Oh wow. So much I want to say. Where to begin? OK, first, I loved the desperation in this. Brian's desire and his inability to stay away from Justin is a thing of beauty. But so is Justin's insatiable appetite and his pure enjoyment of sex. Wonderfully rendered.

The second part was hot, but with that underlying sadness that I felt quite a bit in a lot of S1. Really well done there.

And just a couple of random quotes because these just elevated the story for me so much:

Next thing you know, I’m letting myself in the back door at Debbie’s, skirting past the washing machine and skipping the creaky fifth step on the stairs.

and...

I can smell the cigarette smoke lingering around us, mixed with the smell of come and musk and sex.

Terrific story and a fantastic answer to the challenge!

~Ellen