16 February 2009 @ 08:22 pm
Theme #11: Public Sex // Sex in Public 5 of 10  
TITLE: JACKPOT
AUTHOR: [info]frantic_quest
A/N: Unbetad because I wrote this tonight, at the last minute. It’s only my second fic in the qaf world so I will hopefully improve!


Jackpot

“Oh my God, Brian, isn’t this exciting? Look at all the people…and the slot machines…and the lights…and the mirrors…and…just everything!” Justin’s head was turning from one side to another at a speed I was starting to find alarming. Christ, at the rate he was going he was going to have whiplash before we made it halfway across the casino floor.

“Justin, can you at least try to act like this isn’t the first time you’ve been allowed out in public?” I sighed loudly for effect, but I kept a guiding hand firmly at the small of Sunshine in Wonderland’s back. I was afraid I might lose him among the middle-aged, overweight hetero masses swarming throughout the gaudy and obscenely loud gaming hall if I let go of him for even a second.

From what I had observed so far, Atlantic City was most definitely not my idea of America’s Playground. In my expert advertising opinion, it was a resort desperately in need of some new marketing strategies, all needing to be aimed at the gay male demographic that was obviously being completely ignored. I held back a shudder as I glimpsed another scantily dressed cocktail waitress strut by on high heels. We had only been here for a short while but I was fairly certain by now that hot, tight-assed cocktail waiters were going to be a rare commodity in this town.

Jesus, I was already feeling nauseated at the thought of venturing onto the local beaches. I hadn’t seen even one hard body that would do justice to a Speedo yet. Well, except for two notable exceptions, and Justin and I really didn’t count since we could admire ourselves whenever we wanted to anyway.

“Brian, can we play some slot machines? Look! That one over there looks like fun! I love Wheel of Fortune!” Justin was practically jumping up and down with excitement now. He was tugging at my fucking arm, pulling me steadily toward a noisy, blinking machine with a bullshit promise of a $100,000 payout daily. “Do you feel lucky Brian?”

Reluctantly letting myself be dragged closer to the headache inducing one-armed bandit, an apt nickname, I thought sarcastically, I indulgently smiled as Justin gazed up at me and smiled happily.

“Yeah twat,” I whispered in his ear as I surreptitiously squeezed his fine ass, “I have a feeling I’m going to be very fucking lucky, very fucking soon. “

“Later,” Atlantic City’s newest high roller answered, already totally engrossed in figuring out what all the dinging bells and flashing lights meant to his chances at winning the jackpot. “Let me play here for a while.”

I leaned in closer, pushing my hard cock against his back briefly; I was satisfied at the breathless laugh that Justin huffed in my direction. “But all these homely heteros are gonna make my dick soft if you don’t let me fuck you soon.” I felt he deserved a fair warning, and he turned and pressed a brief, but intense kiss on my lips to let me know that he got the message loud and clear, so I backed off and let the lad play with his new toy. For the most part, he was good boy.

Thirty minutes later, I was at the end of my patience and I was also sure that all of the flashing lights were going to induce an epileptic seizure in one of us. I needed a stiff drink and a place to sick my stiff cock, not necessarily in that order, so I leaned over Justin’s shoulder and pushed the payout button, grapping the voucher it spit out, and shoving it into my pocket carelessly.

“Brian!” Justin protested weakly, “Couldn’t I just play for five more minutes? I’m sure I’m like two pulls away from winning the jackpot!”

“Justin!” I mocked gently, “In five minutes I can have you five minutes away from shooting on the nearest bathroom stall!”

He laughed softly as I took the lead, half-dragging him toward the nearest restroom sign. As I was closing in on the men’s room, I paused when I noticed a Temporarily Closed sign in front of a row of slot machines in a relatively quiet corner of the casino floor. Looking around casually, but carefully, I quickly pulled Justin into the small alcove, and pressed him firmly up against a flashing machine.

“ Shit Brian, what the fuck are you doing? If we get caught we’re gonna get banned from the casino!” Justin briefly struggled at the thought of being exiled from his new favoritest place on earth, but when you thrust your hand down the front of his waistband, his protests turned into moans, and he pushed back obligingly against your cock.

“Shh, Sunshine, it’ll be quick and dirty just like we like it. “ I nuzzled into his neck and licked my way to his shoulder before ending with a sharp bite that would be sure to leave a small red mark. Just like all artists signed their work, I always left my seal of approval on Justin somewhere as we fucked.

“Here, let me rub you for luck.” I freed his cock from his tight black jeans and stroked, laughing as he threw his head back on my shoulder and arched into my hand wantonly. I loved it when he let his slutty side shine.

Rolling his shirt up with my free hand, I slid my way from his stomach to his chest, pausing to scrape my nail against his nipple, eliciting a moan that had me glance around to make sure we hadn’t attracted any unwanted attention.

When I was confident we weren’t about to be interrupted by casino security, I reached into my pocket for a condom and lube, allowed my own hard-on to spring free, and bared Justin’s gorgeous ass just enough to give me full access to his crack and balls. Deftly slipping on the condom with one hand and keeping the other occupied with Justin’s now dripping stiffie, I roughly prepared him with a little finger fucking action.

When I was sure he was loose enough to take me, I grabbed his hip and plunged in smoothly, biting back the groan that always threatened to escape me whenever I entered his tight, hot hole. I stilled for a moment, letting Justin adjust to the sudden penetration, and after a few seconds he gripped my thigh, letting me know he was ready to go. Getting the green light, I thrust in as deeply as I could, before pulling back out and immediately reloading, burying my length as far as he could take it. I started picking up our rhythm with quick, hard thrusts, punctuated by smoother, longer ones every few strokes, knowing by his panting breaths and long, low moans that I was grazing his prostate on every pass.

Releasing his hip, I reached up and twisted my hands in his hair, tugging his head back and baring his graceful neck to my exploring lips and teeth. I kept my other hand busy on his cock, matching the thrusting from behind with the stroking on the front.

As I panted loudly against his neck, I felt my balls tighten and heard a familiar pounding begin in my ears, so I whispered, “Come for me Justin,” as my cock exploded in his ass. I grunted as I unleashed my load in the condom and felt his muscles tighten as his come sprayed over my hand and splattered onto the slot machine he was pressed against.

We breathed heavily together for a few more minutes, before I gently pulled out, took care of the well used condom, and helped him straighten his clothes. He turned in my arms and wrapped his arms around me, kissing me happily. I returned the kiss, not because I was happy, but because he deserved a reward for consistently being such a fine fuck.

“Brian?” he was frowning a little now, what the fuck?

“Justin?” I parroted, wondering what romantic bullshit would come flying out of his mouth now.

“I read somewhere that casinos have like a bazillion cameras all over the place, and they can see everything that happens everywhere on the gaming floor. Do you think they caught us fucking on camera?” Justin was looking over my shoulder with some alarm. “What would they think about it?”

“What…taping two fabulous fags like us fucking in their hetero haven?” I smirked down at him, dropping a kiss on his nose just to reassure him. “They should immediately make us the highlight of their new advertising campaign aimed at attracting hordes of horny homos into the Jersey Shore!”

“In other words,” Justin laughed, “They’d hit the jackpot!”
 
 
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notreallyme10[info]notreallyme10 on February 16th, 2009 09:12 pm (UTC)
“Here, let me rub you for luck.”

LOL! Perfect Brian line... dirty, funny and a little cheesy :)

Very hot!
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frantic_quest[info]frantic_quest on February 18th, 2009 08:14 am (UTC)
Only someone who looks as good as Brian does can get away with a lame line like that!!

I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Fran
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[info]noteverything on February 16th, 2009 10:16 pm (UTC)
This was fun!

I got a kick out of several lines:

Well, except for two notable exceptions, and Justin and I really didn’t count since we could admire ourselves whenever we wanted to anyway.

“Here, let me rub you for luck.”

“ Shit Brian, what the fuck are you doing? If we get caught we’re gonna get banned from the casino!”


And the ending was cute too. Thanks!
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frantic_quest: sexy smile brian[info]frantic_quest on February 18th, 2009 08:59 am (UTC)
I had a lot of fun writing this one. I'm really glad you liked it!
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xie_xie_xie: Brian - screwed[info]xie_xie_xie on February 16th, 2009 10:17 pm (UTC)
This was terrific!

I kept a guiding hand firmly at the small of Sunshine in Wonderland’s back.

That totally cracked me up, as did this:

Justin briefly struggled at the thought of being exiled from his new favoritest place on earth

Brian's snark just shines through, begining to end -- as does the fact that he's completely full of shit totally fucked:

I returned the kiss, not because I was happy, but because he deserved a reward for consistently being such a fine fuck.

Well done!



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frantic_quest: cha-cha[info]frantic_quest on February 18th, 2009 09:08 am (UTC)
These boys are truly a pleasure to write, and no one could ever be as snarky yet sweet as Brian.

I'm very happy that you enjoyed this!!

Fran
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rosy5000: BJ Hustler!Justin[info]rosy5000 on February 16th, 2009 10:24 pm (UTC)
Very hot! And I love Justin's excitement walking into the casino. :)
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frantic_quest: rim[info]frantic_quest on February 18th, 2009 09:11 am (UTC)
In my brain, Justin loves to go on hot, new adventures with Brian!

I'm pleased you liked it!

Fran
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[info]michira_70 on February 17th, 2009 01:17 am (UTC)
Hot. Funny. Dirty. Great. Nothing more to say!!
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frantic_quest: b/w[info]frantic_quest on February 18th, 2009 09:14 am (UTC)
Thank you. I was definitely aiming for hot, funny, and dirty. Great? Well, I'm glad you enjoyed it!!
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[info]besamislabios on February 17th, 2009 05:53 am (UTC)
This was fantastic, funny, hot, and Brian is so Brian and I loved that. I had fun reading this, thank you for writing it. :D
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frantic_quest: sexy smile brian[info]frantic_quest on February 18th, 2009 09:20 am (UTC)
Thank you very much for the compliments. I really enjoy writing from Brian's POV because he's so over the top he'll say & do almost anything.
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pye_wacket[info]pye_wacket on February 17th, 2009 06:51 am (UTC)
hahahahaa!! I loved this!! *rub you for luck*
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frantic_quest: blue background[info]frantic_quest on February 18th, 2009 09:22 am (UTC)
I couldn't resist adding that line. I'm glad I made you laugh!

Fran
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[info]bulagirl on February 17th, 2009 01:40 pm (UTC)
LOL, This was hilarious and hot! great story :)
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frantic_quest: sexy smile brian[info]frantic_quest on February 18th, 2009 09:23 am (UTC)
Thank you. I'm relieved everyone seems to have enjoyed it!

Fran
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[info]nerilka24 on February 17th, 2009 02:25 pm (UTC)
Wow this is great, from beginning to end!! Hot, and funny, and naughty - perfect :D
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frantic_quest: s5[info]frantic_quest on February 18th, 2009 09:25 am (UTC)
Thank you. I'm a little overwhelmed at the positive response. I don't write much in this fandom.

And yes, they are naughty boys! It's why we love them so much!

Fran
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[info]nerilka24 on February 18th, 2009 12:17 pm (UTC)
Write more. Pretty please. We like you, you can stay ;)
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frantic_quest: sexy smile brian[info]frantic_quest on February 18th, 2009 12:38 pm (UTC)
lol-Thank you!!! Yeehaw...I can stay!!
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[info]nerilka24 on February 18th, 2009 01:10 pm (UTC)
YAY!! Make yourself comfy :D
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outlander: Always Kiss[info]outlander on February 17th, 2009 02:27 pm (UTC)
This is hysterical and hot and perfectly Brian at his snarkiest.

Sunshine in Wonderland *snort*
“Here, let me rub you for luck.” Adorkable Brian!!!!
And the camera's?
You crack me up. This was such a hot, fun read. Thank you!!
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frantic_quest: back room kiss[info]frantic_quest on February 18th, 2009 10:29 am (UTC)
Yes, he is adorkable isn't he? I loved reading that adorkable Brian entry from I think the coffee club.

Well, the camera's...yeah...who wouldn't want that footage??

Glad you liked it!!

Fran
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qafmaniac: JUSTIN'S MAGICAL HEART SHAPED ASS[info]qafmaniac on February 17th, 2009 02:39 pm (UTC)
This was HOT and it totally cracked me up!!
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frantic_quest: shower kiss[info]frantic_quest on February 18th, 2009 10:33 am (UTC)
Thank you, I'm happy it made you happy!!
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Fundles: 308 fancy that[info]fun_demented on February 17th, 2009 02:45 pm (UTC)
This is great! YAY YAY YAY YAY!
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frantic_quest[info]frantic_quest on February 18th, 2009 10:33 am (UTC)
Thank you!!!!
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Carol[info]brokeaholic on February 17th, 2009 07:27 pm (UTC)
That was great, I really enjoyed it.

I think this was the first time I've read a B/J fic with them in a casino.

“Justin, can you at least try to act like this isn’t the first time you’ve been allowed out in public?”

*snorts* that was too funny!

Carol
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frantic_quest: sexy smile brian[info]frantic_quest on February 18th, 2009 10:36 am (UTC)
I do think a casino would be too het for Brian, but he'd go for Justin, cause he's whipped that way-lol!!!
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[info]ex_4cupcakes771 on February 17th, 2009 07:32 pm (UTC)
I adored this!

*Sunshine in Wonderland*

This is brilliant.
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frantic_quest: 101[info]frantic_quest on February 18th, 2009 10:37 am (UTC)
Thank you. I had fun with it!
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testdog65: B/J 103 Babylon faces let's hear it for [info]testdog65 on February 17th, 2009 07:59 pm (UTC)
This was definitely fun! The image of Brian and Justin in an Atlantic City casino is just too humorous for words. Hot and very entertaining!

~Ellen
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frantic_quest: shower kiss[info]frantic_quest on February 18th, 2009 10:39 am (UTC)
I've never seen anyone near as hot as these two at an AC casino, but as you can tell I've dreamed about it!!
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secretsolitaire: brian smile[info]secretsolitaire on February 17th, 2009 08:25 pm (UTC)
LOL, this was great fun! You've got a nice Brian voice here. :-)
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frantic_quest: sexy smile brian[info]frantic_quest on February 18th, 2009 10:42 am (UTC)
Thank you. I love them both, but I like writing from Brian's POV best!
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[info]sjmpets on February 17th, 2009 09:22 pm (UTC)
so enjoyable. i'll be looking for all those horny homos the next time i hit the casinos.
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frantic_quest: first kiss[info]frantic_quest on February 18th, 2009 10:43 am (UTC)
Good luck on finding anyone that hot anywhere on the entire Jersey Shore! I've been looking for years-lol!!
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happier_bunny: b/j wall kiss[info]happier_bunny on February 18th, 2009 01:47 pm (UTC)
OH this was great fun! I adore snarky Brian and this “What…taping two fabulous fags like us fucking in their hetero haven?” I smirked down at him, dropping a kiss on his nose just to reassure him. “They should immediately make us the highlight of their new advertising campaign aimed at attracting hordes of horny homos into the Jersey Shore!”

Cracked me up

And this was so funny AND hot: “ Shit Brian, what the fuck are you doing? If we get caught we’re gonna get banned from the casino!” Justin briefly struggled at the thought of being exiled from his new favoritest place on earth, but when you thrust your hand down the front of his waistband, his protests turned into moans, and he pushed back obligingly against your cock.
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[info]shenova on February 18th, 2009 01:50 pm (UTC)
Now they know how to win the Jackpot I am sure if someone noticed them they just watched, I think they are more worried about the money anyway why bother with two men having fun. That was nice and hot.
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kari: Brian Justin beauty 410[info]kari77 on February 18th, 2009 06:29 pm (UTC)
lol I love that. Snarky Brian at his best.

In my expert advertising opinion, it was a resort desperately in need of some new marketing strategies, all needing to be aimed at the gay male demographic that was obviously being completely ignored.
*agrees* Such a shame, really.

I hadn’t seen even one hard body that would do justice to a Speedo yet. Well, except for two notable exceptions, and Justin and I really didn’t count since we could admire ourselves whenever we wanted to anyway.
loool

“I read somewhere that casinos have like a bazillion cameras all over the place, and they can see everything that happens everywhere on the gaming floor. Do you think they caught us fucking on camera?”
Exactly my thoughts. *giggle*

Very hot! Thank you. :)
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[info]minuet9 on February 18th, 2009 07:49 pm (UTC)
Very hot

Loved "Justin and I really didn’t count since we could admire ourselves whenever we wanted to anyway."

Can just imagine Justin 'bouncing' through a casino with Bored Brian in tow.

*goes off giggling over "rub you for luck'*
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qafcracked[info]qafcracked on February 21st, 2009 04:16 pm (UTC)
XD This was totally AWESOME!
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tootiredtosleep[info]tootiredtosleep on February 21st, 2009 05:20 pm (UTC)
Wish I had been watching from the casino security office. I'd have saved that tape to watch over and over again! Yes, voyeurism has it's place in this life!
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