This was fun!
I got a kick out of several lines:
Well, except for two notable exceptions, and Justin and I really didn’t count since we could admire ourselves whenever we wanted to anyway.
“Here, let me rub you for luck.”
“ Shit Brian, what the fuck are you doing? If we get caught we’re gonna get banned from the casino!”
And the ending was cute too. Thanks!
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B/J PWP Writing Challenges
NotEverything (noteverything) wrote in bj_action on February 16th, 2009 at 10:16 pm