I think "guh" sums it up nicely. Usually I see the reverse situation in fic, Justin trying to distract Brian, but this definitely works. *nod nod*

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I was so unsure that Brian jacking off to get Justin's attention that I asked several people about it before I even started writing. The consensus was "write it," so I did. I'm glad it worked!!! Thank you.

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OH.... I like this image very much! Very hot!

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I like it too...which is what prompted me to want to write about it. Thanks for reading!

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Brian fingering himself to get Jusitn's attention... just GUHHHHH!!!!! *melts*

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I know, right? *gah* It melts me too!!

Thanks for reading and commenting!

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LOVE that Brian wanted to get his attention. Such an attention whore haha.

Very hot.

(Oh and love that you used the name Liesel--it's my name. Spelled differently but same name. :D )

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How cool that your name is Liesel! (I love names that are unusual in the US...my daughter's middle name is Aisling. Popular in Ireland, not so much here!)

And I thought Brian trying to get Justin's attention with sex might be hot, so I'm glad it worked for you!

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I love unusual names as well, so am very glad my family chose to give me one. Oooh, I like Aisling.

Anything the two of them do is hot, hehe. But yes, Brian getting Justin's attention by touching himself? Uber-hot.

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Jeez.

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Okay, I think you have seriously scrambled my brain, because now I am slightly incoherent. This might have done it:

After a few moments, he added a third finger, pushing in even harder, spreading his legs to get better access. He heard movement and willed himself to open his eyes. Justin was in front of him, his eyes glazed with lust. He had his pants pushed just below his ass and was stroking his own cock.

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Yikes! Sometimes when I re-read stuff that I've written, especially the smutty stuff, I freak out a little...did I really write that?!?! Does that even make sense?

Anyway, thank you for commenting and sorry about the scrambled brain.

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LOL. This is my favorite comment so far. :D

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GUH!!

You killed me.

I'm dead.

*ded*

*melts into wet puddle*

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Awwww. I never, never wanna kill Pixie!

But hopefully you died happy. Thanks for reading and commenting.

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Omg, you wrote it! YAY!! &hearts

And it is amazingly hot, perfect, I'm speechless...wow.

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I know, can you believe it? I can't believe I did...

And I'm *thrilled* that you like it. *huge hugs*

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you already know i enjoyed this one very very much, but i'll tell you so again.

After a few moments, he added a third finger, pushing in even harder, spreading his legs to get better access. He heard movement and willed himself to open his eyes. Justin was in front of him, his eyes glazed with lust. He had his pants pushed just below his ass and was stroking his own cock.

"Don't stop," he said, his voice heavy and hoarse

thank you for this tweedy. thank you very much. guh.

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:-P

Oh, it was my pleasure. Once that little idea wormed its' way into my head, I really needed to write about it.

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That was so so hot and classic Brian wanting Justin's undivided attention.

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Thank you so much!

The idea had been in my head all week and even after I wrote the other story, I still felt this "urge" to write this one, so I just went for it. I'm glad people liked it!

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mmmmmmmmmmmmmm

this one makes me all kinds of happy

GUH
GUH
GUH

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&hearts
&hearts
&hearts

One for each "GUH."

Thank you too for that encouragement. It wouldn't have seen the light of day without you and NY boosting my confidence.

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Flat-out HOT! I want to play in YOUR brain for awhile.

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Thank you very much! And come on in, actually my brain is sort of empty. plenty of room to play. ;-)

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Your brain is full of pretty, pretty (ok HOT) B/J.

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Hehehe...we'll get along just fine, I can tell!

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Well, that certainly got Justin's attention - and mine, too! What an image - Brian with three fingers in his ass. Justin standing over him and jerking his own cock. Geez, I may spontaneously combust here.

And I loved Brian's thoughts in the beginning. You wrote bored, horny, attention-seeking Brian so very well!

~Ellen

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Geez, I may spontaneously combust here.

Perfect comment...thank you!

And I'm glad you liked Brian in the beginning too...

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After a few moments, he added a third finger, pushing in even harder, spreading his legs to get better access. He heard movement and willed himself to open his eyes. Justin was in front of him, his eyes glazed with lust. He had his pants pushed just below his ass and was stroking his own cock.

"Don't stop," he said, his voice heavy and hoarse. "I want to see you come for me, Brian."
Oh My Fricken God, Tweeds killed us with the Porn.
That visual is going to be happily lodged in my brain for quite some time. I cannot thank you enough for that.

Loved the whole typical fic role reversal. Hot. Hot. Hot.

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Since your comment on my other fic made my day, these comments are going to make my WEEK!

And you're welcome...nothing better than lodging porny thoughts in someone's brain! It's like we have the same brain now!!!

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GUH!!!!!!!!! OMG, Brian you attention whore. Not that I comoplain, no, I approve very much.

Loveloveloved this, perfect :D

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I like Brian this way myself.

Thank you so much for commenting. I am always thrilled when you like my stuff because you've made so many icons for me and I can never thank you enough...

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I often skip through the sex parts of stories (because, you know...they get samey after a while) BUT NOT THIS ONE!

VERY FUN VERY HOT VERY IC!

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I have to tell you it's so fun to get these random comments from you!

And I agree on the sex part of stories. There is often such a sameness about them. But, oddly enough, I sign up to write more porn challenges than ANYTHING else. I can't figure out why.

And thank you! I'm glad this one was a little different for you and that you found it IC. That's one of my favorite compliments. :D

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I am glad you are enjoying my comments, because I am GREATLY enjoying reading through your archives.

I sign up to write more porn challenges than ANYTHING else. I can't figure out why.

Perhaps, it's the fact that Brian and Justin ARE porn? And on the show it is NEVER boring? And the sex they have can SPEAK about them?

Anything can be enjoyable when done creatively. For example, dirtylttlescret, as I imagine you know, posted a "Raw" drabble, which is a theme I would normally wince at, but the way she did it-- she pulled it off so that it remained IC. Likewise, anything can be boring...even sex. ;)

And you probably know all this, which is why you sign up for the porn challenges THANK GOODNESS! :D

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