24 September 2008 @ 07:17 pm
Choose Your Own Adventure - 6 of 7  
Title: Goodnight, Twat
Author: [info]not_yet_defined
Prompts: I cheated a bit and used them all - Noon & Midnight, Office & Studio, Finger Fucking & Snowballing. Good thing I'm the mod. :P
A/N: A very quick and dirty beta and ego-boosting by [info]tweedygal *Squishes*. She can not be held responsible for my bad grammar, or general cheesiness, or inability to format properly when using a Mac. :D



Justin dropped down to the floor and leaned back on his hands staring up at the panel. His eyes slowly scanned the surface, silently critiquing every inch. Finally he allowed his focus to widen, taking in the piece as a whole. Satisfied, he lay back. He ought to get up and clean his brushes. Or at least get off the floor and make his way to the bed, or the couch, or the shower. But the floor was nice too. He tilted his head to the left, glancing at the clock. It was noon in the Pitts.

He closed his eyes and pictured Brian at that moment. Sitting at his desk. Dressed immaculately in a charcoal grey suit, a white, no, a light blue shirt, and that tie Justin liked, with the tiny geometric pattern in blues, lavenders, and the slightest traces of orange. His hand moved to his paint-stained jeans, pulling open the fly, sliding inside his underwear, and grasping his semi-erect cock.

He could see him sitting at his desk, leaning back in his chair one moment, talking to whoever, sitting forward the next, nimbly moving his long fingers over his keyboard. Justin pulled harder on his dick, running his thumb over the tip, collecting the pre-come that had gathered there and spreading it over the head. Brian was hot when he was multi-tasking in full business mode.

The last time Justin had stopped by Kinnetik, Brian had been holding his phone with one hand, manipulating the mouse with his other and mouthing that sadly he was going to have skip lunch. Justin had locked the door behind him, dropped his bag and his coat on the floor, and dropped to his knees in front of Brian. He wasn't even sure if Brian had hit mute before gasping quietly as he came in Justin's mouth.

Justin moaned at the memory and sped up his movements just as his phone started to vibrate on the table near his head. He reached up and grabbed it, his other hand still idly stroking his erection, grinning at the caller display.

"You have fucking unbelievable timing. What are you wearing?"

Brian laughed, "My black Dolce and Gabbana, a white D&G shirt, the Charvet tie that you like and black loafers. I'd tell you which ones but I know you have no appreciation for these things."

"Are you really wearing that tie?"

He laughed again, "No. But I know it makes you hot."

"Damn."

"What are you wearing?"

"Um, hang on a second," Justin pushed himself up off the floor, stripping as he walked the 15 feet it required him to reach his bed. "Nothing."

"Mmm, my favorite look on you. Are you jerking off?"

Yes. When you called I was thinking about the last time I visited you at work."

"That was hot. You came in your pants like a teenager."

Justin huffed, "Fuck you, that's because you had your hand stuck down them," his cock jerked at the memory and pre-come bubbled out of the slit.

Brian continued, ignoring Justin, his own hand rubbing the growing hard-on beneath his wool slacks, "You were being a very bad boy. I was discussing a multi-million dollar account, and you were straddling my lap, and being generally distracting. It was the only way I could think of getting you to stop."

Justin groaned, his balls tightening as he remembered Brian grabbing his arm and pulling him up off the floor and on to his lap. Brian's tongue hungrily invading his mouth and licking his own come off his tongue. He could hear Brian breathing harder on the other end of the line.

"I want to come."

"Are you wet?"

"God yes. Christ, I'm gonna come, Brian," He moaned, he could hear faintly hear the sounds of Brian stroking himself, it was driving him nuts.

"Not...yet," Justin groaned but backed himself slightly back from the edge. "Tell me what I was doing when you came in your pants."

"Licking your come off my tongue and fucking me," Justin ground out absently moving his hand off of his cock and circling his hole with his finger. It was slick with the fluid leaking from his cock, and he pushed the tip in, moaning from the sensation.

"Fucking you...how?" Brian's voice was low and husky and Justin could tell he was getting close.

"You were playing with my ass, pushing against my hole with two fingers until you worked the tips of both of them inside...Brian, please."

He moaned so softly Justin almost couldn't hear it, and barely heard him when asked "Is that how you are fucking yourself now?"

"Yes," Justin bit out, his voice taking on a desperate edge, as he shallowly thrust in and out of his hole with two fingers.

Justin could hear Brian grunt softly as he came and he dropped the phone on the bed and grabbed his aching cock, barely touching himself before spurts of hot come hit his chest.

He gave himself a moment to catch his breath before picking the phone back up. He could hear Brian breath slowly evening out on the other end.

"Hey," Justin said somewhat lamely, but really, how was he supposed to be coherent after that?

He could practically hear Brian grinning through the phone, "I told you on Tuesday that you weren't allowed to call me in the middle of the night anymore unless it's the weekend. You seem to forget it's the middle of the day here and I'm very busy running my empire."

He laughed outright at that, "You called me."

"That's a fair point."

They both fell silent and Justin could feel his body relaxing into the mattress. Justin sighed, "No more commissions on the other side of the globe."

Brian, naturally, did not respond to that statement. "I have to go, I have a meeting in ten minutes."

"Ok, thanks for calling," Justin was apparently getting lamer by the minute, he blamed it on a combination of paint fumes, lack of sleep, and his post-orgasmic haze.

"Justin?"

"Yes?"

"Go to bed, I'll call you in the morning, when I'm comfortably in our bed and you are at your place of business."

"No fair. I can't lock people out and jerk off while I'm at work."

"Too bad for you."

Justin yawned, "I just won't answer my phone."

Brian snorted.

"Goodnight, Brian," Justin said, half-way to sleep, and forgetting it wasn't nighttime where Brian was.

"Goodnight, Twat."
 
 
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secretsolitaire: bj 311 floor sex[info]secretsolitaire on September 24th, 2008 09:43 pm (UTC)
Oh, that is just delicious. Especially this image:

"You were being a very bad boy. I was discussing a multi-million dollar account, and you were straddling my lap, and being generally distracting. It was the only way I could think of getting you to stop."

*purrs*
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Ny[info]not_yet_defined on September 25th, 2008 04:44 pm (UTC)
oh, why thank you. and you quoted me back my favorite part. *grin*
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notreallyme10[info]notreallyme10 on September 24th, 2008 10:41 pm (UTC)
Mmmm, yum! This was fun and hot. And I love the way you used noon and midnight :)
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Ny[info]not_yet_defined on September 25th, 2008 04:43 pm (UTC)
i'm glad you enjoyed it. i decided justin in hong kong was totally reasonable and it makes it a 12 hour difference, how convenient :D
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rosy5000: BJ kiss Leather coats[info]rosy5000 on September 24th, 2008 11:12 pm (UTC)
OOoo!! You're so sneaky fitting everything in there. But the story was so yummy so you're allowed. ;)
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Ny[info]not_yet_defined on September 25th, 2008 04:42 pm (UTC)
:D I'm glad you liked it. Thank you.
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[info]noteverything on September 24th, 2008 11:28 pm (UTC)
I still don't think it's cheating to use them all. I think it's clever and creative.

He could practically hear Brian grinning through the phone, "I told you on Tuesday that you weren't allowed to call me in the middle of the night anymore unless it's the weekend. You seem to forget it's the middle of the day here and I'm very busy running my empire."

He laughed outright at that, "You called me."

"That's a fair point."

They both fell silent and Justin could feel his body relaxing into the mattress. Justin sighed, "No more commissions on the other side of the globe."

I love, love, love the sweetness *AND* the surprise in this part. I really was surprised the first time.

"Fucking you...how?" Brian's voice was low and husky and Justin could tell he was getting close.

"You were playing with my ass, pushing against my hole with two fingers until you worked the tips of both of them inside...Brian, please."

He moaned so softly Justin almost couldn't hear it, and barely heard him when asked "Is that how you are fucking yourself now?"

"Yes," Justin bit out, his voice taking on a desperate edge, as he shallowly thrust in and out of his hole with two fingers.

Justin could hear Brian grunt softly as he came and he dropped the phone on the bed and grabbed his aching cock, barely touching himself before spurts of hot come hit his chest.

And the hotness factor of that bit is fantabulous. *fans self*
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Ny[info]not_yet_defined on September 25th, 2008 04:41 pm (UTC)
i wasn't planning on it being a surprise, i was going to make the title something to clue you in, but then you mentioned liking the surprise the first time you read it, so i left it. :D ahh the benefits of having a second head read your fics.

thank you for the lovely quotey feedback, darling. *licks*
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qafcracked[info]qafcracked on September 25th, 2008 12:34 am (UTC)
You have no idea what kinds of happiness this made me. I could see everything, and the snark and the banter between the two of them just made me so full of glee. And of course, it was totally hot.
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Ny[info]not_yet_defined on September 25th, 2008 04:38 pm (UTC)
ahh, your comment makes me happy, so we are even. :D thanks dear!
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[info]quirks4me on September 25th, 2008 03:18 am (UTC)
Uhh, so this made me squee, drool, melt, and everything else positive and life-affirming Brian and Justin are capable of doing.

I liked the surprise of finding out Justin was across the globe, and just the ease they had between each other. I was totally in the scene and could see this exact thing happening. Damn, I wish I COULD see it. Can you work on that? K, thanks.

Until then, keep writing stuff like this. :)
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Ny[info]not_yet_defined on September 25th, 2008 04:38 pm (UTC)
i wish i could make it become 3D so we could all watch....but no can do.

I'm glad you enjoyed it though.
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[info]besamislabios on September 25th, 2008 11:58 am (UTC)
This was some very hot phone sex, loved everything about this story. *happy sigh*

and very clever use of all the prompts. :)
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Ny[info]not_yet_defined on September 25th, 2008 04:37 pm (UTC)
thank you besa *licks*
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xie_xie_xie[info]xie_xie_xie on September 25th, 2008 02:40 pm (UTC)
I don't normally like phone sex but this was SO WARM and engaging and sexy! Thank you!
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Ny[info]not_yet_defined on September 25th, 2008 04:36 pm (UTC)
i have no idea why i wrote phone sex, it wasn't the plan at all, it just happened...i promise no more future phone sex stories. But i'm glad it was enjoyable in spite of the genre.
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[info]jule1122 on September 26th, 2008 03:34 pm (UTC)
I love how you worked all the prompts in without is seeming forced. What a memory, and the present was pretty hot too!
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Ny[info]not_yet_defined on September 27th, 2008 06:55 pm (UTC)
it wasn't my intention to write this using all 6, it just sort of happened that 5 were used, and so i thought, what the hell and had to very slightly force myself to work in #6, so i'm glad it came off ok. thank you :D
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happier_bunny: b/j 502 anmtd 2[info]happier_bunny on September 26th, 2008 09:19 pm (UTC)
~fans self~

HOT...HOT...HOT. It's so sexy when they need each other across space and time...and then the reaching out is hot. ;)
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Ny[info]not_yet_defined on September 27th, 2008 06:56 pm (UTC)
thank you darling bunny. :D
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1bongo1[info]1bongo1 on September 27th, 2008 02:07 am (UTC)
I could picture this happening. What I wouldn't pay to actually SEE it happening!

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Ny[info]not_yet_defined on September 27th, 2008 06:56 pm (UTC)
i think we'd all pay to see many of these stories happening. :(

but i'm glad you liked it :D
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testdog65: Justin phone 109[info]testdog65 on September 27th, 2008 03:34 pm (UTC)
Where do I even start? Loved the dialogue - quick, fun and sexy. And the hotness - mmmm. I feel all tingly, now. :D

I really liked the way you wove their memories into the current moment and how the combination of the two got them both off. Deliciously done!

~Ellen
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Ny[info]not_yet_defined on September 27th, 2008 07:01 pm (UTC)
i'm pleased i gave you a tingle :D. thank you for your comments, ellen.
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outlander: *comes* toes[info]outlander on September 29th, 2008 10:27 am (UTC)
I cheated a bit and used them all - and what a brilliant multitasker you are...in so many ways...

He moaned so softly Justin almost couldn't hear it, and barely heard him when asked "Is that how you are fucking yourself now?"
OK, yeah that is fricken hot.

"I told you on Tuesday that you weren't allowed to call me in the middle of the night anymore unless it's the weekend. You seem to forget it's the middle of the day here and I'm very busy running my empire."
ROTF

Justin sighed, "No more commissions on the other side of the globe."
Wibbly sigh of LOVE.

This was incredibly hot yet you also cracked me up and made me melt from the love. I love it when a fic can do all of that. Thank you!
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sanami276: Queer as Folk / Brian says less talking[info]ohfreckle on October 6th, 2008 02:43 pm (UTC)
Phone sex and snark and goddamn tie kink... I hope you don't expect coherent feedback after that. 'cause it's not gonna happen.

*wibbles happily*

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Ny[info]not_yet_defined on October 6th, 2008 02:47 pm (UTC)
no other feedback needed, the one you left made me happy enough :D

you have tie kink? interesting.

so do i...it's the only part about being a lesbian that makes me sad, not enough ties involved.
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sanami276[info]ohfreckle on October 7th, 2008 03:04 pm (UTC)
Let's wallow in our tie kink together!

But... a lot of women wear ties, or at least I do :D
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lougenessis[info]lougenessis on October 25th, 2008 11:12 pm (UTC)
Absolutely superb! So Brian, so Justin, do hot! Loved it
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Ny[info]not_yet_defined on October 25th, 2008 11:13 pm (UTC)
wow, thank you :D
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lougenessis[info]lougenessis on October 25th, 2008 11:13 pm (UTC)
oops "so" hot
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