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Theme #11: Public Sex // Sex in Public 2 of 10 [Feb. 16th, 2009|08:07 pm]
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Title: The Hirshhorn

Author: [info]not_yet_defined

A/N: last minute and totally not beta'd so sorry if it offends grammatically or otherwise. Nonetheless, dedicated to [info]pendulumchanges. :D



Brian stared at the installation in front of him thinking of anything but the flickering images. His gaze wandered about the small room. There was nothing else to look at. The walls, ceiling and floor were all painted black. As he turned his head to look behind him at the open door he felt Justin nudge him with his elbow. Heaving a great sigh he turned his attention back to the screen, trying to focus. It lasted ten seconds. He looked to his left and studied Justin's face. He appeared to be entranced by the video in front of him. His eyes never left the screen, but his lips were curled in a bit of smirk.

Brian decided to take his chances and casually dropped his hand on Justin's thigh. He felt Justin glance at him but he kept his eyes straight ahead and tried to look as bored as possible. Satisfied, Justin turned his eyes back to the screen.

Brian waited a whole minute and a half before he started caressing Justin's thigh in a circular fashion. He knew he waited a whole minute and a half because he counted in his head. It was the only way to keep himself from falling asleep while pretended to watch this utter piece of shit. He only moved a millimeter or so closer to Justin's crotch every few circles.

He succeeded in getting a fraction of an inch from Justin's cock before he heard the admonishing, "Brian."

Fortunately, Justin's cock thought Brian was behaving in a completely appropriate manner and had begun to stir of it's own accord. Brian leaned close and whispered against Justin's ear, "Yes?" as his hand moved in for the kill.

"Anyone could come walking in here at any moment."

"Mmm," Brian acknowledged. He would have said more - because honestly he hadn't heard a single person even walk by in the last 5 minutes and he figured there were all of 15 people in the entire museum at the moment, including the guards, so the chances of someone coming in in the next five minutes, which was more time than he needed, was slim to none - but he was very busy biting Justin's earlobe and kissing his neck. He could feel the hardened length of Justin's dick through the thin material of his pants and he increased the pressure of his hand.

"Brian," Justin murmured again, but it sounded more like a plea for more than a reprimand this time. Brian deftly unsnapped all the buttons of his fly in one swift move and slid his hand inside Justin's underwear, encircling his cock with his hand.

Justin glanced warily over his shoulder at the door, before turning his attention back to the screen and relaxing into his seat. Brian leaned back as well, apparently engrossed in the film while continuing to fondle the now fully hard cock in his hand. His thumb grazed over head, catching the pre-come gathered at tip and Justin barely repressed his groan as Brian used it slick his shaft.

Justin started to thrust his hips ever so slightly into his tight fist. His quick shallow breaths and nearly silent moans were going straight to Brian's dick, and he brushed his hand over it as he continued stroking Justin's cock.

His hand moved faster and Justin's head fell back, his eyes closed, biting his lip. His hips pumping up into Brian's hand. Once. Twice. And then his jaw fell open, releasing a strangled cry as hot come soaked his black cotton briefs and the long fingers wrapped around his cock.

They both stayed still for a moment as Justin's breathing slowed and he softened in Brian's hand. Brian released him, bringing his fingers to his mouth and licking off the come that remained as Justin snapped his pants back up whilst mumbling something about having to go back to the hotel now before going to the Corcoran and possibly needing a shower. Brian just nodded and tried to look sympathetic.

It was hard though because his mind was already on the shower and ways to tie Justin to hotel bed. The Corcoran had been there 150 years, Brian was fairly sure it would still be there the next time they were in town.
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[User Picture]From: [info]notreallyme10
2009-02-16 08:26 pm (UTC)

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I feel like we were channeling each other on this one! LOL!

Very hot!

And then his jaw fell open, releasing a strangled cry as hot come soaked his black cotton briefs and the long fingers wrapped around his cock.

Mmmmm... I can see this and it is very nice!
[User Picture]From: [info]not_yet_defined
2009-02-17 04:18 pm (UTC)

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I haven't read your's yet, but now i'm excited to do so. :D thanks!
[User Picture]From: [info]rosy5000
2009-02-16 09:12 pm (UTC)

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Mmmmm! The museum could put Brian and Justin on display like this and it would definitely be considered art. ;)
[User Picture]From: [info]noteverything
2009-02-16 09:37 pm (UTC)

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hahaha! So true...
[User Picture]From: [info]not_yet_defined
2009-02-17 04:19 pm (UTC)

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lol. they totally are.
[User Picture]From: [info]pendulumchanges
2009-02-16 09:29 pm (UTC)

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omg omg ny! I just saw the title in the masterlist of fics and clicked on it first and omg it's dedicated to me!!!

now I have to actually go read it :P

*squeeee!!!!!*
[User Picture]From: [info]pendulumchanges
2009-02-16 09:34 pm (UTC)

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hehehe I'm back and this is HOT! Justin will be sad when he discovers that the Corcoran is closed so they can fix the roof, but I don't think Brian will mind. Actually, Justin probably won't be that upset about it in the end either :D
[User Picture]From: [info]not_yet_defined
2009-02-17 10:01 pm (UTC)

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i wrote it in the future, when the roof is fixed, lol.

i'm glad you found it HOT. :D
[User Picture]From: [info]not_yet_defined
2009-02-17 04:20 pm (UTC)

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of course it's dedicated to you! i couldn't think of anything to write about or where to put them and then i was like AHA! the museum series i never continued. Now I have 2 in it, I shall have to write more of them.
[User Picture]From: [info]noteverything
2009-02-16 09:31 pm (UTC)

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*dies*

You better be planning to write the shower and the ways to tie Justin to the hotel bed. Because I'm all...ummm, hot and bothered now and YOU HAVE TO!!

Justin glanced warily over his shoulder at the door, before turning his attention back to the screen and relaxing into his seat. Brian leaned back as well, apparently engrossed in the film while continuing to fondle the now fully hard cock in his hand. His thumb grazed over head, catching the pre-come gathered at tip and Justin barely repressed his groan as Brian used it slick his shaft.

Oh, that's really, really pretty. :-P

I'm glad you decided on a little last-minute porn. I love it!
[User Picture]From: [info]not_yet_defined
2009-02-17 04:22 pm (UTC)

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You better be planning to write the shower and the ways to tie Justin to the hotel bed. sorry, i like to leave ya'll wanting more. hee.

i'm glad i wrote and glad you love it as well :D
[User Picture]From: [info]frantic_quest
2009-02-16 11:18 pm (UTC)

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Who says museums have to be stuffy & boring?

Hot, sweet & right to the point...just like Brian's hand job!
[User Picture]From: [info]not_yet_defined
2009-02-17 04:30 pm (UTC)

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people think museums are stuffy and boring? hmm. i've always found them sexy. :D
[User Picture]From: [info]fun_demented
2009-02-16 11:49 pm (UTC)

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Somehow you managed to make this very hot and adorable. I have no idea how you pulled this off, but you did. Very nice. And the setting is very clever and sexy.
[User Picture]From: [info]not_yet_defined
2009-02-17 06:37 pm (UTC)

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Thank you for your lovely comments :D
[User Picture]From: [info]michira_70
2009-02-17 01:00 am (UTC)

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WHEE, Brian knows how to create real art!!
[User Picture]From: [info]not_yet_defined
2009-02-17 06:37 pm (UTC)

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:D
[User Picture]From: [info]pye_wacket
2009-02-17 06:37 am (UTC)

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awhhhhh how I love sex in public places!!
[User Picture]From: [info]not_yet_defined
2009-02-17 06:37 pm (UTC)

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thanks :D
[User Picture]From: [info]besamislabios
2009-02-17 07:26 am (UTC)

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WOW...

And then his jaw fell open, releasing a strangled cry as hot come soaked his black cotton briefs and the long fingers wrapped around his cock.

this is one hot hand job, I loved this story, thank you for writing this, Ny.

The sequel at the hotel begs to be written. :P
[User Picture]From: [info]not_yet_defined
2009-02-17 06:38 pm (UTC)

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BESA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *licks and hugs* I've been too busy to welcome you back properly. My bad!

Thankyou for your lovely comments. :D
[User Picture]From: [info]besamislabios
2009-02-18 06:17 am (UTC)

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NY!!!!!! :D :D

*hugs back*
[User Picture]From: [info]bulagirl
2009-02-17 01:06 pm (UTC)

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This is super hot! Love it :)
[User Picture]From: [info]not_yet_defined
2009-02-17 06:39 pm (UTC)

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Thank you :D
[User Picture]From: [info]nerilka24
2009-02-17 02:07 pm (UTC)

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Brian just nodded and tried to look sympathetic.

It was hard though because his mind was already on the shower and ways to tie Justin to hotel bed.


LOL Brian can be very focussed when he wants! And the rest of us could do with the shower now!!!
[User Picture]From: [info]not_yet_defined
2009-02-17 06:39 pm (UTC)

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:D thanks!
[User Picture]From: [info]qafmaniac
2009-02-17 02:13 pm (UTC)

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Brian surely knows how to turn boring art into one hell of a hj! ;)

Who cares about grammar when it's all about the porn and when you can read something as hot as this?

And now I want to read all about the shower and the tied-up-to-the-hotel bed!Justin.
[User Picture]From: [info]not_yet_defined
2009-02-17 06:40 pm (UTC)

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Thank you dear! :D
[User Picture]From: [info]outlander
2009-02-17 03:01 pm (UTC)

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Fortunately, Justin's cock thought Brian was behaving in a completely appropriate manner and had begun to stir of it's own accord.
rotf.

His hand moved faster and Justin's head fell back, his eyes closed, biting his lip. His hips pumping up into Brian's hand. Once. Twice. And then his jaw fell open, releasing a strangled cry as hot come soaked his black cotton briefs and the long fingers wrapped around his cock.
This made me clench in such a good way.

This was hot, funny and really makes me want to go to a museum. ;)
[User Picture]From: [info]not_yet_defined
2009-02-17 06:41 pm (UTC)

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You never know what you might see at a museum. I heard B&J have plans to visit the MAM in the nearish future, in fact. :D
[User Picture]From: [info]secretsolitaire
2009-02-17 08:31 pm (UTC)

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Nnnnngh, yes...I like those last few lines!
[User Picture]From: [info]not_yet_defined
2009-02-17 10:02 pm (UTC)

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why thank you :D
[User Picture]From: [info]sjmpets
2009-02-17 09:05 pm (UTC)

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hot and oh so nasty. yum!
[User Picture]From: [info]not_yet_defined
2009-02-17 10:02 pm (UTC)

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thanks :D
[User Picture]From: [info]testdog65
2009-02-17 09:18 pm (UTC)

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Oh, yum. Love the setting for this one. And Justin had to know that a bored Brian is going to find a way to entertain himself. LOL This was wonderfully hot and lots of fun to read!

~Ellen
[User Picture]From: [info]not_yet_defined
2009-02-17 10:02 pm (UTC)

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i'm glad you liked it, Ellen. thank you :D
[User Picture]From: [info]kari77
2009-02-18 05:29 pm (UTC)

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Guhhh! This was hot and funny. Perfect.

He succeeded in getting a fraction of an inch from Justin's cock before he heard the admonishing, "Brian."

Fortunately, Justin's cock thought Brian was behaving in a completely appropriate manner and had begun to stir of it's own accord. Brian leaned close and whispered against Justin's ear, "Yes?" as his hand moved in for the kill.

*gg*
Ah, and the tension and the excitement of the possibility of getting caught! I was holding my breath alongside Justin.

Brian just nodded and tried to look sympathetic.
I bet he did. lol

It was hard though because his mind was already on the shower and ways to tie Justin to hotel bed. The Corcoran had been there 150 years, Brian was fairly sure it would still be there the next time they were in town.
Sequel! Sequel! ;-)

Great story! Thank you.
[User Picture]From: [info]not_yet_defined
2009-02-18 09:27 pm (UTC)

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Thank you for this terrific feedback :D I'm very glad you enjoyed it.
[User Picture]From: [info]opal11
2009-02-19 09:36 pm (UTC)

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hot! hot! hot! this is so brian/justin..
[User Picture]From: [info]not_yet_defined
2009-02-20 06:39 pm (UTC)

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Thank you Opal :D
[User Picture]From: [info]happier_bunny
2009-02-21 09:31 am (UTC)

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sdfja;lsfd

Oh gosh, bored and playful Brian is a thing of beauty. And may I just add that this was hot hot hot. Justin fucking Brian's hand. *flails* & this: Brian released him, bringing his fingers to his mouth and licking off the come made me a little weak.

Excellent excellent porny delight!
[User Picture]From: [info]not_yet_defined
2009-02-24 08:20 pm (UTC)

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thank you my bunny! *licks*
[User Picture]From: [info]tootiredtosleep
2009-02-21 05:07 pm (UTC)

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Leave it to Brian to amuse himself when bored! Wonderful and hot! Thanks so much. Just what I needed!
[User Picture]From: [info]tootiredtosleep
2009-02-21 05:08 pm (UTC)

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Oh my God. My icon is so inappropriate! Me bad. Mouse slipped.
[User Picture]From: [info]not_yet_defined
2009-02-24 08:21 pm (UTC)

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rofl...well your first icon may have been inappropriate, but it did make me laugh, so that's ok.

thankyou for the lovely comments. :D
[User Picture]From: [info]flamencanyc
2009-05-15 12:21 am (UTC)

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I like the way Brian thinks! ;)

And the Hirschhorn is one of my favorites.