Concrit meme - Take 18!
( The usual rules )
And an added note: I was planning on delaying this month's crit meme, but I realized that if we wait for everyone to come back + actually play out new stuff, we might as well just skip it. So here, have it anyway and so next month's will be on time, too.
I will ask, however, to please try and take into account everybody's hiatuses when giving crit, specially if it concerns activity.