04 June 2008 @ 08:30 pm
Theme # 9: Season One With a Twist - 4 of 6  
TITLE: Again

AUTHOR: [info]tweedygal

WARNINGS: It’s porn, be warned!

A/N: This fic would suck monkey balls if not for the lovely [info]bookgirl24. She made it readable...





I’m fucking Justin.

Again.

In Michael’s old room in the middle of the night.

Fuck.

Every time this happens, I tell myself I’m not doing it again. After all, there are plenty of men to fuck in Pittsburgh and variety is the spice of life, right?

But, the little shit is everywhere. At Woody’s, Babylon, the munchers’...I can’t even eat at the diner after work without seeing him. He smiles and my dick reacts. It’s ridiculous and yet I keep watching him as he works. The next time he flashes that grin at me, I glare at him. It doesn’t even faze him; he just stares back at me until Debbie walks by and says, “Get a grip, Sunshine. And I’m not talking about your dick!”

He looks at me again, and his tongue comes out to lick slowly at his upper lip. Then he turns away and starts bussing the booth next to mine. He doesn’t look my way again. Little fucker.

Many drinks and many hours later, I’m still seeing that tongue, teasing me, begging to wrap itself around my cock. Frustrated, I find the hottest trick in Babylon and get a blowjob that does nothing more than take the edge off.

Next thing you know, I’m letting myself in the back door at Debbie’s, skirting past the washing machine and skipping the creaky fifth step on the stairs.

When I open the door to Justin’s room, the damn kid is awake. I stand against the door, looking at him. He looks calmly back.

“What are you doing?” I finally ask.

“Waiting for you,” he says, too damn smugly for his own good. If I wasn’t already as hard as a rock, I’d leave. Seriously.

But then he’s out of bed, naked, and doing that stupid fucking tongue lick thing again and I’m through pretending that I don’t want to fuck him until he’s screaming underneath me.

I take a couple of steps away from the door, grabbing at the bottom of my t-shirt. He helps me pull it off and his hands come back down to rub my chest and down my stomach. He never takes his eyes off mine.

I give in and pull him up to my lips, devouring that tongue, pulling it into my mouth. I lick and suck and inhale the taste of him, warm and wet and wanting. He keeps pulling my head down, like he’s trying to pull me into his open mouth.

As I break the kiss, I push him away a bit, trying to gain back some control. He reaches for my jeans and unbuttons them, reaching inside to touch my cock. He wraps his other arm around my waist and pulls me back, his tongue tracing a pattern around my nipple. I tangle my hands into his hair, pushing his head where I want him to be. His tongue never leaves my body as he licks his way down. It feels so good and I close my eyes briefly.

Fuck.

He drives me crazy.

Pushing my jeans past my ass, he licks and then sucks at my stomach, moving toward the skin right above my dick. He kneels, looking up at me, still fucking smug, and *finally* wraps that tongue around me.

He licks the underside, dragging his tongue up slowly to the head, his hand following his tongue. When he reaches the tip, he stops, licking his own lips before he tongue stabs into my slit. He looks up at me, eyes dark, then sucks me deep into his mouth. I close my eyes again and stifle a moan, tilting my hips and slowly fucking his face.

Justin never hesitates as my rhythm gets faster. The feeling of him moving with me, his mouth hot around my cock, never gets old. I let myself get lost in the sensation. When he pulls at my balls while I’m deep in his throat, I tense, clenching his hair in my fingers. I come hard as he swallows around me. Jesus. I’m telling you, he’s unbelievable.

Before he’s caught his breath, I’m hard again and all that matters is my dick in his ass. Now.

I lose my jeans, grab lube and a condom and kiss him hard. I turn him around and whisper, “I wanna fuck you. On the floor. Your ass in the air.”

No answer. Just a wanton moan, which is exactly what I want to hear. I push him down and bend him over on his hands and knees. I know we’ll both have burns from the rug, but I want inside him too much to care. I slide the condom on and lube my cock, not bothering to get him ready. In seconds, I’m buried in his ass and he yells, “Fuck!” as I’m pushing in. I stop and reach around to cover his mouth with my hand. Deb or Vic walking in on us won’t help me get off.

“OK?” I ask.

Justin nods his head quickly and pushes back against me, talking into my hand. I move it aside and he grits out, “God. Move.”

I do. His ass is so tight, so fucking tight, and I can feel him clenching around me. His head is down and he’s rocking back into me, moaning low and deep. I can tell he’s holding back, trying to stay quiet. We’re both sweaty now and I run one hand up his wet back, pulling at his hair. His head snaps up and he reaches back, trying to pull my hips closer, to touch more of me.

Pulling up to my knees, I grip both of his hips and begin to fuck him in earnest, slamming hard against his ass. He clenches at his own dick with short strokes and as he starts to come, he tightens around my cock and I feel the white-hot heat of my own orgasm building. I let go, biting my bottom lip to try to keep from yelling out.

Justin, his hand still on his dick, pants beneath me. I can tell he’s waiting for me to move first, so I pull out and collapse beside him. He rolls over to his back -- away from me -- and lies with his arm over his face, catching his breath. His cock shines in the dark, streaked with his come. I want to lick it off him, but I’m too lazy to move.

After a few minutes, Justin gets up without a word and cleans up with a towel before he pulls on a pair of sweats. I get dressed too. “I need a cigarette. Let’s go.”

He follows me downstairs and we sit on the picnic table in the backyard. I offer him a cigarette, but he just shakes his head, watching me intently as I light up.

“What?”

He just shrugs a little. His silence is unnerving. Usually he talks non-stop after we fuck, about everything and absolutely nothing at all.

I put my arm around him and kiss him on the side of his face. He smiles then and nuzzles into my neck. I drop my cigarette onto the bench, grinding it out with my foot, and pull him around to me. I kiss his mouth, gently tracing his teeth with my tongue. As the kiss deepens, I reach down to his cock. He’s hard as a rock.

He shivers in my arms.

“Cold?”

“Maybe a little.” It’s the first thing he’s said since we came outside. I get off the table and grab his hand.

“Come here. I’ll warm you up.”



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Again.

I can hardly believe he’s here again. Sure, I can always act as if I’m expecting him when he walks into my bedroom and fucks me, but truth is, I’m not. When it happens, I always start to think that maybe, just maybe, I’m more to him than just a fuck.

But, when he pulls me around the corner and backs me up against the side of the house, it really doesn’t matter. All I want is him like this, on his knees, pushing my sweats down just far enough to wrap his arms around my waist and suck my cock into his mouth.

I can smell the cigarette smoke lingering around us, mixed with the smell of come and musk and sex. I want to watch him, his mouth wrapped around my dick. I want to touch his dark hair, mussy and gorgeous. But as his hand wraps around my balls, gentling them in his palm, I can’t concentrate. I close my eyes and try to keep from coming. If I seem too eager, he’ll pull away.

I want him to stay.

I press my hands against the side of the house, grounding myself a little. His tongue swirls around my cock, then drags from the base to the tip. It feels like nothing else on earth. The night air is cold when he moves away and I can’t help but shiver. Brian reaches up and pushes two fingers into my mouth. I suck on them eagerly, knowing where they’ll be next.

When he runs them down the crack of my ass, stopping just before he reaches my hole, he looks up at me and smiles and my heart trips. He’s so fucking beautiful and his hands touching my body make me crazy. He takes me into his mouth again and this time, he pushes one finger and then another into my ass. The initial pain, combined with the feeling of his mouth devouring my dick, is exquisite. I begin to rock into his mouth and his fingers push in and back out, matching my pace.

I’m not cold anymore. In fact, I can feel the heat building inside me. My hands move to his hair, holding on and giving me leverage as I begin to push harder into his mouth. I can’t last long, even though I want him here forever. One of his hands moves back to my balls and I feel them tighten in his palm. The fingers of his other hand are still fucking me, and he’s sucking me, swallowing around me. I begin to moan and my fingers tangle in his hair, keeping the rhythm as I move into him. Finally, my body tenses and I shoot into his mouth. Nothing can compare to that feeling of release, of letting myself go and I want to do it again almost before I’m finished this time.

When I finally begin to relax, Brian pulls himself up and kisses me and I can taste myself on his tongue. I wrap my arms around him.

After a while, he pulls me back around to the back porch. He’s got one arm slung around me and I rest my head on his shoulder for a few minutes, both of us lost in our own thoughts. He nudges me with his shoulder and says, “Gotta go.” I smile up at him and he kisses me, a long, sweet, quiet kiss. I’m tired, but when he looks down at me, I smile. I could live in a moment like this forever.

As he drives away, dawn beginning to tinge the dark, I try not to think about whether or not he’ll be back.

Again.
 
 
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qafcracked: Mmm Ice Cream Kiss[info]qafcracked on June 5th, 2008 12:52 am (UTC)
Monkey balls my ass. Can I just say how I loved the transition from Brian's pov to Justin's?

Oh and the porn. That too.
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[info]noteverything on June 8th, 2008 03:02 pm (UTC)
I'm glad you liked the POV change. It didn't start out that way...but I'm glad I decided to change it. And the porn? I'm telling you, two blowjobs pretty much took it out of me! I may never write porn again...

awww...who am I kidding? I swear I'm done and then I can't stop.
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notreallyme10[info]notreallyme10 on June 5th, 2008 01:32 am (UTC)
GUH...

I love cocky Justin! But I also liked how you showed us what he was really thinking as well. Brian is so well and truly fucked and you showed that while still keeping him perfectly IC. Plus it is ridiculously hot. A beautiful little fic!

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[info]noteverything on June 8th, 2008 03:05 pm (UTC)
I didn't want Justin to be too cocky. It doesn't seem to fit S1, imo.

And S1 fucked!Brian. Makes for fun writing... :D

Thank you so much for your feedback. It's always thrilling when good writers appreciate my things.
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pendulumchanges: other - 'on a fic high'[info]pendulumchanges on June 5th, 2008 01:37 am (UTC)
O.M.G. tweedy. This is quite possibly the best piece of your writing I've ever read. This is just spectacular. The porn is HOT. So much hair!porn... omg this part just about killed me:

We’re both sweaty now and I run one hand up his wet back, pulling at his hair. His head snaps up and he reaches back...

And then it has this whole perfect S1 dynamic going on too. Brian can't resist teh Justin and Justin knows he's the shit, but he's still insecure too. And of course I fully appreciate the symmetry and both viewpoints :) God, just such an amazing fic. And this totally counts as a fic. You say you just write drabbles and the occasional porn, but this is so a fic. It's got more than just porn. It is TEH LOVE. *huge smackles*

Other parts I loved:

he just stares back at me until Debbie walks by and says, “Get a grip, Sunshine. And I’m not talking about your dick!”

It's so perfectly in character I can hear it.

skipping the creaky fifth step on the stairs.


I love that little detail :)

If I wasn’t already as hard as a rock, I’d leave. Seriously.

*snort* Sure Brian.

I take a couple of steps away from the door, grabbing at the bottom of my t-shirt. He helps me pull it off and his hands come back down to rub my chest and down my stomach. He never takes his eyes off mine.

guhhhhhhhhhhh that melted my brain

I can't quote any one part because the ENTIRE Justin-blowing-Brian part is just fantastic. Fantastic!
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[info]noteverything on June 8th, 2008 03:19 pm (UTC)
Pend. This feedback just blew me away.

Thank you isn't enough. I'm so happy that you liked it. It means the world to me that people I love dearly like what I write. And the fact that you consider it real fic? Well, that is the ultimate. Thank you, endlessly. *kisses*
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Ny[info]not_yet_defined on June 5th, 2008 01:47 am (UTC)
3 PWPs for the price of one.
oh sweet jesus tweedy.

the beginning of this had me smiling so hard. and the rest was just fucking guh.

i loved too much about it. i shall leave quotey feedback when it makes it onto your journal in a few days.




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[info]noteverything on June 8th, 2008 03:20 pm (UTC)
Re: 3 PWPs for the price of one.
LOL@ 3 for the price of 1. I aim to please. :-)

I'm glad you like the fun stuff too, 'cause it wouldn't be B/J or the love with it, right? *hugs*
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testdog65: B/J 104 bj Justin at zipper[info]testdog65 on June 5th, 2008 01:47 am (UTC)
Oh wow. So much I want to say. Where to begin? OK, first, I loved the desperation in this. Brian's desire and his inability to stay away from Justin is a thing of beauty. But so is Justin's insatiable appetite and his pure enjoyment of sex. Wonderfully rendered.

The second part was hot, but with that underlying sadness that I felt quite a bit in a lot of S1. Really well done there.

And just a couple of random quotes because these just elevated the story for me so much:

Next thing you know, I’m letting myself in the back door at Debbie’s, skirting past the washing machine and skipping the creaky fifth step on the stairs.

and...

I can smell the cigarette smoke lingering around us, mixed with the smell of come and musk and sex.

Terrific story and a fantastic answer to the challenge!

~Ellen
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[info]noteverything on June 8th, 2008 04:08 pm (UTC)
If you liked the sex, then I am beyond thrilled. Honestly...you know I think you write it the best of all...

And I am *exceptionally* thrilled that you liked the parts you quoted too! Thank you Ellen! I have been so happy with the reaction to this story.
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rosy5000: BJ Tongue!Dancing[info]rosy5000 on June 5th, 2008 03:23 am (UTC)
Cocky Justin and Brian who can't resist Justin... what's not to love? ;D There's no way this fic would suck, other than Brian down on his knees worshipping Justin's cock. ;)
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[info]noteverything on June 8th, 2008 07:43 pm (UTC)
There's no way this fic would suck, other than Brian down on his knees worshipping Justin's cock. ;)

This just made me grin. Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the suckage. ;-)
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secretsolitaire: bj 311 floor sex[info]secretsolitaire on June 5th, 2008 03:25 am (UTC)
Gah, this is so freakin' hot. *fans herself*

His ass is so tight, so fucking tight, and I can feel him clenching around me. His head is down and he’s rocking back into me, moaning low and deep. I can tell he’s holding back, trying to stay quiet.

Oh, this is such a kink of mine! GUH!

Beyond the porn, this was just an excellent fic. You've got both Brian and Justin's S1 selves down perfectly here.

I can hardly believe he’s here again. Sure, I can always act as if I’m expecting him when he walks into my bedroom and fucks me, but truth is, I’m not. When it happens, I always start to think that maybe, just maybe, I’m more to him than just a fuck.

I love this, the vulnerability behind Justin's confidence.

Next thing you know, I’m letting myself in the back door at Debbie’s, skirting past the washing machine and skipping the creaky fifth step on the stairs.

This is a fabulous detail, reminding us subtly of Brian's history here.

I can smell the cigarette smoke lingering around us, mixed with the smell of come and musk and sex. I want to watch him, his mouth wrapped around my dick. I want to touch his dark hair, mussy and gorgeous. But as his hand wraps around my balls, gentling them in his palm, I can’t concentrate.

More sharp details -- I can see and smell and feel this passage.

This is one of my favorites of yours!
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[info]noteverything on June 8th, 2008 07:45 pm (UTC)
Oh, this is such a kink of mine! GUH!

Trying to stay quiet? Really...? Very interesting...

Beyond the porn, this was just an excellent fic.

Thank you very very much.

This is one of my favorites of yours!

And again, thank you. This is wonderful feedback! xoxo


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[info]merepersiflage on June 5th, 2008 03:41 am (UTC)
I love the Justin teasing him in the diner.
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[info]noteverything on June 8th, 2008 07:47 pm (UTC)
Justin can't help himself...it's like a moth to a flame.

Thanks!
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brianslave68: bj brians back/butt justin in bed 104[info]brianslave68 on June 5th, 2008 04:40 am (UTC)
Oh my Tweedy...I would love to give long wordy feedback but it's so late and I'm so tired I don't think I can form a coherent thought right now. My short feedback is 'you rock'! I love, love, love this. Truly, madly, deeply.

PS - I've missed your writing. :D
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[info]noteverything on June 8th, 2008 07:48 pm (UTC)
This feedback is just fine.

I love, love, love this.

Thank you, so so much! (((((huge hugs)))))
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kata_ny: *licks* Brian[info]kata_ny on June 5th, 2008 08:18 am (UTC)
. “I need a cigarette. Let’s go.”
me too! and i don`t even smoke!
GUH
you might be my drabble Goddess,but this was....OMGF OMFG.
i loved to see both POVs.
you are PURE amazing.that is all.
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[info]noteverything on June 9th, 2008 04:30 am (UTC)
Awwwwww. Thank you! Amazing? That's so cool. :D
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[info]claddagh_girl on June 5th, 2008 09:46 am (UTC)
I was expecting you to end with Brian's pov but then you went and carried on and gave us Justin's too, along with a second round of hotness. Thank you!
That was great.
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[info]noteverything on June 9th, 2008 04:31 am (UTC)
I fully intended for this to be Brian's POV only, but it just didn't work for me. So, I'm thrilled you liked my decision to add Justin's viewpoint too. Thanks!
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Britin[info]_alicesprings on June 5th, 2008 01:50 pm (UTC)
Oh Tweeeeedyyyyyy!!! This is brilliant!!! The two POV's were genius, the little touches were genius - the creaking step, Deb's line about getting a grip, LMAO!

And the porn was totally hot and tied up with teh love, my favourite combination! Great season 1 dynamics between B/J.
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[info]noteverything on June 9th, 2008 04:32 am (UTC)
You put a big huge smile on my face. Thank you...I'm really glad you liked it!

And the porn was totally hot and tied up with teh love, my favourite combination!

Mine too, which is probably obvious! :D
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singlewoman: BJ win by qafmaniac[info]singlewoman on June 5th, 2008 02:06 pm (UTC)
This was a beautiful fic, and HOT too. I loved how you showed both sides of Justin, it was a great insight to know what he was really thinking.
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[info]noteverything on June 9th, 2008 04:33 am (UTC)
Thank you...I'm glad you like both viewpoints!
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[info]besamislabios on June 5th, 2008 03:15 pm (UTC)
Tweedy, this was so perfectly perfect and so very smoking hot. I loved it. The alternate pov was very clever and very well done. Excellent fic. &hearts
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[info]noteverything on June 9th, 2008 04:33 am (UTC)
Perfectly perfect. That's just awesome.

Thank you Besa! &hearts
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happier_bunny: b/j 107 colorful[info]happier_bunny on June 5th, 2008 04:26 pm (UTC)
I'm a big puddle of mush now. This was sexy and hot and yet so sweet and tender, just how I like my porn.

GUH...GUH...GUH! Mutual blow jobs and fucking: mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
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[info]noteverything on June 9th, 2008 04:34 am (UTC)
*hugs and kisses*

Your feedback always makes me feel a little mushy, too! Thanks Bunny!
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outlander: Love BJ[info]outlander on June 5th, 2008 05:23 pm (UTC)
Loved the POV change. Insecure-but-finding-his-feet Justin is amazing. And blowjobs for everyone? Guh, am dead. I am now smiling and a little sweaty, oh porn goddess!

You had me at monkey balls! This was great, so I am going to read it...

Again.
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[info]noteverything on June 9th, 2008 04:36 am (UTC)
LOL@"blowjobs for everyone"! That should be a theme night at Babylon...

You had me at monkey balls! This was great, so I am going to read it...

Again.


Awwww...adorable feedback! Thank you. :D :D :D
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sanami276: Queer as Folk / BJ at the window[info]ohfreckle on June 8th, 2008 08:37 pm (UTC)
Mmmh, tender and hot porn <3
I love how you show us Justin, who's still trying to find out where he stands with Brian. And Brian, who is so fucked and still thinks he has control where Justin is concerned.

Lovely, dear ♥
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[info]noteverything on June 9th, 2008 04:38 am (UTC)
They were both a little contradictory in S1, weren't they? Silly boys...

And thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D
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xie_xie_xie: 104 gotcha[info]xie_xie_xie on June 9th, 2008 07:54 pm (UTC)
Just catching up on the rest of these fics.... and OH! This was worth the wait! Hot and sweet!
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[info]noteverything on June 11th, 2008 02:05 pm (UTC)
Thank you very much! It was a fun, fun challenge. I loved EVERY story. :D
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hpuckle: QAF | Dirty Talk[info]hpuckle on June 11th, 2008 11:14 am (UTC)
Oh, you have them as characters in S1 down to a tee! This was wonderful and amazingly hot!

xxx
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[info]noteverything on June 11th, 2008 02:07 pm (UTC)
Thank you! This was really ufn to write. I'm glad you enjoyed it...
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[info]noteverything on June 11th, 2008 02:11 pm (UTC)
FUN, too! :-)
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[info]nerilka24 on June 13th, 2008 07:19 pm (UTC)

Loved it!! I loved all the little details that gave it depth and character; the smell of sex, the rug burns, the hair touching!

Oh, and did I mention the hot sex? *fans self*!!!

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[info]noteverything on June 16th, 2008 02:14 pm (UTC)
I am so glad you liked the details...and the porn! ;-) Thanks for reading!
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[info]snowmore on June 15th, 2008 02:04 am (UTC)
Holy Hell Woman!

Weren't you the fantastic and prolific drabble writer who doubted she'd ever write a ficlet with porn or am I confusing you with some other Brian and Justin devotee? :D

I loved this so much I have to go have a shower! Thank you!
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[info]noteverything on June 16th, 2008 02:15 pm (UTC)
Hehehe. I have managed to grind out a thing or two since that doubting time. I still don't feel totally comfortable with longer fics, but I'm getting there.

Thanks for reading and for fabulous comments!
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lougenessis[info]lougenessis on October 29th, 2008 12:46 pm (UTC)
Oh yeah, he'll be back alright, don't fret Justin. Loved your story, another winner.
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[info]noteverything on October 29th, 2008 06:17 pm (UTC)
*blushes*

You're so kind! Thank you...
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flamencanyc: Joy - nuzzle smile[info]flamencanyc on September 5th, 2009 08:31 pm (UTC)
I ♥ S1!

And this is why.

Hot, sweet, irresistible, perfect.
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[info]noteverything on September 7th, 2009 09:02 pm (UTC)
Thank you.
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galeandrandy: Affection[info]galeandrandy on December 31st, 2009 05:31 am (UTC)
Again
“I wanna fuck you. On the floor. Your ass in the air.” Soooo much better than the bed I was imagining where the sex would take place.

That was perfect. Just perfect. Brian being so confused yet also completely aware of the need he has to fuck Justin.

Completely and exactly what I needed. I loved that you switched to Justin and we got to hear him talk about the blowjob he was getting from Brian. There are far too few fics out there where Brian blows Justin in season one.

Really great. Thank you for pointing me to this fic.

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[info]noteverything on January 9th, 2010 03:33 pm (UTC)
Re: Again
I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you...I really appreciate the wordy feedback...makes me very happy!
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