"Where the hell have you two been?" she asked.
"Around the corner fucking," said Brian.
This dialogue is priceless. I can actually hear the whole scene on the street and Vic laughing. Awesome.
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qafcracked (qafcracked) wrote in bj_action on February 19th, 2009 at 11:32 pm