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Game-wide HMD/Plotting!
Welcome to the MarinaNova HMD! This is optional, but encouraged.

• List your characters for which you'd like feedback. We have a form below if you like forms!
[Feel free to add 4th Wall characters]

• Leave your tactful and considered thoughts, questions, concerns, praise, suggestions, etc. for others.

We strongly encourage you to make this a dialogue. Find out what went into actions, decisions, and characterization and you may come to understand it better. Hopefully you'll also be in the best position to clearly communicate your own concerns. Results will be more satisfactory for everyone if one person isn't on the offensive while the other is on the defensive.

Avoid leaving someone a wall of text. This can be intimidating even with the most careful of wording and best of intentions.

Don't gang up on someone. You may have a different way of wording something, but unless you have something new to contribute, consider letting it go if there are already others saying it.

Be constructive and considerate.

• Since there is no plotting meme during months with an HMD, please feel free to do that here too.

• Contact a mod if you have any problems.

Anonymous commenting is on. It will be turned off if there is abuse.

<b>Player name:</b> <b>Character:</b> Character | Fandom | <lj user=characterjournal> | <a href="http://asylums.insanejournal.com/marinanova/tag/NAME+HERE">☑</a> <b>Link to private HMD if preferred:</b> <b>Comments:</b> Feel free to ask for specific feedback or to give some brief background information about your character.

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marinanova_mod 2012-09-01 03:54 pm UTC (link)

Player name: The Mods: Rica & Haunt, The Game: marinanova Comments: If you have feedback for us or the game, please let us know. (We have separate HMD links if it is about us as players/our characters.) Anything from the way we address you in mod answers to the way we run events to rules and announcements, etc. We can't promise change in every case, but we will give everything consideration. Also, we want to thank all of you for making this game what it is, and for staying with us in the move or joining us at the new location. ♥ (Reply to this) (Thread)

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I heard you liek gifs with your love - bluemoondog, 2012-09-03 05:34 pm UTC

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bloodcakedarmor 2012-09-01 04:07 pm UTC (link)

Player name: Lisa Character: Daniel ‘Oz’ Osbourne | Buffy the Vampire Slayer | taciturnbeast | ☑ Derek Morgan | Criminal Minds | bloodcakedarmor | ☑ Comments: I’ve done pretty good on activity this month, much better than previous months and I hope to both keep that up and improve! Oz, I’ve been struggling a bit with lately voice wise but I think that is getting back on track too. I hope. Anyway, I’m open to any plotting! :D (Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - kitty_has_claws, 2012-09-01 04:17 pm UTC

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(no subject) - needmymp3, 2012-09-01 05:06 pm UTC

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(no subject) - bloodcakedarmor, 2012-09-01 07:08 pm UTC

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(no subject) - matter, 2012-09-01 10:13 pm UTC

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rack_em_up 2012-09-01 04:07 pm UTC (link)

Player name: Lena Character: Lacus Clyne ♬ Gundam SEED ♬ fields_of_hope Zelgadis Greywars ⚒ Slayers ⚒ _incurable Cross Marian ♱ D.Gray-Man ♱ rack_em_up Komui Lee ☢ D.Gray-Man ☢ komurin Saya Otonashi ♛ Blood+ ♛ crimson_blade Conrad Weller ♞ Kyou Kara Maou ♞ edgeofsalvation Tony Stark ♠ Marvel Cinematic Universe ♠ one_liner Penelope Garcia ☎ Criminal Minds ☎ unmitigated Comments: I could use plotting for all my kids! Always with the more things to do. But especially I would like new CR for all of them. (Feedback is love too, of course.) I'm not going to get into it for each muse individually because wow this would get unwieldy real fast, but on request I could be more specific! (Reply to this) (Thread)

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goddessofwar 2012-09-01 04:08 pm UTC (link)

Player name: AC Sasha (Athena) | Saint Seiya: The Lost Canvas | goddessofwar | ☑ | HMD Kohran Li | Sakura Taisen / Sakura Wars | koubu_mama | ☑ | HMD Reki | Haibane Renmei | cast_a_pebble | ☑ | HMD Comments: First off, thank you for all the CR! I'm aware that I've been generally slow on things and that I need to catch up with regards to tagging out, and have my characters meet new people. |Da I really want to play with everyone of you and get back to doing that again, time and energy permitting. Otherwise, do hit me up if you have any questions, or if there's anything about my playing that got you headscratching and stuff! (Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - vikingly, 2012-09-01 04:22 pm UTC

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thisiscalm 2012-09-01 04:08 pm UTC (link)

Player name: Rica Character: Spencer Reid | Criminal Minds | thisiscalm | ☑ Link to private HMD if preferred: HMD/Contact Comments: There's been a lot of drama happening lately, and I'm really hoping to scale that back a bit in the coming months. I'm also planning to finally get the criminology class up and running, as soon as it makes sense to do so. My intentions, let me show you them! Character: Aidan Reilly | Original Character | redclayheroics | ☑ Link to private HMD if preferred: HMD/Contact Comments: Aidan's been taking the back seat for a while in regards to plot, and I'd really like to get him out and about a bit more. He's had some things puttering backstage, but ideas and suggestions would be very much welcome! Character: Spike | Buffy the Vampire Slayer | chipswiththat | ☑ Link to private HMD if preferred: HMD/Contact Comments: New kid! Please please tell me how I'm doing with him, no matter how small or big the problem might be! Don't be gentle! Character: Conscienti | MarinaNova | ai_conscienti | ☑ Link to private HMD if preferred: General contact post Comments: I love you guys. You are lovely and wonderful and I thank my lucky stars every day that I get to play with you! (Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - bloodcakedarmor, 2012-09-01 04:21 pm UTC

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	matter 2012-09-01 04:09 pm UTC (link)
	Player name: Crystal Character: Elena Gilbert | The Vampire Diaries | matter | ☑ Link to private HMD if preferred: »» Comments: My activity this month has been up and down, I admit! It started out pretty great, but I've been slow the past few weeks for RL reasons. I'm always here for any crit or plotting ideas! (Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - kitty_has_claws, 2012-09-01 04:12 pm UTC

(no subject) - matter, 2012-09-01 11:56 pm UTC

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kitty_has_claws 2012-09-01 04:09 pm UTC (link)

Player name: Haunt Character: Kitty Pyrde | Marvel: X-Men (AoA) | kitty_has_claws | ☑ Yuuri Shibuya | Kyou Kara Maou | demon_king | ☑ Euphemia li Britannia | Code Geass | friendly_fire | ☑ Sam Winchester | Supernatural | tallerthanthou | ☑ Xander Harris | Buffy the Vampire Slayer | notapirate | ☑ Veridical | MarinaNova | ai_veridical | ☑ Artemis Crock | DC: Young Justice | greenerarrow | 4th Wall/Reserve Comments: I love playing with all of you. Thanks for all the amazing CR! There are also timelines on everyone's journals if you want to look through those for activity. They aren't all fully up-to-date, but they all have the last few months at least. (Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - vikingly, 2012-09-01 04:28 pm UTC

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	notbabymagic 2012-09-01 04:10 pm UTC (link)
	Player name: Hina Character: Zatanna Zatara | DC (Young Justice) | notbabymagic | ☑ Link to private HMD if preferred: Here (should you choose; it really doesn't matter to me) Comments: My activity may slow within the next month or two due to work starting up again, but I will do my best to keep Zatanna as much of her ever charming presence in Marina as possible. (Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - kitty_has_claws, 2012-09-01 04:30 pm UTC

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	reaction 2012-09-01 04:17 pm UTC (link)
	Player name: Amy Character: Damon Salvatore | The Vampire Diaries | reaction | ☑ Link to private HMD if preferred: ✔ Comments: I've been busy with work lately and haven't been able to tag around as much as I'd like to, but I'd really like to work on getting Damon more random CR in the upcoming months. Open to plotting. Feel free to give any feedback/suggestions/etc. (Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - kitty_has_claws, 2012-09-01 04:19 pm UTC

(no subject) - thoughts, 2012-09-01 06:05 pm UTC

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Kristi vikingly 2012-09-01 04:17 pm UTC (link)

Player name: Kristi Character: Eric Northman| True Blood | vikingly | ☑ Link to private HMD if preferred: Private HMD I don't mind crit here, but if you prefer to put it in the private hmd, that's fine Comments: Eric is a new character both to Marina and to me so if you've got any pointers, crit or other comments, I'd appreciate them. I find he's getting a long with a few more people than I expected so I want to make sure I'm maintaining that dickhead persona that he retains in the show. I don't have any particular concerns about him beyond that right now I think. Character: Buffy Summers | Buffy the Vampire Slayer | doesntdamsel | ☑ Link to private HMD if preferred: Private HMD Up to you which one you use. I don't care either way. Comments: Buffy has been in the game a while so basically I just want to make sure she still sounds like herself. She's done a little bit of growing and settling down, but she should still sound and react like Buffy. No particular concerns but if you've got crit or suggestions please feel free to leave them. Character: Rogue | X-Men movies | ikindalikeit | ☑ Link to private HMD if preferred: Private HMD Second verse same as the first. See above Comments: Rogue is always the character I'm most insecure about because there are so many versions of her in the X-Men verse. She's a little meeker, more shy and younger than my other guys. She's been here a while though so I'm trying to let her grow a little, get more comfy with her power and come out of her shell a bit. (Reply to this) (Thread)

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Re: Kristi - touchyflaily, 2012-09-04 04:09 pm UTC

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	ex_fighter404 2012-09-01 04:20 pm UTC (link)
	Player name: Allie Character: Soubi Agatsuma | Loveless | fighter | ☑ HMD Comments: Some plotting would be awesome. Right now, anti-social thing that he is, the only thing that's really getting Soubi out and about is his art class. So it would be great for him to meet some new people. (Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - kitty_has_claws, 2012-09-01 04:40 pm UTC

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(no subject) - cheerleader, 2012-09-01 07:10 pm UTC

highest_caliber 2012-09-01 04:32 pm UTC (link)

Player name: Pip Characters: Ashton Anchors | Star Ocean Second Evolution (manga) | watch_my_back | ☑ Subaru Nakajima | Lyrical Nanoha Force (manga) | highest_caliber | ☑ Touma Kamijou | To aru Majutsu no Index (novels) | such_misfortune | ☑ Link to private HMD if preferred: Universal contact / HMD Comments: I was extremely slow and sporadic this month due to burning myself out on 4th Wall + other RP stuff. Accomplished less than I would have liked and tagged around even less so than that. I'm on hiatus now, hoping some distance will help with that. I also need to trim my roster and deal with some events elsewhere. (5 games, 11 characters, don't judge me >.>) For plans, there is some stuff plotted out for Touma in the near future, and I have some ideas for Subaru, but both she and Ashton could use more activity in general, so I'm up for ideas! (Reply to this) (Thread)

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eyeofthetiger 2012-09-01 04:37 pm UTC (link)

Player name: Parsnip Character: Dean Winchester | Supernatural | eyeofthetiger | ☑ Hei/Li Shenshung | Darker than BLACK | bottomless_pit | ☑ Bak Chang | D.Grayman | punching_bag | ☑ 4th wall: Max Klinger | M*A*S*H (TV) | delicatessant | Threads 4th wall: Aaron Hotchner | Criminal Minds | hotch_ner | Post Link to private HMD if preferred: HMDS are all available on each individual journal. Comments: General feedback is good. Honestly, I've been playing Hei and Dean for so long now, I worry that they're a bit too comfortable/set in their ways. As for Hei, there's no real canon support for how Hei acts in a relationship so knowing I'm handling that believably would be nice. Um... and that's all I can think of at the moment. I tend to play my characters instinctually so any help/thoughts would be appreciated! (Reply to this) (Thread)

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	needmymp3 2012-09-01 04:40 pm UTC (link)
	Player name: Oli Character: Peter Parker | S:TNA | webcrawler | ☑ Rebecca Crane | Assassin's Creed | needmymp3 | ☑ Tyki Mikk | D.Gray-Man | noahism | ☑ Link to private HMD if preferred: There's one here but w/e up to you. Comments: I'd also love feedback on Raven Darkholme (andproud) maybe? Sob, idk. (Reply to this) (Thread)

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hepatitis_c 2012-09-01 04:42 pm UTC (link)

Player name: Nick Character: Birdman | Galerians | hepatitis_c | ☑ Link to private HMD if preferred: mine is this one, but i dont mind crit here Comments: mostly im really concerned with making him a gross villain type without being one-dimensional cartoonishly evil if that makes sense? i hope im getting across the 'legitimately doesnt understand the human thought process' idea decently; if anyone has any pointers on how to convey that better though id love to hear them :Ua im also really trying to avoid being too wordy and that's still a work in progress, sorry everyone in the meantime ;3; (Reply to this) (Thread)

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thoughts 2012-09-01 04:43 pm UTC (link)

player name: tami characters     angel | the buffyverse → shanshu (☑)     quinn fabray | glee → cheerleader (☑)     sookie stackhouse | true blood → thoughts (☑) comments: i returned to work this month and knew i wasn't going to have much free time to rp while i was diving back into the fray. because of this, i avoided tagging into anything new for the most part and instead focused on getting my backtags done. my activity should be improving now that i'm getting back into the swing of things and am able to manage my time better. ♥ (Reply to this) (Thread)

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	liedtobatman 2012-09-01 04:46 pm UTC (link)
	Player name: Al Character: Tim Drake / Robin III| DC Comics | liedtobatman | ☑ Link to private HMD if preferred: ☑ Comments: While Tim's voice is always strong I've been feeling I could use some canon-review... so if you have any suggestions or critique feel free to poke me about it :3 (Reply to this) (Thread)

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alwaysthorsday 2012-09-01 04:49 pm UTC (link)

Player name: Tsu Character: Venom | The Amazing Spider-Man | blacktoxin | ☑ Link to private HMD if preferred: N/A, just feel free to comment here. Comments: I've been lacking with activity this month for all my characters due to some RL nonsense, but hoping to fix that! Sometimes I get unsure with Venom just because they are... incredibly bipolar, but at the same time, they're a long time muse, and I often feel very comfortable with what I have them do/not do. Character: Thor Odinson | The Avengers | alwaysthorsday | ☑ Link to private HMD if preferred: Feel free to just leave crit here! Comments: I am trying very hard to make Thor -not- a babbling infant when it comes to new technology and things, since it's incredibly easy to make him more dumb than he really is. Also, sometimes I slip up and don't have him talk so formally, which is something I need to work on, but yes! He's a new character and I'd really appreciate any crit. Character: Logan/Wolverine | X-Men movies | snktbub | ☑ Link to private HMD if preferred: I feel like I just... make Logan a snarky asshole, and that's it. I dunno. Pretty uncertain about him, but I figure time will maybe get me more comfortable. (Reply to this) (Thread)

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bluemoondog 2012-09-01 04:52 pm UTC (link)

Player name: Bren Character: Helix Wamtani | Original Character | bluemoondog | ☑ Link to private HMD if preferred: HMD Comments: I'm completely open for thoughts on Helix as a character. I know it's hard to crit him seeing as he doesn't have an actual fandom to go from but any feedback is welcome! Let me know what you think ♥ Other: Just a reminder I have an Opt-out for Helix. In case you wish to tell me to tone down the trolling on your muse or tell me you do not want Negative CR/Helix to tag you. Anything really! I'm open for suggestions on what would work for you. Dropped Character: Haine Rammsteiner | Dogs:Bullets and Carnage | bites_back_hard | ☑ Link to private HMD if preferred: HMD/Contact Comments: Feel free to tell me what you think of how I played him even though he's not in the game anymore. He was kind of a shaky and difficult muse to get out and about. Blah blah excuses. Also feel free to use their HMD for either of them if you want to talk privately. 4th Wall Cast Sam Merlotte | True Blood | turnsonadime Mako | Avatar: the Legend of Korra | alwaysinthegame Zuko | Avatar: the Last Airbender | never_happy Kurt Wagner/Nightcrawler | Marvel | errolflynnrawks Sollux Captor | Homestuck | twinarmageddons Comments: Listed from strongest to weakest I think. Be gentle ;; But please let me know any sort of crit for any of them, especially Sam. (Reply to this) (Thread)

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	timelesspromise 2012-09-01 05:06 pm UTC (link)
	Player name: Char Character: Homura Akemi | Madoka☆Magica | timelesspromise | ☑ Link to private HMD if preferred: here if you prefer that, either way Comments: Always up for more plotting. She'll also be doing her punishment this coming week I think, if anyone wants to attend her bullshit lecture. (Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - cheerleader, 2012-09-01 07:18 pm UTC

trappedinresin 2012-09-01 05:08 pm UTC (link)

Player name: Kitten Character: Korra | The Legend of Korra | watertribe | ☑ Link to private HMD if preferred: Private HMD if wanted Comments: I'm really new at Korra, so if you see any inconsistencies with her let me now. Likewise, if you have any questions as regards to anything, let me know as well! I'll try to answer everything. Character: Yuuki Kuran | Vampire Knight | trappedinresin | ☑ Link to private HMD if preferred: Private HMD if wanted Comments: Feel free to hit me with anything! Likewise, I'd love to plot with her a bit more, especially with all the new vampires in the dome. She's definitely wanting to keep an eye on things. (Reply to this) (Thread)

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amplified 2012-09-01 05:22 pm UTC (link)

Player name: Laura Character: Caroline Forbes | The Vampire Diaries | amplified | ☑ Comments: I got hit with burnout this month (starting last month) and I know my tags have been pretty bland. RL is crazy this month so I'm laying low with her. But I'd really love to figure out a way to get Caroline more involved and back into the game as I canon review! PLOT WITH ME. YOU GUYS ARE JUST FABULOUS. (Reply to this) (Thread)

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tothe8th 2012-09-01 05:50 pm UTC (link)

Player name: Megan Character: Vriska Serket | Homestuck | tothe8th | ☑ Link to private HMD if preferred: Not necessarily preferred, but here. Either is fine. Comments: I still need to branch out more for CR, but I still kind of worry about annoying people. I do have a permissions post and an opt out post that I...need to actually post to the permissions post thing on the mod journal, oops. But I am super open to plotting with anyone, and Vriska has an IC punishment that I should play out fairly soon, so there's that. (Reply to this) (Thread)

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	sadistfaction 2012-09-01 06:08 pm UTC (link)
	Player name: Haru  Character: Sougo Okita | Gintama | sadistfaction | ☑ Hikaru Hitachiin | Ouran High School Host Club | ☑ Link to private HMD if preferred: On top of both journals Comments: I have nothing in particular. Give me anything you got! I'll be able to focus on this later when I get home haha! (Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - kitty_has_claws, 2012-09-01 08:19 pm UTC

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might 2012-09-01 06:27 pm UTC (link)

Player name: Eri Character: Faith Lehane | Buffy the Vampire Slayer / Angel | might | ☑ Castiel | Supernatural seek | ☑ Link to private HMD if preferred: There are timelines and private HMDs on both of their journals, but anon's off on them, so you might be better off here. Comments: i also brought sophie-anne leclerq (fauxlosophy) for fourth wall, so she's up for assessment too, if you've got comments. my to-improve list for september: 01. clean up tags (no double-convos in one tag, for example!) 02. tag out more (i tend to set up plots oocly, and focus a lot on upkeep of current CR, whoops.) 03. canon review castiel if this helps you guys give me anything specific, yay! if not, and you've got something else in mind, yay! (Reply to this) (Thread)

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