Uhh, so this made me squee, drool, melt, and everything else positive and life-affirming Brian and Justin are capable of doing.
I liked the surprise of finding out Justin was across the globe, and just the ease they had between each other. I was totally in the scene and could see this exact thing happening. Damn, I wish I COULD see it. Can you work on that? K, thanks.
Until then, keep writing stuff like this. :)
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