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Tweak says, "Badger badger badger"

PEPPER P. (saltedand) wrote in doors,
@ 2013-03-08 18:06:00

Entry tags:

damian wayne, death, gwen stacy, hoban washburne, joker, robin hood, simon tam

fuck trees, fuck dead shit, fuck the woods.

missed a game. out ten thou because robin fucking hood wanted to donate.

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	saltedand 2013-03-08 07:10 pm UTC (link)
	fuck no. (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	pesadilla 2013-03-08 07:11 pm UTC (link)
	fuck trees, fuck dead shit, fuck the woods. fuck no. e.e. cummings tackles cursing. (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	saltedand 2013-03-08 07:12 pm UTC (link)
	ee who? sounds like a pay-per-view porn star. (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

pesadilla
2013-03-08 07:15 pm UTC (link)

Close enough.

i like my body when it is with your
body. It is so quite new a thing.
Muscles better and nerves more.
i like your body. i like what it does,
i like its hows. i like to feel the spine
of your body and its bones,and the trembling
-firm-smooth ness and which i will
again and again and again
kiss, i like kissing this and that of you,
i like, slowly stroking the,shocking fuzz
of your electric furr,and what-is-it comes
over parting flesh….And eyes big love-crumbs,

and possibly i like the thrill

of under me you so quite new

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	pesadilla 2013-03-08 07:15 pm UTC (link)
	Saucy, no? (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	saltedand 2013-03-08 07:21 pm UTC (link)
	the fuck does it mean. (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	soundofwings 2013-03-08 07:24 pm UTC (link)
	[Posted Anon.] It means love. Sex and love. The way sex is when you're in love. (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	saltedand 2013-03-08 07:26 pm UTC (link)
	[skeeeeptical] thought poetry was all flowers and rhyming. (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	soundofwings 2013-03-08 07:30 pm UTC (link)
	No, not at all. It is all about life. Death and decay, love and passion. Sex. Blood. Things visceral and warped. It is all there. (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	saltedand 2013-03-08 07:32 pm UTC (link)
	sex and blood in poetry. huh. (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	soundofwings 2013-03-08 07:37 pm UTC (link)
	Indeed. Not quite so boring as many make it out to be. If you are especially interested, there are poets that are less likely to rhyme and more likely to focus on darker themes. (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	saltedand 2013-03-08 07:38 pm UTC (link)
	[doubtful] I don't read poetry. (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	soundofwings 2013-03-08 07:42 pm UTC (link)
	You don't read flowers and rhyming. There is a difference. (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	saltedand 2013-03-08 07:44 pm UTC (link)
	whatever. (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

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	pesadilla 2013-03-08 07:41 pm UTC (link)
	You tell him, anon. (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	soundofwings 2013-03-08 07:47 pm UTC (link)
	He seems resistant. I shall leave him in your hands. (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	pesadilla 2013-03-08 07:50 pm UTC (link)
	He is rather cranky, isn't he? (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

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	saltedand 2013-03-08 07:21 pm UTC (link)
	reads like porn. (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	pesadilla 2013-03-08 07:24 pm UTC (link)
	You adding more lines to your poem or r u srs? (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	saltedand 2013-03-08 07:25 pm UTC (link)
	sex written out like that. (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

pesadilla
2013-03-08 07:29 pm UTC (link)

hawt. Here's another:

when my love comes to see me it’s
just a little like music,a
little more like curving colour(say
orange)
against silence,or darkness….

the coming of my love emits
a wonderful smell in my mind,

you should see when i turn to find
her how my least heart-beat becomes less.
And then all her beauty is a vise

whose stilling lips murder suddenly me,

but of my corpse the tool her smile makes something
suddenly luminous and precise

—and then we are I and She….

what is that the hurdy-gurdy’s playing

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	saltedand 2013-03-08 07:31 pm UTC (link)
	you going to keep doing this all day? (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	pesadilla 2013-03-08 07:33 pm UTC (link)
	That depends. Will you pay me to stop? (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	saltedand 2013-03-08 07:34 pm UTC (link)
	the fuck why would I pay you anything (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	pesadilla 2013-03-08 07:35 pm UTC (link)
	Okay, you're confusing me. Are we making a collaborative poem or or or we conversing or what are we doing? Poetry is a wily thing. You never know, you know? (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

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