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snapelyhols_mod (snapelyhols_mod) wrote in snapelyholidays,
@ 2011-01-09 21:54:00

Entry tags:

2010_fic, alpha!remus, bondage, bottom!snape, face-shot, fic4:serpenscript, humiliation, non-con, oral, rough sex, snape/james, snape/remus, snape/sirius, spanking, teen_sex, underage, wanking

Gift fic for serpenscript, Being Eloise Jensen, or The Dangers of Staying Home from Hogsmeade, adult
Recipient: serpenscript

Author: nehalenia

Title: Being Eloise Jensen, or The Dangers of Staying Home from Hogsmeade

Characters: Severus Snape, James Potter, Sirius Black, Remus Lupin

Rating: Adult. Very Adult.

Content Info: *bondage, spanking, rough sex, non-con/dub-con, unintentional cross-dressing, humiliation, double penetration, bottom!Snape*

Summary: Snape's attempt to sneak into the Gryffindor girls' dormitory goes horribly, terribly, unforgettably awry.

Disclaimer: The world of HP and its characters belongs to Rowling.

Word count: ~8,040

Author Notes: Huge and heart-felt thanks to the mods for their saintly patience and to my sharp-eyed, faithful, and long-suffering beta, R. I'd never have made it to the finish line on this without your help and understanding.
To my lovely recipient, all I can say is that there could hardly have been a better match in all of fandom and I hope you enjoy this. Happy holidays!

( Being Eloise Jensen, or The Dangers of Staying Home from Hogsmeade )

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serpenscript
2011-01-15 04:09 am UTC (link)

Sorry for not getting to this right away, I thought I had but I hadn't, head's woolly with a head cold.

But I've read this over - once, twice - and yet again - because damn, it's HOT. And SO many delicious details in it to make it vivid. I *really* liked the description of the polyjuice wearing off, and Snape's genitals reappearing - the way the clothes were too small, especially the knickers - mmm, imagining Snape in too-tight feminine knickers :D

And oh gosh, the beater's bat, so much more wicked than a hand....I just BET Snape felt it bruise the way Potter would be wielding it. Potter has no finesse....and of COURSE Sirius would know the 'right' way to paddle someone. I'm imagining the expression on Snape's face right now, that moment Sirius hauled his hips up and kicked his feet apart and laid into him. Mmmm, not sure who got the better deal, Snape or Sirius! And Snape's body slowly responding to the treatment, the slow details, and his horror when his arousal was revealed...!

And as if the paddling wasn't treat enough, you threw Mooney into the mix...!The way he growls his want, and the rough way he grabs Snape's prick and yet Snape can't help but respond. The way Sirius compliments Snape - "bang-tidy arse" in one breath, and insults him in the next - "That hole's never been plugged - who'd have done it, right?"

And-and-and-the way Padfoot and Mooney work in tandem! OH MERLIN HOT. *fans self* Snape with a girl's skirt pushed up around his waist and a girl's blouse, arse livid red, being pushed down on Sirius' cock, and Moony fucking Snape's mouth - ngh! My brain is melting imagining that (and I don't HAVE to just imagine it thanks to *this*)!

Oh, but then you had to raise the stakes MORE. Forget Pads just loosening Snape's arse up for Lupin's 'stonking great knob'! I bet Snape's brain overloaded, torn between pain and pleasure, and then it degenerates into a desperate madness that is just captivating - the way Black's smooth words crumble to cursing and sentence fragments, and wouldn't I love to see Snape's narrow arse stretched around two cocks??? And of course Snape comes first.

Potter's an arse as is only to be expected - and I had to LOL at how quickly, afterwords, Sirius regained his smooth talking - sterling qualities of his todger, indeed! And there's another picture I'd love to see - Sirius and Moony and Snape sprawled over the couch in various states of undress. Mmmm...

Ok, enough drooling from me, before I start staring at the computer screen lost in delicious imagination XD Thank you for a VERY hot, steamy gift! :D

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