| Theme #12: Without Words - Fic 3 of 5 |
[Apr. 18th, 2009|10:17 pm] |
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It may be hard, but your really fucking good at it! You must never stop!
I love how you started this... the bit about Justin's fantasies before Brian was great and then Brian comes home and finds him and that part is just GUH!
And then:
Brian leaned over Justin and kissed him, slow and sexy, just like he’d smiled at him before, then raised back up and rolled the condom down Justin’s dick.
I love this because it is completely without words but still pretty direct which is just perfectly Brian.
The whole things is just wonderful!
(((hugs)))) Thank you so much...I love specific feedback like this. I decided to take the prompt literally and have no words at all, which seems like people enjoyed. | |