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MarinaNova Mods ([info]marinanova_mod) wrote in [info]marinanova_ooc,
@ 2014-01-01 13:41:00

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Entry tags:mod: hmd, mod: plotting

Game-wide Plotting/HMD
Welcome to the MarinaNova HMD! This is optional, but encouraged.

• List your characters for which you'd like feedback. We have a form below if you like forms!

• Leave your tactful and considered thoughts, questions, concerns, praise, suggestions, etc. for others.

We strongly encourage you to make this a dialogue. Find out what went into actions, decisions, and characterization and you may come to understand it better. Hopefully, you'll also be in the best position to clearly communicate your own concerns. Results will be more satisfactory for everyone if one person isn't on the offensive while the other is on the defensive.

Avoid leaving someone a wall of text. This can be intimidating even with the most careful of wording and best of intentions.

Don't gang up on someone. You may have a different way of wording something, but unless you have something new to contribute, consider letting it go if there are already others saying it.

Be constructive and considerate.

• Since there is no plotting meme during months with an HMD, please feel free to do that here too.

• Contact a mod if you have any problems.

Anonymous commenting is on. It will be turned off if there is abuse.



Please feel welcome to leave game and mod feedback and suggestions here.


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MARINANOVA & MODS
[info]marinanova_mod
2014-01-01 07:42 pm UTC (link)


We are very interested in hearing what you think about the game and us as mods. We encourage you to leave any details for problem areas that need to be discussed and/or addressed with any aspect of the game setting, rules, functionality and our modding choices and style. As well as anything you may have to say that falls outside those realms!

We can't promise everything will be handled or altered to your liking, but we do promise to give everything serious consideration.

We want this game to always be growing and improving for the benefit of it's players—YOU! We have lots of our own ideas, but it always helps to hear what you're thinking instead of guessing.

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[info]hastohappen
2014-01-01 07:59 pm UTC (link)
Player name: Rae

Character: Data | Star Trek: The Next Generation | [info]thirdcriterion | ☑
Comments: I've been playing Data in one venue or another for... almost forever. He's been here for a pretty long while. I'm trying to figure out the next move with him, idk. He definitely needs some new CR. I don't want to get too comfortable or insular with him. So consider this a note that I'm open for plotting? And also that I intend to hit up a lot more folks since things will probably pick up now that the holidays are over.

Character: Dexter Morgan | Dexter | [info]hastohappen | ☑
Comments: Dexter, on the other hand, is kind of a brand new muse. I've played other characters from the canon for years, but I've never tried my hand at the titular serial killer until picking him up here. So, I would absolutely love any input whatsoever on how I'm doing with him. (It's pretty nerve-wracking.) In the coming day-weeks, his control will be falling apart bit by bit. I can't wait. ♥

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[info]lifelines
2014-01-06 06:59 am UTC (link)
I am going to be absolutely no help at all ever, but I absolutely adore your Data. I've really enjoyed threading with him, even back when I knew nothing about his canon. I've never had any trouble hearing his voice and you give the technobabble like it's nothing. Or at least it comes off very naturally and his lack of contractions also feels natural and very Data-y to me.

As for new CR, I'd be happy to throw Liz at him! And when/if I get Deanna in, there's definitely stuff to be done there :)

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[info]lifelines
2014-01-01 07:59 pm UTC (link)
Player name: Stella

Character: Helen Magnus | Sanctuary | [info]lifelines | ☑
Comments: The trickiest thing with her is finding the balance between old and new. I'm always willing to discuss characterization choices and headcanon, since she needs a lot of it.


Character: Liz Forbes | the Vampire Diaries | [info]sheriffed | ☑
Comments: Admittedly, I'm having trouble with her and it will only get worse now that Caroline's gone.


Character: Kelly-087 | Halo | [info]spartanrabbit | ☑
Comments: I know I have a lot to work on with her and I'm still new to the whole Spartan mentality, but I'm beginning to think this isn't the right setting for her.

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[info]hastohappen
2014-01-02 04:15 am UTC (link)
I am canon blind for every single one of your girls but that doesn't mean I won't try to say something anyway. Well, I have played Halo but seriously not in like forever.

ANYWAY. I really have... nothing but nice things to say. I love how you write Helen especially, her tags are really wonderfully thought through and written so well. I've really enjoyed so many threads with her and Data especially. And. Things.

Yeah, I'm not useful, I just... enjoy playing with you and your characters.

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(no subject) - [info]lifelines, 2014-01-02 07:40 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]hastohappen, 2014-01-02 07:57 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]lifelines, 2014-01-03 03:02 am UTC

[info]notrosesshadow
2014-01-04 04:02 am UTC (link)
Well, Helen is awesome. I wanted to throw Mal at her because he jarred his shoulder during a raptor attack, but never got my act together this week. And it would mean two of my characters needing medical advice from her in a day.

And Martha loves her too.

Mal enjoyed sparring with Kelly... and will gladly show her the bars.

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(no subject) - [info]lifelines, 2014-01-05 10:48 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]cptn_tightpants, 2014-01-06 01:11 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]lifelines, 2014-01-06 06:57 am UTC

[info]blue_eyed
2014-01-01 08:24 pm UTC (link)
Player name: katana

Character: piter de vries | dune (novel) | [info]blue_eyed | ☑
Comments: i know that not a lot of people are familiar with dune or piter, but i'm always excited about crit! even if you aren't at all familiar with him or his canon, please let me know about questions/concerns/input whenever they might come up. lately, i've been feeling kind of stilted with him and worried that he isn't quite sinister or calculating enough.

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[info]hastohappen
2014-01-02 03:58 am UTC (link)
As I said on plurk, I am absolutely up for some tense cat and mouse type banter with these guys. Might help with the sinister and calculating angle?

Though I will say that, while I'm not super familiar with Dune other than having seen the movie ages ago which is not exactly helpful, I absolutely love the way that you write Piter. I know canonblind crit only goes so far, but I love how much thought goes into your tags for him and I am always delighted to be able to play with you.

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[info]matter
2014-01-02 01:28 am UTC (link)
Player name: crystal

Character: elena gilbert | the vampire diaries | [info]matter | ☑
Comments: i have been soooooo scarce the past few months and am aware of that/working on making more time (which should be easier now that i'm on break!) elena's been here for a long time but has only recently become a vampire so i'd like to explore that more. she's also been on a 'find the engineers!11!' kick and has been feeling pretty lonely and just lost her bff caroline forbes to the dimensional stabilizer. please please i will cherish any crit/plotting ideas anyone has.

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[info]lifelines
2014-01-02 07:42 am UTC (link)
I just want more of Elena with Helen and/or Liz >> Especially with the vampire angle.

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(no subject) - [info]matter, 2014-01-02 04:55 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]lifelines, 2014-01-02 05:49 pm UTC

[info]kitty_has_claws
2014-01-02 01:42 am UTC (link)
Player name: Haunt

Character:
Kitty Pryde | Marvel: X-Men (AoA) | [info]kitty_has_claws | ☑
Yuuri Shibuya | Kyou Kara Maou | [info]demon_king | ☑
Euphemia li Britannia | Code Geass | [info]friendly_fire | ☑
Sam Winchester | Supernatural | [info]tallerthanthou | ☑
Artemis Crock | DC: Young Justice | [info]greenerarrow | ☑

Veridical (Warden) | MarinaNova | [info]ai_veridical | ☑
Smith (Engineer) | MarinaNova | [info]just_smith | ☑

Comments: I've been awfully slow on my tag returns. I've also been saying this for awhile, but I am aware and concerned about it and working on improvements.

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[info]foreverjack
2014-01-03 11:12 am UTC (link)
I love your characters, as you know. I do feel like you're not really feeling them at the moment? I don't know if that's just because of other things you've got going on in your life or whether perhaps you might find it easier with fewer characters? Just going on what tends to help me, there!

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[info]notrosesshadow
2014-01-04 04:08 am UTC (link)
I love your characters and all the interactions I've had with them. But I'm going to agree with Anna that from my end, it seems as though maybe you're just not interested. Or that it's difficult with so many? I don't want to lose awesome CR, but if we can get more of you with less characters, that's way more preferable to me than lots of characters and a general feeling of malaise.

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[info]first_xo
2014-01-02 03:07 am UTC (link)
Player name: Alms that girl who only plays characters with complicated name issues

Character: Number One / Morgan Robbins | hipster Star Trek: TOS | [info]first_xo | ☑
Comments: This lady has like half an hour of canon forever so I am largely winging it? If you have any questions or comments this is the place.

Character: Brian Moser / Rudy Cooper | Dexter | [info]cold_dry_pieces | ☑
Comments: Sorry for being creepy. <3

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[info]hastohappen
2014-01-02 04:01 am UTC (link)
I have nothing useful to say, so. I love you, bro.

Nah for real you are aware of this, but I love how you extrapolate Morgan's characterization based on her glorious presence in that one mere episode. And you know I am super in love with your Biney forever, right? Right.

Okay. That is all. o7

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[info]lifelines
2014-01-06 07:02 am UTC (link)
I have nothing useful to say ever, but I love how you've taken someone with so little screentime and given her background, personality, and everything else. She ties in so well to the cast and everything going on. I absolutely loved throwing Helen at her, especially with regard to the Locutus stuff, and I hope they get more chances in the future!

I am completely canonblind to the creeper, but I love that he's getting involved in Helen stuff XD

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[info]actsmagnificent
2014-01-02 03:28 am UTC (link)
Player name: Mari

Character: Haruka Tenoh | Sailor Moon | [info]actsmagnificent | ☑
Comments: I've had a lot going on lately so I think she's gotten a little stilted. Suggestions on how to fix that or just general feedback on how she comes across are super welcome!

On the plotting side, chances are she ended up passed out somewhere during the fear event, and she also abandoned her Vespa on a random street. If anybody wants to say they picked her or the bike up I would love to arrange either handwaving or a backdated thread. Thanks!

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[info]killerspeed
2014-01-02 11:20 pm UTC (link)
Player name: Ziya

Character: Bart Allen | Smallville | [info]killerspeed | ☑
Comments: I fully admit that I haven't had the motivation to play for the past four weeks or so, so I'm sorry that I haven't exactly been around! Any general feedback would be awesome, as well as any handwaving concerning the fear event (since I was on hiatus for the entire month).

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(no subject) - [info]notrosesshadow, 2014-01-04 04:09 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]killerspeed, 2014-01-04 06:11 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]cptn_tightpants, 2014-01-05 04:34 pm UTC

[info]thisiscalm
2014-01-02 11:44 pm UTC (link)
Player name: Rica

Character: Spencer Reid | Criminal Minds | [info]thisiscalm | ☑
Comments: I feel like Reid always has a million things to do and he's involved in everything forever, which can be... treacherous because I play him so much that I don't know if I'm still playing him right. It's literally been forever since I last canon reviewed, so any comments or crit on how I play him/his voice/habits/choices would be more than welcome, seriously!

Character: Aidan Reilly | original character | [info]redclayheroics | ☑
Comments: Aidan's been through a lot lately and I'm a little concerned that I'm writing him too mopey — is this the case or do I still strike a decent balance between depressed with an undertone of PTSD and his actual, happy-go-lucky personality?


Character: Spike | Buffy the Vampire Slayer | [info]chipswiththat | ☑
Comments: With the Scoobies gone I've tried to hit his villainous side a bit more rather than the moral ambiguity that I've played with since I apped him. Is this working? Is he bad enough? Too much? Any ideas for evil plotting is also more than welcome!


Character: Charlotte Charles | Pushing Daisies | [info]pushedback | ☑
Comments: I was seriously contemplating dropping her before Christmas and then I canon reviewed and yeah no, she's staying. I would like to hear some words on whether or not I do her right, especially in regards to the idle flirting she's been engaging in lately. While I intend for it to be harmless and playful, I'm a little worried that it's not coming across as such but instead something more serious.


also if you have anything to say about Conscienti ( [info]ai_conscienti ), Mary Wesson ([info]muliebrities ) or my rp skillz in general I am one giant ear! Come at me, bro!

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(no subject) - [info]bendthekey, 2014-01-03 01:09 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]thisiscalm, 2014-01-04 02:29 pm UTC
2/2 wow okay I had many words - [info]thisiscalm, 2014-01-04 02:29 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]foreverjack, 2014-01-03 11:22 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]thisiscalm, 2014-01-04 02:37 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]foreverjack, 2014-01-05 12:55 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]notrosesshadow, 2014-01-04 04:12 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]thisiscalm, 2014-01-04 02:42 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]cptn_tightpants, 2014-01-05 04:37 pm UTC
Sailor G
[info]devine_braid
2014-01-03 02:22 am UTC (link)
Player name: Sailor G

Character: Duo Maxwell | Gundam Wing | [info]devine_braid | ☑

Character: Kitty Pryde | X-Men: Evolution | [info]kitty_phase | ☑

Character: Piper Halliwell | Charmed | [info]trytobenormal | ☑

Character: Tieria Erde | Gundam 00 | [info]trial_by_veda | ☑

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Re: Sailor G - [info]notrosesshadow, 2014-01-04 04:13 am UTC
Re: Sailor G - [info]devine_braid, 2014-01-04 02:30 pm UTC

[info]sadistfaction
2014-01-03 03:26 am UTC (link)
Player name: Haru

Character: Sougo Okita | Gintama | [info]sadistfaction | ☑
Kaoru Hitachiin | Ouran High School Host Club | [info]doubletakes | ☑

Comments: I don't really have any specific concerns or anything, but I'm always willing to improve upon my writing and things! Mostly I just want to be sure that Kaoru sounds like Kaoru and not like Hikaru since I'm used to playing Hikaru. I've played Hikaru much longer in general than I have Kaoru (I have played Kaoru before at other games in the past but nothing as long as Hikaru) and of course they are similar in many ways, so their similarities will always be there. But beyond their similarities they're still very different, and I hope Kaoru sounds different from him and that they're not overlapping... Ramble ramble. I hope I make sense.

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[info]foreverjack
2014-01-03 11:08 am UTC (link)
Player name: Anna

Character: Jack Harkness | Doctor Who/Torchwood | [info]foreverjack | ☑
Comments: I am very aware that a lot of the threads I play in this game are closed to Ianto and sometimes it feels like the two of us are just playing a PSL instead of participating in a game. But then that wonderful relationship we're exploring impacts on other characters, as it has on the fantastic storyline we've got going with Spike, and that in turn impacts on their relationship, so, yeah. I'm not sorry, except in that it gives me less time to get out there and play with others.

Having said that, getting to play Jack Harkness as willingly (kind of, by this point) monogamous is so completely different from anything I've ever done before with him that, no, I'm not sorry at all! :-)

But anyway, I am always open to concrit and ideas and new relationships, so let me know if there's anything you'd like to play with Jack.

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(no subject) - [info]notrosesshadow, 2014-01-04 03:58 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]foreverjack, 2014-01-05 12:38 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]cptn_tightpants, 2014-01-05 04:39 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]foreverjack, 2014-01-05 08:28 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]cptn_tightpants, 2014-01-06 01:10 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]foreverjack, 2014-01-06 02:44 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]notrosesshadow, 2014-01-06 06:10 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]foreverjack, 2014-01-09 09:55 pm UTC

[info]corpsepartying
2014-01-03 11:19 pm UTC (link)
Player name: Jasper

Character: Aradia Megido | Homestuck | [info]corpsepartying | ☑
Comments: Not really looking for anything specific, just sticking this here for whatever feedback anyone might have!

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[info]notrosesshadow
2014-01-04 03:57 am UTC (link)
Player name: Al

Character: Martha Jones | Doctor Who | [info]notrosesshadow | ☑
Comments: Any feedback is welcome. Also, let me know if you want to do anything with her. I'm feeling a little stuck with her on CR.

Character: Malcolm Reynolds | Firefly | [info]cptn_tightpants | ☑
Comments: All comments welcome for him. Also, I just found out he's probably getting canon mates!!

Character: Sarah Williams | Labyrinth | [info]labyrinthrunner | ☑
Comments: She's new... so any criticism is welcome. Also, she's about to get a healthy dose of adulthood thrown in her face. Anyone who wants to be part of that let me know!

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[info]noahism
2014-01-04 05:14 am UTC (link)
Player name: Oli.

Character: Alex Karev | Grey's Anatomy | [info]evilspawn | ☑
Character: Rebecca Crane | Assassin's Creed | [info]needmymp3 | ☑
Character: Tyki Mikk | D.Gray-Man | [info]noahism | ☑

Comments: I don't usually post to these because I have a constant hmd going in their journals, but I thought I'd give it a go. Karev's the newest muse, but I've been pleased with his integration.

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(no subject) - [info]labyrinthrunner, 2014-01-05 04:40 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]noahism, 2014-01-06 10:02 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]labyrinthrunner, 2014-01-07 05:53 am UTC


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