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Theme #12: Without Words - Fic 3 of 5 [Apr. 18th, 2009|10:17 pm]
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[User Picture]From: [info]notreallyme10
2009-04-18 10:13 pm (UTC)

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It may be hard, but your really fucking good at it! You must never stop!

I love how you started this... the bit about Justin's fantasies before Brian was great and then Brian comes home and finds him and that part is just GUH!

And then:

Brian leaned over Justin and kissed him, slow and sexy, just like he’d smiled at him before, then raised back up and rolled the condom down Justin’s dick.

I love this because it is completely without words but still pretty direct which is just perfectly Brian.

The whole things is just wonderful!
[User Picture]From: [info]noteverything
2009-04-20 11:47 am (UTC)

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(((hugs)))) Thank you so much...I love specific feedback like this. I decided to take the prompt literally and have no words at all, which seems like people enjoyed.