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Theme #11: Public Sex // Sex in Public 10 of 10 [Feb. 16th, 2009|08:43 pm]
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TITLE: Oh, But We Should
AUTHOR: [info]tweedygal
WARNINGS: Last-minute porny madness ahead
A/N: Besa came back. I felt like writing celebrating.



"Brian. Seriously. We shouldn't do this."


"Oh, but we should." Brian's voice was muffled as he licked and sucked at Justin's neck, pushing his knee between Justin's thighs to part them.


"The place is crawling with cops…" Justin's voice trailed off as Brian's hand began rubbing against his crotch. They were in the dark, leaned against the steps at the side of Woody's, the crowd from inside still gathered nearby. Justin could hear Debbie's voice, shrill and indignant, complaining to all who would listen that they "were just raising money for charity!"


Justin tried one more time, half-heartedly, to make Brian stop, but when he unzipped Justin's jeans and began to stroke his cock, he gave up and groaned loudly. Brian kissed him, his tongue sucking hard at his bottom lip before he broke the kiss and turned Justin quickly to face the wall.


He had Justin's jeans down just past his ass in record time, and was lubed, sheathed and buried in Justin's ass just as quickly. Justin yelled out and Brian's hand came around to cover his mouth.


"Shhh…." Brian whispered. "We don't want them *all* watching, do we?" Justin just groaned in response, pushing back against Brian. He could feel the scratch of that awful sweater vest against his lower back.


"Mmmmfffh…." Justin tried to talk against Brian's hand, but Brian wouldn't move it, so Justin groaned again.


"See? " Brian whispered into Justin's ear. "It's hot. I know you love it. Me fucking you right out here where anyone could see if they looked our way." Justin just moaned in response. Brian pulled almost all the way out and then began fucking Justin with short, hard strokes, pushing him into the wall with each movement. Justin braced himself with his hands and pushed back.


Brian groaned too. He leaned into Justin and said, "Lick my hand." Justin did and Brian grabbed Justin's dick, stroking as he continued to pound Justin, now brushing his prostate with every stroke. Justin bit his upper lip in an attempt to keep from yelling and came, pulsing into Brian's hand. Brian came seconds later, his face buried in Justin's neck.


When they finally emerged from the shadows, grinning like a couple of schoolkids, Debbie and Vic and Rodney were sitting on the steps, Debbie still holding court and complaining to anyone who would listen.


"Where the hell have you two been?" she asked.


"Around the corner fucking," said Brian.


Debbie's look shot daggers at him. "Would you be serious for once?" she said. "This is a big deal, Brian."


Brian started to tell Debbie he *was* being serious, but Justin pulled him away with a wave to Deb. "We'll talk tomorrow, okay?"


Debbie watched them go, shaking her head. "One of these days maybe Brian Kinney will stop thinking with his dick."


Vic laughed. "Sure he will, Sis. Dream big."
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From: [info]4cupcakes
2009-02-16 07:54 pm (UTC)

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LOL...So hot and so funny at the end: Dream big.

I love Vic.

I'm so glad you wrote this. Besa will love it. I love it. You capture Brian and Justin perfectly, as always. You even got the fugly sweater vest in there. This is perfect, Tweeds.

*big smoochy hugs*
[User Picture]From: [info]notreallyme10
2009-02-16 08:39 pm (UTC)

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Great use of the theme!

He could feel the scratch of that awful sweater vest against his lower back. This line killed me!

And of course it is wonderfully hot too :D
[User Picture]From: [info]fun_demented
2009-02-16 09:01 pm (UTC)

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Oh, Tweedy. You so own me. This was exciting and fun and totally IC, to boot! Vic's end line was perfect. It was perfect from start to finish AS ALWAYS!

He could feel the scratch of that awful sweater vest against his lower back

LOL! I figured out what's wrong with that sweater, it's that it's too big on his shoulders and neck, it puffs up weird when he moves. The other sweater vest (in the "Can I buy you a drink" fit him).
[User Picture]From: [info]morgan_is_randy
2009-02-16 09:45 pm (UTC)

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What are you talking about? This is fucking great. I can't believe you wrote this so quickly!

"We don't want them *all* watching, do we?" Justin just groaned in response, pushing back against Brian. He could feel the scratch of that awful sweater vest against his lower back.
 That was one of the hottest and funniest lines ever! But yes, Brian, we do want them *all* watching.
[User Picture]From: [info]rosy5000
2009-02-17 12:29 am (UTC)

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lol I love that Brian tells Deb the truth and she doesn't believe him.

Vic laughed. "Sure he will, Sis. Dream big."

*giggles*
[User Picture]From: [info]circadia
2009-02-17 03:40 am (UTC)

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He could feel the scratch of that awful sweater vest against his lower back.
Ahhh that sweater vest, haha.

"Where the hell have you two been?" she asked.
"Around the corner fucking," said Brian.
Love it.

Throwing in Deb and Vic at the end -- brilliant!

So hot, so wonderful!!
[User Picture]From: [info]besamislabios
2009-02-17 04:36 am (UTC)

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OMG, the fugly sweater vest made a guest appearance, I love thoses vests, I don't care what anyone thinks, we get to see his arms. :P

Oh my Tweedy, this was a great ficlet, so very hot and funny too, I love when you make me laugh in between b/j hotness and sexiness.

So many lines I love, I could quote the whole thing, the ending dialogue is perfect.


I'm happy you're writing again. ♥
*big hugs*
[User Picture]From: [info]pye_wacket
2009-02-17 07:04 am (UTC)

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"Where the hell have you two been?" she asked.


"Around the corner fucking," said Brian.


bwahhhhhh!!
[User Picture]From: [info]michira_70
2009-02-17 07:53 am (UTC)

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This has just the right mix of everything: funny, sexy, hot.
And don't laugh about me, I like that 'awful sweater vest'.
[User Picture]From: [info]xie_xie_xie
2009-02-17 11:22 am (UTC)

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Justin braced himself with his hands and pushed back.

Oh, just kill me now...
[User Picture]From: [info]outlander
2009-02-17 12:45 pm (UTC)

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*flails*
OMG this was so so hot, and it had Vic. I love Vic.

"Where the hell have you two been?" she asked.
"Around the corner fucking," said Brian.
Debbie's look shot daggers at him. "Would you be serious for once?" she said. "This is a big deal, Brian."
*died laughing, because I was still breathing heavy from the porn*

And the sweater vest? You just had to go there, didn't you?!? Try to remember, the vest shows the ARMS. So we love the vest. rotf.
[User Picture]From: [info]bulagirl
2009-02-17 05:34 pm (UTC)

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This was so hot and funny! And I loved Debbie and Vic. Great story :)
[User Picture]From: [info]testdog65
2009-02-17 07:19 pm (UTC)

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If this is what last minute gets us, then next challenge, I'm taking away your computer until right before the fics are due. There's not one thing about this that I don't adore. The setting, the mention of the sweater vest, the dialogue, Brian's hand over Justin's mouth, the hotness - all of it adds up to such a gem of a fic!

~Ellen
[User Picture]From: [info]secretsolitaire
2009-02-17 08:26 pm (UTC)

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Ahaha, nice ending! Enjoyed this.
[User Picture]From: [info]sjmpets
2009-02-17 09:49 pm (UTC)

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te he. hide in plain sight.

'awful sweater vest', got that right.
[User Picture]From: [info]not_yet_defined
2009-02-17 10:05 pm (UTC)

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Oh this was perfect! i'm so very glad you wrote.

It was adkfjaldjkals!!hot. and the line about the vest actually made me spit my drink, so thanks for that. and man did you nail debbie...in a non-sexual way.

i love this.
[User Picture]From: [info]happier_bunny
2009-02-18 10:40 am (UTC)

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Oh holy hell, I'm so glad you wrote cuz this was HOT HOT HOT and funny. the best kind of porn!


"See? " Brian whispered into Justin's ear. "It's hot. I know you love it. Me fucking you right out here where anyone could see if they looked our way." Justin just moaned in response. Brian pulled almost all the way out and then began fucking Justin with short, hard strokes, pushing him into the wall with each movement. Justin braced himself with his hands and pushed back.


*dies*
[User Picture]From: [info]shenova
2009-02-18 01:24 pm (UTC)

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Now that was funny and hot. Typical Brian when your in the mood no matter who is around do what you have to do. Loved it.
[User Picture]From: [info]kari77
2009-02-18 07:12 pm (UTC)

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Aww, perfect last line, perfectly Vic! Thanks for letting him play a part here.

And, wow, this was incredibly hot, oh, yes. *fans self*

"Where the hell have you two been?" she asked.

"Around the corner fucking," said Brian.

Debbie's look shot daggers at him. "Would you be serious for once?" she said. "This is a big deal, Brian."

Brian started to tell Debbie he *was* being serious, but Justin pulled him away with a wave to Deb. "We'll talk tomorrow, okay?"
lol Spot on conversation.

Thank you so much for sharing this story.

[User Picture]From: [info]minuet9
2009-02-18 07:41 pm (UTC)

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So hot :)

So glad I'm not the only one who went 'wtf is he wearing' when I first saw that sweater vest scene ;)

Thank you
[User Picture]From: [info]dirtylttlescret
2009-02-19 11:32 pm (UTC)

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"Where the hell have you two been?" she asked.


"Around the corner fucking," said Brian.

This dialogue is priceless. I can actually hear the whole scene on the street and Vic laughing. Awesome.
[User Picture]From: [info]nerilka24
2009-02-21 04:54 pm (UTC)

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Fun and hot :D Loved it, especially the Debbie/Brian interchange. And Vic having the last word. So glad you took part!!!
[User Picture]From: [info]tootiredtosleep
2009-02-21 05:42 pm (UTC)

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Brian will never stop thinking with his dick! or about Justin's dick! Just wonderful!!!
[User Picture]From: [info]ahaw9913
2009-02-22 10:07 am (UTC)

Oh, But We Should

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Boy, have I been missing out! This is the first of your fics I have read, but it certainly won't be the last, that was great! A perfect blend of teh love, teh hot and teh funny. Everyone was beautifully IC, especially Deb and Vic(I just LOVE when a writer gets the family characters so perfect)(not that the others weren't) Loved it!
[User Picture]From: [info]brianslave68
2009-02-22 06:05 pm (UTC)

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Woah! I love this a lot! Very hot and sexy! &hearts
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