16 February 2009 @ 08:41 pm
Theme #11: Public Sex // Sex in Public 9 of 10  
Title: A Rainy Day

Author: Xie

Challenge: Sex in public places

Timeline: Season One

Notes: Thanks to Ellen for a last-minute beta!



The diner was crazy. It was pouring outside, and people kept pushing in the front door, rain and wind blowing in with them. The people near the door would yell, Debbie would holler that there was an hour wait, and I just kept sloshing coffee into cups and clearing away dirty dishes.

I shouldn't have noticed when Brian came in, but I did. He slid into a booth even though it wasn't his turn, and ignored the glares and objections from the people ahead of him. I ignored them, too, and filled his coffee cup, but he barely looked at me, just barked out his order and started reading the paper.

I wiped the table next to his, and a gust of wind sent the rain pebbling against the window. Brian didn't even look up.

Coffee... clear… wipe… try to smile while someone pushed past me to their table. I didn't actually have to piss, but the only way I knew how to get a break was to lock myself in the bathroom. But just as I opened the door, someone pushed in behind me.

"Fuck off…"

Brian shut the door and pushed me against it. "Why, Justin, is that the kind of excellent customer service the Liberty Diner is famous for?" He was nuzzling into my neck while he said it.

I laughed. I couldn't help it. His teeth were nipping at my ear and his hands were pushing up my apron and opening my jeans. I felt him start licking my throat and I forgot about Debbie, the diner, and all the people waiting outside. And when he dropped to his knees in front of me, licking and kissing at my belly and my pubes, I forget pretty much everything else and just grabbed his hair and tried not to shout.

His mouth was hot and wet on my cock, and I heard a sound like whimpering in my throat when he flattened his tongue on the head. I gasped and bent my knees, trying to get deeper inside his mouth, make him suck me harder, and not come in four seconds.

After ten, though, I gave up, and shot down his throat while he swallowed around the head of my cock and played with my balls with his fingers.

He hadn't even stood up yet when Debbie started hammering on the door, yelling at me to get back to work.

Brian smeared my come across my mouth with his lips. "Better do what she says before she fires your ass."

I was still licking my lips when he pulled the door open. "Why, hello, Deb. I know this is a progressive establishment, but shouldn't you be using the ladies' room?"

She glared at me while I fastened my jeans and pulled my apron back down. I didn't listen to the lecture; I was still feeling a little dizzy.

I didn't get off until midnight, two hours after my shift was supposed to be over. It was still raining, harder than ever, but the wind had died down a little. I was huddling under the awning, pulling on my jacket, when I saw Brian's Jeep by the curb. I ran over, smiling, but it was empty. I stood there, confused, and then I felt a tug on my arm, and he pulled me against him.

The rain had wet his hair and skin, and scattered across his eyelashes. I licked it off his mouth before he kissed me.

"You owe me a blowjob," he said, pulling me around the corner, towards the alley.

I stumbled after him, laughing. "Brian… it's fucking pouring…"

He leaned against the dark wall, and shrugged. His jeans were open, and his cock was lying half-hard against his skin, leaking a little. I felt myself licking my lips.

He laughed when I slid down to my knees, but it turned into a hiss when my lips locked around his cock. I pulled it into my mouth, feeling it get harder, longer, thicker… tasting his come as it leaked out onto my tongue.

His hands tugged at my hair, and I wanted to push up against them. But I just kept playing with him, taking little licks at his slit to taste him, then teasing the sensitive spot under the rim.

My hands were on his hips, and I shifted up a little so I could take him deeper in. He moaned when the head of his cock hit the back of my throat. His skin was warm against my lips, but I could feel the cold rain mixing with my spit and his pre-come, running down my face, little droplets sparkling on his pubes.

Someone walked by on the sidewalk outside the alley, and I heard them laughing, but Brian had started thrusting his hips against my mouth while I sucked on him, and I didn't care who saw us, or what anyone thought.

When he came it was sudden and burning hot. I swallowed almost all of it, and tasted the rain on his skin while I licked up what I'd missed. He pulled me up and kissed me, rain in his hair, and in mine, the knees of my jeans soaked from the ground.

I rested against him for just a second. "You'd better be driving me home."

He pushed away from the wall and laughed. "Do I look like a taxi driver?" But after he fastened his jeans, he dropped his arm around my shoulder and steered me back out to the Jeep.

 
 
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[info]ex_4cupcakes771 on February 16th, 2009 08:03 pm (UTC)
Holy-double-blow-jobs Batgirl!

That was so hot and sweet and sexy, Xie. Brian is so dead in the water for Justin, it's adorable. I've just recently been watching some of Season One again.

This is just right on.



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Fundles: ice cream kiss[info]fun_demented on February 16th, 2009 08:47 pm (UTC)
I guess Justin and Brian called you and told you this story, because IT IS EXACTLY THEM! And Deb, too. Very sensual and romantic. LOVE the watery sex and Justin's drenched jeans. Love that Justin gets molested during shift and that Brian totally takes cuts in front of everyone! Love that Deb's the mother to all her boys. Love it all!
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notreallyme10[info]notreallyme10 on February 16th, 2009 09:51 pm (UTC)
Mmmm... I love the rain!

His skin was warm against my lips, but I could feel the cold rain mixing with my spit and his pre-come, running down my face, little droplets sparkling on his pubes. Oh My God. This line just kills me DEAD.
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[info]noteverything on February 16th, 2009 10:29 pm (UTC)
Xie, you and the rain are going to be the death of me. I love every single time you write about B/J in the rain.

My favorite sexy bit: I swallowed almost all of it, and tasted the rain on his skin while I licked up what I'd missed. He pulled me up and kissed me, rain in his hair, and in mine, the knees of my jeans soaked from the ground.

And my favorite bit of all, because it's *gorgeous*: I wiped the table next to his, and a gust of wind sent the rain pebbling against the window.

Thanks for writing this!
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rosy5000: BJ diner booth[info]rosy5000 on February 16th, 2009 11:39 pm (UTC)
As hot as this was, what I really loved was how it showed Brian had no chance to resist Justin from the beginning. ;)
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frantic_quest: sexy smile brian[info]frantic_quest on February 17th, 2009 12:14 am (UTC)
Hmmm....Brian was doing a little stalking of his own here...but what a pay off!!

I can absolutely picture this as a real scene in the show...if TPTB were ever generous enough to give us more than 90 seconds of bj sex per episode!!

I love the rainy setting too.
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circadia: golden kisses[info]circadia on February 17th, 2009 03:51 am (UTC)
"Why, hello, Deb. I know this is a progressive establishment, but shouldn't you be using the ladies' room?"
*giggles* Such a Brian remark.

The rain had wet his hair and skin, and scattered across his eyelashes. I licked it off his mouth before he kissed me.
Ahh I LOVE the rain imagery!
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[info]besamislabios on February 17th, 2009 05:05 am (UTC)
Oh my, this is gorgeous, hot, beautiful and so very hot. :)
Here, some of my favourite lines, but I truly loved everything, thank you for writing this, Xie.

The rain had wet his hair and skin, and scattered across his eyelashes. I licked it off his mouth before he kissed me.

but I could feel the cold rain mixing with my spit and his pre-come, running down my face, little droplets sparkling on his pubes.

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pye_wacket[info]pye_wacket on February 17th, 2009 05:45 am (UTC)
"Why, hello, Deb. I know this is a progressive establishment, but shouldn't you be using the ladies' room?"

YOU absolutly know Brian and Justin inside and out!!
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[info]michira_70 on February 17th, 2009 07:47 am (UTC)
This is very beautiful, hot and sexy.
I love the sex in the rain idea.
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outlander: Wet Hair Kiss[info]outlander on February 17th, 2009 01:48 pm (UTC)
Double blowjobs with a side of Wet!Brian&Justin!
*flails*

And when he dropped to his knees in front of me, licking and kissing at my belly and my pubes,
For some reason, this line just grabbed me in an Oh-So pleasant way.

The rain had wet his hair and skin, and scattered across his eyelashes. I licked it off his mouth before he kissed me.
I love the rain soaked eyelashes image.

This was hot and lovely. And perfect S1. Thanks!
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[info]bulagirl on February 17th, 2009 02:38 pm (UTC)
This was very hot and sweet. I loved it!
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[info]bellaaurora on February 17th, 2009 02:47 pm (UTC)
Awww cute and hot first season!
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testdog65: B/J 110 hotel kiss B's hand on J's face[info]testdog65 on February 17th, 2009 07:23 pm (UTC)
Why is it that when Brian and Justin share reciprocal blow jobs we all win? Season one Brian unable to resist Justin is such a thing of beauty here! As is the whole mood of this fic. :)

~Ellen
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[info]elke_tanzer on February 17th, 2009 08:16 pm (UTC)
*spontaneously combusts*

Wow.
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secretsolitaire: lovers in the rain[info]secretsolitaire on February 17th, 2009 08:29 pm (UTC)
Mmmmm, I love the way you use the rain here. *uses rain icon even though it's het*
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brianslave68: bj kissing in leather 310[info]brianslave68 on February 17th, 2009 09:12 pm (UTC)
I love how season 1 Brian cannot resist temptation when it comes to Justin.
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[info]sjmpets on February 17th, 2009 09:45 pm (UTC)
so hot i'm speechless.
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(Anonymous) on February 17th, 2009 11:38 pm (UTC)
OMG!!...oh my freaking god!!!...... that was simply HOT HOT HOT!!!!!..... phew!!... am burning up here~!!!.. cheers, ergenie
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bodleian[info]bodleian on February 18th, 2009 12:39 am (UTC)
I could see this happening so easily and Deb pounding on the door is spot on. Great story.
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[info]bombcel on February 18th, 2009 01:50 am (UTC)
that was yummy. . hahaha. . rain and blowjob and yeah expose. . wow that was kinky.
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[info]qaf_fanatic on February 18th, 2009 03:44 am (UTC)
That was delicious.

*licks lips*





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[info]nolyana on February 18th, 2009 04:16 am (UTC)
yes, yes, YES!!!. I'm sure that this was a scene that got cut off, yes? Sure feels like one.

Excellent, Xie! :)
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ahaw9913[info]ahaw9913 on February 18th, 2009 04:33 am (UTC)
A Rainy Day
Sweet and porny! You didn't even really have to put a timeline if you didn't want to, cause it fairly screamed Season 1.

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[info]kskitten on February 18th, 2009 04:57 am (UTC)
Hoooray! Awesome, me likes a lot.
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Carol[info]brokeaholic on February 18th, 2009 09:06 am (UTC)
Mmmmm, yummy!
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bluemchenkaffee: B/J kiss[info]bluemchenkaffee on February 18th, 2009 10:14 am (UTC)
So hot, Xie.
Maybe a rainy day isn't as bad as I always thought. :)

Susanne
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happier_bunny: bunny approves 512 table porn[info]happier_bunny on February 18th, 2009 10:45 am (UTC)
Oh god Xie, you've killed me. The rain, the wind, the mutual blowjobs, I barely know where to start. Let's see, oh I know, PERFECT season one voices for all of them.

The hotness of Brian blowing Justin in the diner's bathroom is only overshadowed by Brian waiting IN THE RAIN for Justin to blow him which is then topped by the actual blowjob.

the open jeans

the cold rain: His skin was warm against my lips, but I could feel the cold rain mixing with my spit and his pre-come, running down my face, little droplets sparkling on his pubes. *DIES*

thrusting hips

the taste of rain on Brian's skin

mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
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(Anonymous) on February 18th, 2009 11:47 am (UTC)
OMG Xie this was soooooo fucking HOT!!!! Excuse me while I go and take a cold shower now. :)

I must fan myself on the way to the shower. LOL!!!

Great Job!!!!!

Shoot!! Sorry I am not logged into Ij but in LJ reading this. but it's me positive_pat in both LJ and IJ. LOL!!!

Hugs
Pat
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[info]shenova on February 18th, 2009 01:21 pm (UTC)
Very hot that's one thing the guys never did on the show having fun in the rain it would have suited them as they always loved being in the shower together.
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[info]claddagh_girl on February 18th, 2009 01:26 pm (UTC)
Rain and B/J sex. My favorite combination!
*sigh*
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kari: Justin 108 on to you[info]kari77 on February 18th, 2009 07:02 pm (UTC)
This was very hot, without question.
But what I like most about this story are the appearance of S1 Brian and Justin. From the beginning it is crystal clear what the time line is. Perfect.
Maybe I am "over-porned" (is that a word? lol) after reading all the entries, one after another, but what really got me here are the little hints of how much they care about each other, and that it's not all about the sex, even if one or the other would probably be quick to deny it. ;-)

I was still licking my lips when he pulled the door open. "Why, hello, Deb. I know this is a progressive establishment, but shouldn't you be using the ladies' room?"
lol This cracked me up.

I was huddling under the awning, pulling on my jacket, when I saw Brian's Jeep by the curb. I ran over, smiling, but it was empty. I stood there, confused, and then I felt a tug on my arm, and he pulled me against him.
*happy sigh*

The rain had wet his hair and skin, and scattered across his eyelashes. I licked it off his mouth before he kissed me.
And that made me even happier. =)

"You'd better be driving me home."

He pushed away from the wall and laughed. "Do I look like a taxi driver?" But after he fastened his jeans, he dropped his arm around my shoulder and steered me back out to the Jeep.

Heh, you soo care about him. You sooo love him. ;-)

Thank you so much. This story gave me a warm feeling in all the right places.
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[info]minuet9 on February 18th, 2009 07:45 pm (UTC)
hehe loved snarky Brian in the last line.

Very hot thanks :)
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jan: b/j 309 blow-job[info]opal11 on February 19th, 2009 09:18 pm (UTC)
after a extremely crappy day... its always nice to come home feed the dogs and read some really hot porn...thank you xie..you made my evening.
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[info]3pintfan on February 19th, 2009 10:21 pm (UTC)
love the story- rain would be okay if I could watch those two go at it
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qafcracked[info]qafcracked on February 19th, 2009 11:38 pm (UTC)
Blowjobs in the rain. GUH.
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[info]nerilka24 on February 21st, 2009 05:10 pm (UTC)
(rain+wind+work) + Justin * Brian (blowjobs²) = perfection!!!
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tootiredtosleep[info]tootiredtosleep on February 21st, 2009 05:46 pm (UTC)
Xie,

You are awesome! The way you capture Brian and Justin thrills me to the bottom of my wildly beating heart! i have loved everything you have written and it amazes me how completely your writing sucks me in. Thanks. I needed this.
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[info]cryforwhat on March 13th, 2009 10:42 pm (UTC)
BJ=BLOWJOB?

GOOD PORN!
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