26 August 2007 @ 05:13 pm
Theme #5: Kinnetik - 4 of 6  
Title: Say Yes
Author: [info]not_yet_defined
Timeline: Around 502
A/N: This is more of a PWPlet – really short. self-beta'd – so yeah, all mistakes are mine. And thank you to my favorite porn whore [info]happier_bunny cause i totally thought up half of this when i was supposed to be helping her, :X.


Justin's head hung back over the edge of the desk. In between moans of incoherent pleasure random images were flashing through his mind – the jumble of boards and papers spilled on the floor below him, the angle of the coffee table to the couch (they weren't quite parallel and Justin almost managed to laugh at the thought of Brian moving it 87 times until he was satisfied with it's position but he was distracted by the flick of a tongue against his nipple and whimpered instead).

He was beyond focusing on any one image for too long. Focusing on anything other than the exquisite slow burn and feeling of perfectly aching fullness he was experiencing as Brian tortured him over and over and over again moving in and out with maddeningly snail-like speed. His mind would drift for a split-second, long enough for a snapshot image to form. Then Brian's mouth would find his neck, or his teeth would find his lower lip, and the particular view of the drain in the middle of the floor as seen from upside down, would fade to black, streaked through with color, behind his eyelids.

He was never going to get off at this rate. He was just going to be fucked into exhaustion and die.

Justin moved his hand to his dick, only to have it batted away yet again.

"Patience," Brian grunted, emphasizing his point by snapping his hips hard against Justin's ass, and, Justin noted - thank fucking god - moving a little faster.

Brian leaned in close, whispering a litany of dirty sentiments against Justin's lips between rough, wet, bruising kisses. His rhythm picking up speed, the head of his dick hitting Justin's prostate again and again with short, quick strokes.

Justin's hand tightened around the back of Brian's neck as his back curved, and slick with sweat, slid over the hard, smooth surface of the desk.

He was so fucking close, "So close, Brian. Please, don't stop." Brian gripped the edge of the desk near Justin's head with one hand, and gripped Justin with the other. Justin's legs tightened around him, his fingers dug into his arm, and Justin's rapid, shallow breaths emphasized his words.

The next plea died on Justin's lips replaced by a series of loud and poorly restrained moans as his come flooded out between them. His ass involuntarily clenching down on the hard cock deep inside of him, as Brian's own orgasm spiraled out of his control. Brian bit down on Justin's shoulder to restrain the sounds threatening to rip out of his throat.

They both stayed still for a minute, Brian's forehead pressed against Justin's neck, trying to brace his weight on the hands now flat against the surface of the desk. He wasn't particularly comfortable, but he didn't particularly want to move. Justin's head once again flopped backwards over the edge of the desk.

"The coffee table is crooked."

Brian laughed, "Way to kill the moment Sunshine."

Justin shrugged, "One of us was bound to do it sooner rather than later," biting his lip as Brian carefully pulled out.

Justin sat up, and thought he probably ought to feel at least a little embarrassed that he was sitting naked on a desk in the middle of a brightly lit office, but he really wasn't. At least not until Brian, fully re-clothed, standing in front of him and wiping the come off Justin's chest with a wet towel, leaned into kiss him and then said, as he pulled away, smirk securely in place, "You were kind of loud."

Justin walked past Cynthia's desk on his way out, and paused to politely tell her to "have a nice day." When she responded by thanking him for coming back from LA, and asking him if she could pencil him in for the same time tomorrow, he at least had decency to blush, and say, "Yes."
 
 
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xie_xie_xie: 301 memory[info]xie_xie_xie on August 26th, 2007 10:49 pm (UTC)
ROFLMAO! Oh Justin! Oh Brian!

On my darling not_yet_defined! How I loved this!!!!!!!!!
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(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined on August 27th, 2007 02:55 am (UTC)
singlewoman: B/J kiss by paddies[info]singlewoman on August 26th, 2007 10:50 pm (UTC)
OMG Hot Hot Hot!!

And I just love Cynthia.
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(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined on August 27th, 2007 02:58 am (UTC)
happier_bunny: b/j 402 lick[info]happier_bunny on August 26th, 2007 10:50 pm (UTC)
HOTNESS OVERLOAD
Totally hot and made me melt.

He was never going to get off at this rate. He was just going to be fucked into exhaustion and die.

Tis true that I was thinking, Brian really wouldn't be that mean. LOL

I adore desperate Justin and teasing Brian and snarkiness all around. Happy happy sigh.
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Re: HOTNESS OVERLOAD - [info]not_yet_defined on August 27th, 2007 01:09 am (UTC)
[info]sexy_pumpkin on August 26th, 2007 11:37 pm (UTC)
Fuck that was hot!!I'd say you were back:) loved it, shit B&J are amazing together, I loved that,,great fic.
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(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined on August 27th, 2007 03:56 am (UTC)
testdog65: B/J post leather bj S3[info]testdog65 on August 27th, 2007 12:04 am (UTC)
Had me laughing and panting at the same time. Incredibly hot and very entertaining.

I loved this: His mind would drift for a split-second, long enough for a snapshot image to form. Then Brian's mouth would find his neck, or his teeth would find his lower lip, and the particular view of the drain in the middle of the floor as seen from upside down, would fade to black, streaked through with color, behind his eyelids.

And the whole crooked coffee table thing just cracked me up. I am very glad you forced the issue and wrote this. It was fun and so v.v. hot!

~Ellen

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(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined on August 27th, 2007 03:59 am (UTC)
secretsolitaire: bj 311 floor sex[info]secretsolitaire on August 27th, 2007 12:13 am (UTC)
*snicker* Man, I would love to be Cynthia. She must be privy to all sorts of action. Anyway, yum, this was very hot. :-)
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(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined on August 27th, 2007 04:03 am (UTC)
Sidhe[info]sidhe on August 27th, 2007 12:22 am (UTC)
Damn, hot doesn't begin to describe that. Loved it. :)
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(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined on August 27th, 2007 04:01 am (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]sidhe on August 27th, 2007 11:24 pm (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined on August 27th, 2007 11:53 pm (UTC)
[info]catcayman on August 27th, 2007 01:44 am (UTC)
The ending...is perfect. Absolutely perfect. Thank you so much for this sensational smut and humor. Wonderful!
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(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined on August 27th, 2007 04:04 am (UTC)
Britin: 513 sex legs by paddies[info]_alicesprings on August 27th, 2007 02:41 am (UTC)
Ok this was all kinds of hot and amusing. Brilliant!
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(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined on August 27th, 2007 04:05 am (UTC)
adorkablenerd[info]adorkablenerd on August 27th, 2007 02:44 am (UTC)
I love Cynthia. And this fic. So hot and funny at the same time. Just great.
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(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined on August 27th, 2007 04:06 am (UTC)
[info]plasticine_star on August 27th, 2007 04:28 am (UTC)
Incoherent pleasure mixed with the funny, yup that's what this was.

And Justin noticing that the angle of the coffee table and the couch weren't parallel just makes me LMAO! you have to love his artistic nature
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(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined on August 27th, 2007 08:23 am (UTC)
bodleian[info]bodleian on August 27th, 2007 08:01 am (UTC)
Brian really has redefined the term 'torture'. This is great!
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(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined on August 27th, 2007 08:26 am (UTC)
all it takes is one decision a lot of guts: buttsex?[info]whatthefuckbenj on August 27th, 2007 08:30 am (UTC)
damn I'd love to be in Cynthia's shoes ;)
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(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined on August 27th, 2007 09:30 am (UTC)
[info]reizaine on August 27th, 2007 12:49 pm (UTC)
i saw "edge of the desk" in the first line and squealed! the sex is super hot, and the dialogue after that is even better.

At least not until Brian, fully re-clothed, standing in front of him and wiping the come off Justin's chest with a wet towel, leaned into kiss him and then said, as he pulled away, smirk securely in place, "You were kind of loud."

i can so picture that. loved this!
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(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined on August 27th, 2007 09:45 pm (UTC)
[info]rosy5000.livejournal.com on August 27th, 2007 02:15 pm (UTC)
*is incoherent*

GUHHH!!!!
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(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined on August 27th, 2007 09:46 pm (UTC)
[info]herefordroad on August 27th, 2007 02:42 pm (UTC)
terrific! you gave me a chuckle with:

"He was never going to get off at this rate. He was just going to be fucked into exhaustion and die.

we all know brian would never let that happen, thankfully!

and i love justin's unique way of killing the moment!

"The coffee table is crooked."

of course, an exchange with cynthia is always a great ender.

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(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined on August 27th, 2007 09:47 pm (UTC)
firehead: Embrace[info]firehead30 on August 28th, 2007 03:40 am (UTC)
scheduling
Kindly pencil me for next week as well. You will be writing more correct?

ohhh this was hot and funny. I loved how you pulled us in with deperate Justin. He was beyond focusing on any one image for too long. Focusing on anything other than the exquisite slow burn and feeling of perfectly aching fullness he was experiencing as Brian tortured him over and over and over again moving in and out with maddeningly snail-like speed. His mind would drift for a split-second, long enough for a snapshot image to form. Then Brian's mouth would find his neck, or his teeth would find his lower lip, and the particular view of the drain in the middle of the floor as seen from upside down, would fade to black, streaked through with color, behind his eyelids. mmmmmmmmmm so rich and lovely.

He was so fucking close, "So close, Brian. Please, don't stop." Brian gripped the edge of the desk near Justin's head with one hand, and gripped Justin with the other. Justin's legs tightened around him, his fingers dug into his arm, and Justin's rapid, shallow breaths emphasized his words. Oh my, deperate needy Justin and Brian giving him an all encompasing fuck...ohhhhhhhhhhh

Truly another appointment is needed.



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Re: scheduling - [info]not_yet_defined on August 28th, 2007 03:49 am (UTC)
[info]minuet9 on August 28th, 2007 12:36 pm (UTC)
So funny, so hot! :)
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(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined on August 29th, 2007 05:55 am (UTC)
[info]snowmore on September 5th, 2007 01:34 am (UTC)
How something can be hot and erotic one second, and too funny for words the next is amazing. You do it so well!!!

What a wonderful place to feature teh sex - it's a delicious thought to think Cynthia gets to hear teh sex and see the boys post-coital. Lucky girl!

Great job, NY!
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(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined on September 5th, 2007 01:52 am (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]snowmore on September 5th, 2007 02:04 am (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined on September 5th, 2007 02:20 am (UTC)
[info]shenova on February 27th, 2009 04:48 pm (UTC)
Hot happenings in the office.
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(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined on February 27th, 2009 05:47 pm (UTC)
bodleian[info]bodleian on June 24th, 2009 07:06 pm (UTC)
This is fabulous and Cynthia was perfect.
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(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined on June 25th, 2009 06:49 pm (UTC)
[info]sandid on June 24th, 2009 09:07 pm (UTC)
Oh, god....is two years to late to pencil me in for tomorrow?

This was HOT....
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(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined on June 25th, 2009 06:50 pm (UTC)
ahaw9913: B/J 104 Brian's Ass [info]ahaw9913 on June 25th, 2009 12:01 am (UTC)
Yummy, fantastically hot and funny porn! Is there anything better? I don't think so! Outstanding!
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(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined on June 25th, 2009 06:50 pm (UTC)
[info]merepersiflage on June 25th, 2009 09:59 pm (UTC)
Mmmmmm hot and fun. Thank you for the happy.
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(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined on June 25th, 2009 10:02 pm (UTC)
(Anonymous) on July 15th, 2009 02:07 am (UTC)
That was hot! And funny.
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