyboard).
Notes: Though I know the general outline of the story, I'm still catching up on the actual Luke/Noah clips, and this week I watched Noah's wedding for the first time. I immediately got thinking about what poor Luke was going through in that situation, so I had to write a story about it (I'm sure there have already been many, I remember reading at least one). BTW, never mind the weird text, LJ likes giving me a hard time. I was bit nervous here, because it's the first time I've ever written a sex scene, and hope I did it properly. Feedback - constructive criticism included, especially since I'm still kind of new to fan fics - is fantabulous and super appreciated. Enjoy!


Oct. 11th, 2008


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Fic: It's Over (Part 2/3)

Original poster: firebolt87

Title: It's Over (Part 2/3)
Genre: Drama
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Still a bit dark. Other than that, nothing except far-fetchedness, heh.
Spoilers: Up to present day.
Word Count: 1,939
Pairing: Luke/Noah
Summary: Life could be ironic in the cruelest ways. Just when you thought everything couldn't be better, that you'd finally found happiness and peace, something terrible would strike and it would all be gone.
Disclaimer: I own nothing whatsoever, sadly (except my keyboard).


I know I said this would be a two-parter, but things I write always end up being a lot longer than I intended to :/ so I extended this to three parts - hope the next is the last. Here is Part 1 (thanks again for your kind comments there). Enjoy, and of course feedback makes me so very happy. :]

P.S.  I'm about to shoot myself as I post, because whenever I would try to "clean" the word text I pasted into the LJ cut, some of the text would get deleted. This went on for about three hours until I gave up and left the text to be in a slightly different font/size. Hope you don't mind, if anyone knows how to fix it that'd be even better.

 

When morning came, after a torturous and utterly ineffectual night, Noah couldn’t put off calling Luke's family any longer.  )

Oct. 8th, 2008


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Fic: It's Over (Part 1/3)

Original poster: firebolt87

Title: It's Over (Part 1/3)
Genre: Drama
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None really... slightly dark, and there's a bit of underage drinking if that bothers you.
Spoilers: Up to present day.
Word Count: 1,565
Pairing: Luke/Noah
Summary: Life could be ironic in the cruelest ways. Just when you thought everything couldn't be better, that you'd finally found happiness and peace, something terrible would strike and it would all be gone.
Disclaimer: I own nothing whatsoever, sadly (except my keyboard).

I'm new here *waves* YouTube randomly introduces me to all sorts of things, and I am so very happy that I happened to find the Luke/Noah storyline through it (I don't even watch soaps normally, and the other stories on this one don't really interest me). This is my first Luke/Noah piece, and one of my first fics generally, so I'm pretty nervous about posting it here after seeing so much awesome work by the authors in this fandom - hope you like it. It wasn't originally supposed to be a two-parter, but it got pretty long so I decided to split it. I hope to have the second part up as soon as tomorrow/Friday. BTW, the start of the fic is a bit confusing, but don't worry - the explanations come later.
As usual, I ramble. Enjoy reading, and feedback is supremely appreciated!



Luke awoke slowly, consciousness returning to him bit by bit. )

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