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lemondropseven (lemondropseven) wrote in severus_sighs,
@ 2009-10-02 17:26:00

Entry tags:

challenge, drabble, event: anniversary 2009, member: lemondropseven, rating: pg

Confession by lemondropseven
Title: Confession
Author: lemondropseven
Pairing: Severus/Harry
Rating: PG
Word Count: 100
Warning: none
Summary: Harry remembers the first time.
A/N: Thanks to WhiteCotton for the beta. The world of Harry Potter belongs to JKR. More’s the pity.

"What’s all this?"

"Nothing."

"Harry, I haven’t fallen for that innocent look in years. Try again."

"Really, Severus, it’s nothing."

"Candlelight, music, and you naked, are hardly what I would call nothing. I would think you’re seducing me if we hadn’t been married for—it’s not our anniversary?"

"Relax, it’s not that. Yes, you better sigh—you forget our anniversary and you’ll be sleeping on the couch!"

"Well, then—what?"

"I don’t want to tell you."

"Why not?"

"It’s…embarrassing."

"Harry, you can tell me anything."

"You…told me you loved me for the first time. One year ago today."

	atypicalsnowman 2009-10-02 11:53 pm UTC (link)
	Genius way of putting the sigh into a drabble with no narration. Really, LD7, that is just a wonderful idea. I think extra points are deserved. fist bump (Reply to this) (Thread)

	lemondropseven 2009-10-03 05:40 am UTC (link)
	Well, thank you. I couldn't think of any other way to do it with an all dialogue piece. I honestly wasn't sure it'd work, so I'm glad you like it. XD Extra points! Nifty! fist bump LD7 btw, I love it when people use my icons - I smile everytime. :) (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	atypicalsnowman 2009-10-03 06:07 am UTC (link)
	Your icon is my default! Love it! (Reply to this) (Parent)