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Ny (not_yet_defined) wrote in bj_action,
@ 2008-09-24 19:17:00

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author: tweedygal, theme #10

Choose Your Own Adventure - 5 of 7
TITLE: Center of Attention
AUTHOR: tweedygal
WARNINGS: It's porn, be warned.
A/N: At noon at Justin's newest NY studio. There's some finger-fucking. No beta, which will become obvious quickly!

Brian paced around Justin's new studio, peering into corners and picking up objects randomly, not really looking at them. At least this place was cleaner than the last one, he thought. And there were a few more amenities, if you wanted to call a futon in the corner and a decent skylight amenities.

He was bored. Extremely bored. It was bad enough Justin had been on the phone for ages with someone named Chuck who apparently had an inside track with a gallery manager. The way Justin giggled -- yes, giggled -- every ten minutes made Brian wonder if Chuck had more on his mind than helping Justin meet a new contact.

When Justin hung up, Brian said, "Now can we go? This place is depressing."

"Huh?" Justin looked up from the notes he was taking and frowned at Brian. "I told you I'd be here a while. Go back to the hotel. I'll call when I'm done."

"I came to NY to see you. Not the inside of a hotel room. At least not unless I'm fucking you into the mattress." Brian was practically pouting.

"Hmm...." Justin said, not really listening. "Hold on," he picked up his phone and punched a number. "Liesel? This is Justin...do you have a minute?" He kept talking and Brian went back to pacing. Finally, he slumped onto the futon and stared at Justin, who was gesturing and sketching and laughing as he talked to Leslie or Lila or whoever the hell she was.

Watching him work was kind of hot, Brian thought and he reached down to touch himself, slowly stroking through his jeans. After a while, he undid his belt, reaching inside and continuing to stroke, almost absently. His eyes never left Justin, who hadn't looked his way for several minutes.

Suddenly, nothing was more important to Brian than getting Justin's attention. He stood up and got rid of his jeans and underwear and spread himself wantonly across the futon, legs spread in Justin's general direction. Without as much as a glance his way, Justin turned and started scribbling notes again. He ended his conversation and kept writing and sketching, engrossed in his work.

Brian reached for his cock, stroking long and slow, stopping at the end of each stroke to squeeze the head before moving back down again. He felt himself hardening every time, and his eyes fluttered as he felt the heat start to build. He moved his other hand to his balls, tugging at them as he continued to jack off. Clear pre-cum pooled at the head of his dick and he rubbed it down the shaft, adding to the friction of his hand.

He stopped for a moment and pulled a small tube of lube from his discarded jeans and slicked the fingers on both hands. As he continued to pull at his dick with one hand, he moved the other down to his ass, thrusting two fingers at once into his hole. He let out a low groan, and closed his eyes, pushing into himself hard and pulling back out quickly. After a few moments, he added a third finger, pushing in even harder, spreading his legs to get better access. He heard movement and willed himself to open his eyes. Justin was in front of him, his eyes glazed with lust. He had his pants pushed just below his ass and was stroking his own cock.

"Don't stop," he said, his voice heavy and hoarse. "I want to see you come for me, Brian."

Brian smiled just a little and continued to fuck himself with three fingers, thrusting in and out as hard and fast as he could, feeling the heat building in his spine and moving to his balls. His ass contracted around his fingers and he moaned low and deep. So close. His eyes closed as he felt his orgasm building.

"Look at me." Justin's voice was distant. Brian opened his eyes.

"Come for me, Brian," Justin repeated. Brian let go, his head thrown back, grunting and pulsing and coming in long ropes of white cum. As he came down, still slowing fisting his cock, Justin dropped to his knees in front of him and kissed the head, licking and sucking at the sticky mess. Brian watched, his dick twitching at the feel of Justin's tongue.

After several minutes, Justin sat back up and climbed onto Brian's lap.

"That was hot," he said. "But if you wanted my attention, why didn't you just say so?"

Brian rolled his eyes. "I'll try that next time," he laughed.

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	secretsolitaire 2008-09-24 10:38 pm UTC (link)
	I think "guh" sums it up nicely. Usually I see the reverse situation in fic, Justin trying to distract Brian, but this definitely works. nod nod (Reply to this) (Thread)

	noteverything 2008-09-25 04:01 pm UTC (link)
	I was so unsure that Brian jacking off to get Justin's attention that I asked several people about it before I even started writing. The consensus was "write it," so I did. I'm glad it worked!!! Thank you. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	notreallyme10 2008-09-24 10:44 pm UTC (link)
	OH.... I like this image very much! Very hot! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	noteverything 2008-09-25 04:01 pm UTC (link)
	I like it too...which is what prompted me to want to write about it. Thanks for reading! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	rosy5000 2008-09-24 11:02 pm UTC (link)
	Brian fingering himself to get Jusitn's attention... just GUHHHHH!!!!! melts (Reply to this) (Thread)

	noteverything 2008-09-25 04:02 pm UTC (link)
	I know, right? gah It melts me too!! Thanks for reading and commenting! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	quirks4me 2008-09-24 11:05 pm UTC (link)
	LOVE that Brian wanted to get his attention. Such an attention whore haha. Very hot. (Oh and love that you used the name Liesel--it's my name. Spelled differently but same name. :D ) (Reply to this) (Thread)

	noteverything 2008-09-25 04:05 pm UTC (link)
	How cool that your name is Liesel! (I love names that are unusual in the US...my daughter's middle name is Aisling. Popular in Ireland, not so much here!) And I thought Brian trying to get Justin's attention with sex might be hot, so I'm glad it worked for you! (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	quirks4me 2008-09-25 04:18 pm UTC (link)
	I love unusual names as well, so am very glad my family chose to give me one. Oooh, I like Aisling. Anything the two of them do is hot, hehe. But yes, Brian getting Justin's attention by touching himself? Uber-hot. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	dirtylttlescret 2008-09-25 12:21 am UTC (link)
	Jeez. (Reply to this) (Thread)

dirtylttlescret
2008-09-25 12:22 am UTC (link)

Okay, I think you have seriously scrambled my brain, because now I am slightly incoherent. This might have done it:

After a few moments, he added a third finger, pushing in even harder, spreading his legs to get better access. He heard movement and willed himself to open his eyes. Justin was in front of him, his eyes glazed with lust. He had his pants pushed just below his ass and was stroking his own cock.

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	noteverything 2008-09-25 04:07 pm UTC (link)
	Yikes! Sometimes when I re-read stuff that I've written, especially the smutty stuff, I freak out a little...did I really write that?!?! Does that even make sense? Anyway, thank you for commenting and sorry about the scrambled brain. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	noteverything 2008-09-25 04:05 pm UTC (link)
	LOL. This is my favorite comment so far. :D (Reply to this) (Parent)

	zaipixie 2008-09-25 03:13 am UTC (link)
	GUH!! You killed me. I'm dead. ded melts into wet puddle (Reply to this) (Thread)

	noteverything 2008-09-25 04:08 pm UTC (link)
	Awwww. I never, never wanna kill Pixie! But hopefully you died happy. Thanks for reading and commenting. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	besamislabios 2008-09-25 11:32 am UTC (link)
	Omg, you wrote it! YAY!! &hearts And it is amazingly hot, perfect, I'm speechless...wow. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	noteverything 2008-09-25 04:09 pm UTC (link)
	I know, can you believe it? I can't believe I did... And I'm thrilled that you like it. huge hugs (Reply to this) (Parent)

not_yet_defined
2008-09-25 07:38 pm UTC (link)

you already know i enjoyed this one very very much, but i'll tell you so again.

After a few moments, he added a third finger, pushing in even harder, spreading his legs to get better access. He heard movement and willed himself to open his eyes. Justin was in front of him, his eyes glazed with lust. He had his pants pushed just below his ass and was stroking his own cock.

"Don't stop," he said, his voice heavy and hoarse

thank you for this tweedy. thank you very much. guh.

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	noteverything 2008-09-26 04:30 pm UTC (link)
	:-P Oh, it was my pleasure. Once that little idea wormed its' way into my head, I really needed to write about it. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	jule1122 2008-09-26 03:37 pm UTC (link)
	That was so so hot and classic Brian wanting Justin's undivided attention. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	noteverything 2008-09-26 04:32 pm UTC (link)
	Thank you so much! The idea had been in my head all week and even after I wrote the other story, I still felt this "urge" to write this one, so I just went for it. I'm glad people liked it! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	happier_bunny 2008-09-26 03:40 pm UTC (link)
	mmmmmmmmmmmmmm this one makes me all kinds of happy GUH GUH GUH (Reply to this) (Thread)

	noteverything 2008-09-26 04:34 pm UTC (link)
	&hearts &hearts &hearts One for each "GUH." Thank you too for that encouragement. It wouldn't have seen the light of day without you and NY boosting my confidence. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	1bongo1 2008-09-27 02:04 am UTC (link)
	Flat-out HOT! I want to play in YOUR brain for awhile. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	noteverything 2008-09-27 10:08 am UTC (link)
	Thank you very much! And come on in, actually my brain is sort of empty. plenty of room to play. ;-) (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	1bongo1 2008-09-27 05:27 pm UTC (link)
	Your brain is full of pretty, pretty (ok HOT) B/J. (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	noteverything 2008-09-28 01:11 pm UTC (link)
	Hehehe...we'll get along just fine, I can tell! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	testdog65 2008-09-27 03:44 pm UTC (link)
	Well, that certainly got Justin's attention - and mine, too! What an image - Brian with three fingers in his ass. Justin standing over him and jerking his own cock. Geez, I may spontaneously combust here. And I loved Brian's thoughts in the beginning. You wrote bored, horny, attention-seeking Brian so very well! ~Ellen (Reply to this) (Thread)

	noteverything 2008-09-29 05:08 pm UTC (link)
	Geez, I may spontaneously combust here. Perfect comment...thank you! And I'm glad you liked Brian in the beginning too... (Reply to this) (Parent)

outlander
2008-09-29 10:17 am UTC (link)

After a few moments, he added a third finger, pushing in even harder, spreading his legs to get better access. He heard movement and willed himself to open his eyes. Justin was in front of him, his eyes glazed with lust. He had his pants pushed just below his ass and was stroking his own cock.

"Don't stop," he said, his voice heavy and hoarse. "I want to see you come for me, Brian."
Oh My Fricken God, Tweeds killed us with the Porn.
That visual is going to be happily lodged in my brain for quite some time. I cannot thank you enough for that.

Loved the whole typical fic role reversal. Hot. Hot. Hot.

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	noteverything 2008-09-29 05:06 pm UTC (link)
	Since your comment on my other fic made my day, these comments are going to make my WEEK! And you're welcome...nothing better than lodging porny thoughts in someone's brain! It's like we have the same brain now!!! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	ohfreckle 2008-10-06 02:41 pm UTC (link)
	GUH!!!!!!!!! OMG, Brian you attention whore. Not that I comoplain, no, I approve very much. Loveloveloved this, perfect :D (Reply to this) (Thread)

	noteverything 2008-10-11 10:58 am UTC (link)
	I like Brian this way myself. Thank you so much for commenting. I am always thrilled when you like my stuff because you've made so many icons for me and I can never thank you enough... (Reply to this) (Parent)

	fun_demented 2008-12-16 03:23 pm UTC (link)
	I often skip through the sex parts of stories (because, you know...they get samey after a while) BUT NOT THIS ONE! VERY FUN VERY HOT VERY IC! (Reply to this) (Thread)

noteverything
2008-12-18 03:39 pm UTC (link)

I have to tell you it's so fun to get these random comments from you!

And I agree on the sex part of stories. There is often such a sameness about them. But, oddly enough, I sign up to write more porn challenges than ANYTHING else. I can't figure out why.

And thank you! I'm glad this one was a little different for you and that you found it IC. That's one of my favorite compliments. :D

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fun_demented
2008-12-18 04:04 pm UTC (link)

I am glad you are enjoying my comments, because I am GREATLY enjoying reading through your archives.

I sign up to write more porn challenges than ANYTHING else. I can't figure out why.

Perhaps, it's the fact that Brian and Justin ARE porn? And on the show it is NEVER boring? And the sex they have can SPEAK about them?

Anything can be enjoyable when done creatively. For example,

dirtylttlescret, as I imagine you know, posted a "Raw" drabble, which is a theme I would normally wince at, but the way she did it-- she pulled it off so that it remained IC. Likewise, anything can be boring...even sex. ;)

And you probably know all this, which is why you sign up for the porn challenges THANK GOODNESS! :D

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