24 September 2008 @ 07:17 pm
Choose Your Own Adventure - 3 of 7  
Title: Empty Chamber
Author: [info]dirtylttlescret
Warnings: Dirty, dirty smut.
A/N: Thanks to [info]tweedygal for the beta. Prompts: Midnight/Office/Finger Fucking


Rougher. Since Justin had joined the Pink Posse, sex with him had become exponentially rougher. There was an angry edge to it, coupled with a false bravado and uneasiness that had never been there during the Stockwell campaign. Because this time, what he was doing was darker - less untouchable superhero and more self-righteous vigilante.

But Justin had never been a self-righteous person, and so to justify the violence and the bitter words against those "mother fucking asshole straight guys," he'd tapped into pain that had opened inside him like a newly formed fissure. And if he used that and yelled loud enough, he could convince himself that everything he did with Cody was for a better cause. That it wasn't about vengeance or retribution; it was about justice.

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"Oh and Theodore? If you fuck up, I'll have you murdered," said Brian, not even glancing up from his desk.

Ted chuckled nervously, then swallowed hard when Brian lifted his head and caught his gaze, indicating that he wasn't joking. He disappeared out of the building, leaving Brian alone in the newly remodeled bathhouse with only the sound of the pen scrawling across the page to accompany him. A few minutes later, his cell phone buzzed, vibrating violently on the desk. He reached for it, hoping it was Justin telling him he was done for the night, that he was on his way to Daphne's and that he'd see him tomorrow. But it was Michael.

"You'll never guess what happened," he said excitedly.

"The social worker deemed your house worthy for the next made for TV after school special."

"How'd you know?"

"Michael, you and the professor are the epitome of everything a county worker looks for in a home for teen prostitutes: boring, normal, and completely predictable."

"Former teen prostitute, and we are not boring. I'll have you know that yesterday, Ed Piskor, the guy who wrote Deviant Funnies and Isolation Chamber came into the store and-"

"Later Mikey," said Brian, closing the phone with a click.

He settled back into his work, scarcely losing focus except to take a sip from the glass of Beam on his desk every now and then. It was nearly 11:45 when his hand finally cramped up so much he had to put down the pen and stretch for a minute. He flexed his fingers over his head, leaning back he took a deep breath and surveyed the dimly lit bathhouse. His office. His company. His business.

None of it was going to matter if Justin and the Magenta Marauders didn't get some fucking common sense knocked into them. Before some asshole with a gun called them on their bullshit.

The phone buzzed again.

"Speak of the devil."

"Where are you?" Justin asked.

"Still at work. Are you with Cody?"

"No. He went home," he said breathlessly. There was something anxious yet electric in his voice, like someone who'd just jumped out of a plane and hadn't yet pulled the cord on their parachute. "Do you still want to christen your new office?" he asked.

"I already beat you to it. The delivery guy from Medici's certainly fulfilled his promise of coming in thirty minutes or less," he teased.

"Uh huh. I'll be there in ten."

He walked in at five to midnight, using the key Brian had given him a few days before, his body charged with a chaotic energy that seemed to permeate his actions more and more these days. Brian walked around from the desk and kissed him, pulling his shorter frame against his own body. The smell of sex hung on him.

"Somebody got lucky tonight," said Brian, pulling him by his belt toward the desk. "I thought you were out on your super secret mission to avenge queers everywhere."

"I was," said Justin. "Liberty Avenue was quiet, so we decided to have a little fun," he said as he unbuttoned Brian's shirt and slipped his cold hands inside. He ran his palms over his skin, feeling his muscles flex under his fingertips as he grabbed at his torso with a needy urgency.

"This kind of fun wouldn't involve poking a hetero-hornet nest with a stick, would it?"

"I already told you, we're protecting the community," Justin said. "And I don't want to talk about this anymore. Cody and I are both adults and we can take care of ourselves."

"If you're both such grownups, then act like it," Brian said, stopping him from slipping the now unbuttoned shirt off of his shoulders. Justin seemed surprised by the gesture. He bit his lip and set his jaw, searching his face as though there was something he didn't want to tell him.

"Brian-" he started, but didn't finish.

Brian lowered his head and softened his voice. "I want you safe," he said simply.

"Safe? Darren got bashed in a parking lot near Woody's. I got my head split open at prom. None of us are safe," he said pulling away angrily.

Brian was silent. There was nothing in his statement that he could refute, because it was all true. As true as the words Justin had reiterated back to him verbatim when they had wrestled the other night on the floor: "The ones that hate you to your face, and the ones that hate you behind your back." And as twisted as those words had become in his pretty little mouth, he had been the one to put them there first.

"I want you to fuck me," said Justin, tapping back into that jittery rush of adrenaline which had been there just a moment before. He grabbed the back of his neck and pulled him in for a kiss, hard and wild, a kiss more full of tongue than lip. "Hard," he said, rolling Brian's bottom lip between his teeth.

Brian felt as though he'd suddenly been lit on fire. He grabbed Justin's arm, pressed him face first on the desk, and pulled his pants and underwear down with one rough move. He sucked on two of his own fingers, keeping the palm of his other hand firmly in the dip of his back.

"Like this?" he asked as he shoved a finger up his hole.

"More," moaned Justin, and Brian obliged him by adding the second an instant later. The friction was hot and tight, and he rammed his fingers in deeper as he began to fuck Justin steadily with his hand, replacing words and commands with grunts and moans.

Justin spread his legs as much as he could with his pants hanging around his ankles, and as Brian thrust forward, using his leverage to pin him to the desk, he pushed back into the motions, demanding more and more as the fuck got more erratic.

Brian reached into his back pocket for a packet of lube. He quickly ripped it open with his teeth and drizzled it onto his hand, slipping in a third finger as Justin clenched back around the digit. He groaned when Brian immediately pushed to the knuckle and followed with the added pressure of his pinkie just outside, not giving him a chance to adjust to the tightness.

Heavy breathing filled the room. Brian's cock strained against the soft material of his pants, but instead of unzipping and shoving himself in Justin's tight ass, he rubbed himself against his solid thigh, savoring the muted friction between skins and layers of fabric. The hand on his back found it's way under Justin's jacket and shirt to find smooth skin underneath, while Justin clutched at the edge of the desk tightly when Brian slipped the fourth finger inside. He grunted a sling of obscenities, his body shaking under the added pressure and stretch of his hole.

Brian leaned over and whispered in his ear as he stroked his prostate, "I'm going to fuck you. I'm going to fuck you across this desk until you make a mess all over it. And every time I come to work in the morning, I'm going to be sitting down at a desk that's smeared all over with your come."

Justin moaned, turning his head so that his short and fuzzy hair brushed against Brian's cheek. He was seconds away from dissolving into a puddle of frantic nerves and want. His skin was flushed and hot with lust, his mouth open and parted. He was desperate to come.

"Ungh, please," he swallowed hard, barely able to speak as he writhed on the desk. Brian nudged his hip with his free hand so that he lifted up off of the sweaty surface, allowing him a few inches of clearance to reach around and fist his leaking cock beneath him. He jerked rapidly, making sure to catch the sensitive spot just under the head with every upstroke. A moment later Justin was coming, shooting onto his hand and all over the table. He groaned as he shuddered through his orgasm, falling into the sticky mess as Brian pulled out of him and wiped his hand with a napkin left over from lunch.

"Don't move," he commanded as he removed Justin's clothes and shoes. Justin was limp against the desk, the words unnecessary as Brian unzipped his pants and slipped on a condom, pushing in easily. He went slow, thrusting in and out with a patience Justin had been unwilling to use fifteen minutes earlier. He stroked his back and leaned in to kiss him at the dip between his shoulder blades, bringing him back from the edge of oblivion.

"Don't," he whispered into his ear, twining their fingers together as he stirred his hips, causing Justin to shiver under his touch. "Don't do it anymore," he pleaded.

"I have to," was the only thing Justin said back.
 
 
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Ny[info]not_yet_defined on September 24th, 2008 10:02 pm (UTC)
um.

:X

first that was so much more than just dirty dirty smut.

second, the dirty dirty smut part has obliterated my brain and made commenting on the rest impossible

damn.
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qafcracked[info]qafcracked on September 26th, 2008 04:12 pm (UTC)
If you want, I can spank you and force you to comment.
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rosy5000: BJ Spanks[info]rosy5000 on September 24th, 2008 10:22 pm (UTC)
Yay for dirty, dirty smut. ;D

And Brian rubbing against Justin was so very very hot.
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qafcracked[info]qafcracked on September 26th, 2008 04:13 pm (UTC)
Lol, I thought that was such a minor part of the smut, but apparently it tickled your fancy, so that worked out well!
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[info]quirks4me on September 24th, 2008 10:29 pm (UTC)
Umm that was freakin' hot.

And then the ending? Brian pleading and Justin saying "I have to"? That just made it so much more.

Incredible.
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qafcracked[info]qafcracked on September 26th, 2008 04:13 pm (UTC)
Aw shucks.

Thanks for coming along for the ride.
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notreallyme10[info]notreallyme10 on September 24th, 2008 10:50 pm (UTC)
Wow! This was so unexpected... I love it. So unbelievably hot, but also so much more. Great use of the theme!
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qafcracked[info]qafcracked on September 26th, 2008 04:14 pm (UTC)
Sometimes my brain says, "Okay dls, it's time to broaden your scope and write something more than crack or porn."
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[info]noteverything on September 24th, 2008 10:55 pm (UTC)
I love this title so much more than the ones we talked about!

And now, a few of my personal favorite lines.

Brian lowered his head and softened his voice. "I want you safe," he said simply.
Tears at my heart...

He sucked on two of his own fingers, keeping the palm of his other hand firmly in the dip of his back.

"Like this?" he asked as he shoved a finger up his hole.

Guhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!! 0498a%$#^P(&)(*&)HHH!!!!!!
Seriously, hot.

Definitely not the standard PWP, my dear. Tonight, just reading it, not thinking about mechanics, it was really stunning. Thanks so much for sharing it.

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qafcracked[info]qafcracked on September 26th, 2008 04:16 pm (UTC)
Guhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!! 0498a%$#^P(&)(*&)HHH!!!!!!

Woah. That was an awesome comment. I had no idea that line would have that kind of affect on you. Go me! (And I say that in the most humble way possible. Really.)
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[info]noteverything on September 26th, 2008 04:17 pm (UTC)
Um...yeah. I like that sort of thing. ;-)
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qafcracked[info]qafcracked on September 26th, 2008 04:24 pm (UTC)
What? Finger fucking, Brian giving it to Justin hard, or Brian being forceful and putting Justin in his place?

Inquiring minds want to know... for future reference of course.
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[info]noteverything on September 26th, 2008 04:27 pm (UTC)
All of the above.

Oh, and Brian sucking on his own fingers to get them wet enough to shove them into Justin. So, yeah, everything. ;-)
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qafcracked[info]qafcracked on September 26th, 2008 07:55 pm (UTC)
*Catalogues away for a rainy day*
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[info]noteverything on September 26th, 2008 10:12 pm (UTC)
Really, why wait for rain?

You could write me something oh, say...now? ;-)
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qafcracked[info]qafcracked on September 26th, 2008 10:16 pm (UTC)
Can't. SOOOO tired. Doing this last set of stuff for work, then driving home tonight.
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[info]noteverything on September 26th, 2008 10:17 pm (UTC)
Awww, I was just kidding.

Have fun this weekend...enjoy the family. xoxo.
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qafcracked[info]qafcracked on September 26th, 2008 10:25 pm (UTC)
I will ;) See you around.
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secretsolitaire: bj 311 floor sex[info]secretsolitaire on September 25th, 2008 12:23 am (UTC)
I love when porn is more than just porn. This is fabulous -- there's so much going on emotionally between them. And also, it's hot. ;-) Well done.
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qafcracked[info]qafcracked on September 26th, 2008 04:16 pm (UTC)
Sex is fun, but sometimes you need something with a little meat on it, you know?
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Ai: B/J - hallistrick 302[info]zaipixie on September 25th, 2008 03:07 am (UTC)
Hot sweet and angsty! What more can a fangirl ask for?

I love how you managed to make this PWP into a Porn WITH a Plot.

Thank you.
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qafcracked[info]qafcracked on September 26th, 2008 04:17 pm (UTC)
Lol, why thanks. Apparently I can write more than crack and pointless smut.
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[info]autumn_screams on September 25th, 2008 06:56 am (UTC)
wow! that was unexpected.
was it just me or was the latter part seeped with too much desperation that it hurt? it was more than sex...
thank you so much for this.
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qafcracked[info]qafcracked on September 26th, 2008 04:18 pm (UTC)
It's very angsty, that's for sure. I'm glad you liked it though, makes me feel all gooey inside.
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[info]journalkitten.livejournal.com on September 25th, 2008 07:25 am (UTC)
Wow. That was... So very sexy and hot and a number of other synonyms for "GUH!"

I loved how you mixed the Cause with the Fucking - it was almost like an extended re-mix of the wrestling match at the loft, but happier (in a sad sort of way ;-)
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qafcracked[info]qafcracked on September 26th, 2008 04:20 pm (UTC)
I have always wondered how that scene would have continued, but in all honesty, I can't imagine any ending to that wrestling scene that would fit in with all of the emotion. I'm glad you thought this sort of picked up where that left off.
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[info]besamislabios on September 25th, 2008 10:59 am (UTC)
What I loved the most if the way you made me feel so many emotions while reading your story. I was laughing so hard when I read the Magenta Marauders, not sure if it was supposed to be that funny, but I kept picturing Blue's friend. Anyway, after calming down, the hotness of that scene is incredible and of course the whole subject is so much more profound than just porn. I loved absolutely everything. &hearts
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qafcracked[info]qafcracked on September 26th, 2008 04:23 pm (UTC)
Lol, Blues Clues! Yeah, I meant it to be in line with Brian's snark, so I'm glad you found it amusing. Sometimes I get inspired to use the emotional blender and stir everything all up together. Thanks!
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xie_xie_xie[info]xie_xie_xie on September 25th, 2008 03:06 pm (UTC)
One of the best fics I've ever read. Gorgeous.
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qafcracked[info]qafcracked on September 26th, 2008 04:36 pm (UTC)
Honest to goodness, you have no idea how much that just stroked my little writer's ego. Thank you.
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happier_bunny: b/j 403 chair sex kiss[info]happier_bunny on September 25th, 2008 07:07 pm (UTC)
oh my...the intensity was stunning...the smut was well, smut and so freaking hot and it matched the emotional intensity.

I feel a little weak in the knees.

This was really incredible. WOW.
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qafcracked[info]qafcracked on September 27th, 2008 01:42 am (UTC)
*grabs you around the waist to hold you up*

*steals a page out of Outlander's book and dances you around the room*

I'm glad you liked this :D
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[info]catcayman on September 25th, 2008 08:11 pm (UTC)
Wonderful fic, I only wish we had seen this filmed! :D
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qafcracked[info]qafcracked on September 27th, 2008 01:42 am (UTC)
Hehe, me too! Thank you muchly!
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[info]jule1122 on September 26th, 2008 03:53 pm (UTC)
Wow! So much more than porn. The dynamics of that arc tend to mystify and elude me yet reading this so much made sense. It really resonated with me especially this:
Because this time, what he was doing was darker - less untouchable superhero and more self-righteous vigilante.

But Justin had never been a self-righteous person, and so to justify the violence and the bitter words against those "mother fucking asshole straight guys," he'd tapped into pain that had opened inside him like a newly formed fissure.


this:
Brian was silent. There was nothing in his statement that he could refute, because it was all true. As true as the words Justin had reiterated back to him verbatim when they had wrestled the other night on the floor: "The ones that hate you to your face, and the ones that hate you behind your back." And as twisted as those words had become in his pretty little mouth, he had been the one to put them there first.

and of course this:
"Don't," he whispered into his ear, twining their fingers together as he stirred his hips, causing Justin to shiver under his touch. "Don't do it anymore," he pleaded.

"I have to," was the only thing Justin said back.


You used the sex as it is on the show to tell us something about Brian and Justin, where they are and how they feel in ways words can't. Fabulous
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qafcracked[info]qafcracked on September 27th, 2008 02:01 am (UTC)
I'm glad I could help you find sense in that arc, and I'm also glad that you left me such wonderful quotey feedback!

And I love writing sex that means more than fucking (even if this was supposed to be PWP hehe). Thanks!
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[info]nerilka24 on September 26th, 2008 04:19 pm (UTC)
Lovely, lovely piece - hot and angsty and full of meaning.
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qafcracked[info]qafcracked on September 27th, 2008 02:02 am (UTC)
Thank you my dear! I ♥ the angst :)
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1bongo1[info]1bongo1 on September 27th, 2008 01:59 am (UTC)
I can't comment coherently right now, my brain is fried (in a good way).

All I can picture is that desk the next day and Brian working at it. Working? Right!
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qafcracked[info]qafcracked on September 27th, 2008 02:04 am (UTC)
Lol, working, riiight. I love it when I can fry people's brains. It truly is great fun.

*Hands you a cold margarita to cool your brain down*
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1bongo1[info]1bongo1 on September 27th, 2008 05:33 pm (UTC)
A cold margarita for my brain, a cold shower for my body.

We'll see if that works!
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testdog65: B/J S4 Kinnetik kiss[info]testdog65 on September 27th, 2008 03:57 pm (UTC)
Whoa. Hot and yet SO much more. You really tapped into that raw anger and energy that buzzed around Justin through the entire pink posse arc. Excellent characterizations and a gut punch of an ending. Fantastic fic!

~Ellen
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qafcracked[info]qafcracked on September 29th, 2008 08:33 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much! I'm glad it all came through in the telling ;)
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outlander: SP Posse Justin[info]outlander on September 29th, 2008 10:01 am (UTC)
Angsty scorching hot porn?
I'm panting from the OMG hotness, yet aching a little from the angst. It's left me a little wibbly. I love you for that. Well, lots of other reasons too, but that for right now!

"Don't," he whispered into his ear, twining their fingers together as he stirred his hips, causing Justin to shiver under his touch. "Don't do it anymore," he pleaded.
"I have to," was the only thing Justin said back.
*gasps as my heart physically cracks*

BTW, you had me at the warning! hee hee
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qafcracked[info]qafcracked on September 29th, 2008 08:31 pm (UTC)
Hello my little stalker! *Takes some of teh love from 510 and pastes your poor cracked heart back together*

I'm glad you liked this :D *Licks you*
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sanami276: Queer as Folk / BJ 403 lick[info]ohfreckle on October 6th, 2008 02:34 pm (UTC)
Oh wow, I think the dirty sex just fried what little is left of my brain, I love JUstin this frantic and needy.
It also made me a little achy, because hellooo, S4 angst. You mixed both most excellent ♥
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qafcracked[info]qafcracked on October 25th, 2008 09:54 pm (UTC)
Why thank you very much. Justin is in so many different places in this arc which makes it really interesting to write :D
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[info]sjmpets on December 28th, 2008 05:35 pm (UTC)
sex didn't work this time. but hot fun trying.
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qafcracked[info]qafcracked on December 30th, 2008 12:30 am (UTC)
Lol, it certainly is, isn't it? Thanks!
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