NotEverything ([info]noteverything) wrote in [info]bj_action on September 24th, 2008 at 10:55 pm
I love this title so much more than the ones we talked about!

And now, a few of my personal favorite lines.

Brian lowered his head and softened his voice. "I want you safe," he said simply.
Tears at my heart...

He sucked on two of his own fingers, keeping the palm of his other hand firmly in the dip of his back.

"Like this?" he asked as he shoved a finger up his hole.

Guhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!! 0498a%$#^P(&)(*&)HHH!!!!!!
Seriously, hot.

Definitely not the standard PWP, my dear. Tonight, just reading it, not thinking about mechanics, it was really stunning. Thanks so much for sharing it.

 
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