13 December 2010 @ 12:00 am
hohoho fest gift | for [info]graspthethorn  
Title: Roses and Cinnamon
Author: [info]amberbluebell
Recipient: [info]graspthethorn
Character(s)/Pairing(s): Simone/Max
Summary: She closes her eyes as he snakes his arms around her waist. “Let me go,” she objects weakly, but tilts her head obligingly as he dips his down close.
Rating: PG
Warning(s): SIMONE/MAX
Word Count: 560
Author's Notes: Oh, god. Of all the possibilities, it just had to be von Altencest, didn’t it? *facepalm* ONLY FOR YOU, ROSE! <333

Smooches to S for beta-ing. Thank you!





Max snaps to attention when the front door opens. He straightens in his chair and glances at the long-discarded papers on the coffee table - so much for getting any work done tonight – and listens as his mother and Ant—Rafael, he reminds himself again, talk in the hallway. He can’t hear properly – their voices are low – but he feels a childish, burning resentment that they are speaking in Spanish. Simone always enjoys that, Max knows, and he seethes as he pictures Rafael leaning close to her, lips barely brushing her skin as he charms her with it.

He rubs his hand over his eyes, trying to banish the image from his mind, and is glad to hear them bid each other goodnight. One set of footsteps disappears up the stairs, and Max gulps the last of the cognac he’s been nursing all night, getting to his feet as Simone walks into the room. She stops abruptly, surprised to see him, but smiles warmly as she drapes her coat over the back of the sofa. “Maximilian! What are you still doing up?”

Max ignores her question. “You had a good night with Rafael, I take it.” He can’t keep the hint of displeasure out of his voice.

Simone doesn’t seem to notice, and she perches on the arm of the sofa, smiling even wider. She looks for all the world like a schoolgirl, and it makes Max’s insides twist. “Mother.” He interrupts before she can speak.

The smile drops from her face at the sharpness of his tone. She sighs, exasperated. “Oh, not this again, Maximilian! Herr Suarez and I are simply enjoying each other’s company. This jealousy of yours is ridiculous!”

Max softens his expression, and considers his words carefully as he approaches her. “I’m just worried, Mother. After the last few months, and Jenny… I don’t want to see you hurt is all.” He places his empty glass on the mantle, and takes her hands. “Let me take care of you, mama,” he pleads.

Simone strokes her thumb over his fingers and gives him a small, wistful smile. “I know what it is you want, Maximilian, and sometimes I even think, maybe…” She shakes her head, dismissing the notion, and pulls her hands free. “I’m tired,” she says softly, and stands to leave.

She only takes one step away before Max’s hand is on her shoulder, holding her in place. She closes her eyes as he snakes his arms around her waist. “Let me go,” she objects weakly, but tilts her head obligingly as he dips his down close. Her perfume smells like roses and cinnamon, and Max smiles against her neck as he breathes it in.

Simone gives him a moment to savour the embrace, then her hands are on his arms, firmly removing them, and he doesn’t object this time. She turns and gazes up into his face, searching his expression, then strokes her hand against his cheek. “Oh, Maximilian,” she murmurs, “my son. My darling.” The air is thick with things that neither of them will ever say aloud. She stretches up and kisses him softly on the corner of his mouth, then pulls back and walks away. She hesitates in the doorway, just long enough for Max to consider stopping her again and taking her back into his arms, but before he dares, she is gone.
 
 
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[info]graspthethorn on December 13th, 2010 05:23 pm (UTC)
Re: (WHY IS THIS SO LONG OMG I AM SO SORRY I JUST HAVE A LOT OF FEELINGS OKAY)
The smile drops from her face at the sharpness of his tone.
SHARP. AND POINTY.
LIKE HIS PENIS.
(IN MY HEAD THIS COUNTS AS FORESHADOWING AND THEREFORE IS OF NOTE, HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA)

Max softens his expression, and considers his words carefully as he approaches her.
Carefully approaching her like you do with a wild bird, see see, I'm not going mad, it all links together. SEE. Also lol, max's ~soft~ expression. I AM A SUCKER FOR VULNERABLE!BASTARDS AND THAT IS WHAT THIS IS, ISN'T IT. O GOD. I LOVE IT. I NEVER WANT IT TO END~

He places his empty glass on the mantle, and takes her hands. “Let me take care of you, mama,” he pleads.
Getting rid of his empty glass = yay, little continuity details! I LOVE YOU FOR REMEMBERING HE WAS STILL HOLDING HIS GLASS BECAUSE I HADN'T FORGOTTEN IT. ALL I COULD THINK OF WAS HIM SQUEEZING IT IN LIKE IDK JEALOUS!ANGER (JEALANGER? IDK) OR WHATEVER AND OMG I THOUGHT IT WAS GONNA SMASH FROM THE ~FORCE OF HIS LOVE~ HAHAHAHA IDK.
And unf, the taking of the hands. I love it. So so muh. LET ME TAKE CARE OF YOU, MAMA. MAMA. I LOVE IT WHEN HE CALLS HER MAMA. VULNERABILITY = SEXY. <333333333333 and the pleading. O god. He's pleading. Whilst holding her hands. Omg simone don't turn him down, he's so sincere~

Simone strokes her thumb over his fingers
AGSHFALHGDUSALDHSIALHSUIABCLHVFFG
OVARY EXPLOSION~

“I know what it is you want, Maximilian, and sometimes I even think, maybe…” She shakes her head, dismissing the notion, and pulls her hands free. “I’m tired,” she says softly, and stands to leave.
o, I don't even know what to say to this because omg. It's so, quiet and real and necessary because we all know it can't happen (shouldn't happen) because they wouldn't work together and he's her son but omg. I love the quietness, the stillness, the everythingness. Even tho it's painful~ omg :'CCCC

She only takes one step away before Max’s hand is on her shoulder, holding her in place.
...

OMG I AM SO SORRY BUT THIS SCENE IS ALL I CAN THINK OF idek

She closes her eyes as he snakes his arms around her waist.
SNAKING ARMS. OMG. LOVE IT. All slow and slithery and gentle and HOLDING HER TIGHTLY IN PLACE LIKE A BOA CONSTRICTOR READY TO CRUSH HER TO DEATH IF HE CHOOSES. Vulnerable but bastardy. Gentle but mean. Kind but omg it's fucking maximilian.
I LOVE THIS. I CAN'T SAY IT ENOUGH.

“Let me go,” she objects weakly, but tilts her head obligingly as he dips his down close. Her perfume smells like roses and cinnamon, and Max smiles against her neck as he breathes it in.
ERM. OMG. THIS IS SO IDK... VISCERAL (IS THAT THE WORD I MEAN? IDEK) OR SOMETHING. EARTHY. ANIMALISTIC. UNF. And omg lol roses and cinnamon I SEE WHAT YOU DID THERE. AND I LOVE YOU FOR IT. But yeh omg the breathing in of her ~scent~ and her only going "let me go" weakly, like she knows she SHOULD be protesting but she can't really be arsed and unf I love it. Just. This whole thing. I adore it. YOU'RE SO GOOD AT INTERACTION ON THIS REALLY MINUTE SCALE AND IT'S BRILLIANT. SO REALISTIC AND I LOVE IT.

She turns and gazes up into his face, searching his expression, then strokes her hand against his cheek.
No words. Just. Omg. THE STROKING. AND THE SEARCHING. AND DGHFJAHGFSAL I CAN'T EVEN SPEAK BECAUSE I LOVE IT SO.

“Oh, Maximilian,” she murmurs, “my son. My darling.” The air is thick with things that neither of them will ever say aloud.
Omg this. This is amazing and beautiful. And omg. MY SON, MY DARLING. And the air being thick is so true because omg I CAN'T BREATHE BECAUSE I'M WORRIED I'LL RUIN THE STILLNESS AND LAHDUISALFUSAL YES. neither of them will ever say aloud and o god, there's the heartbreaking bit because they won't say it because they're von altenburgs, and von altenburgs are above such things. Omg. :'CCCC
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[info]graspthethorn on December 13th, 2010 05:24 pm (UTC)
Re: (WHY IS THIS SO LONG OMG I AM SO SORRY I JUST HAVE A LOT OF FEELINGS OKAY)
She stretches up and kisses him softly on the corner of his mouth
Corner of the mouth kisses are so beautiful and underused and like, idk, understated because it could so easily be actual open mouth snoggage but it isn't. it's ~elegant~ and hesitant and I LOVE IT. I just want to wrap them in cotton wall and gently put them away. And the stretching. Omg the stretching. IDK WHY, BUT I LOVE THAT BIT. ALDFGAABHFSLGFH

She hesitates in the doorway, just long enough for Max to consider stopping her again and taking her back into his arms, but before he dares, she is gone.
This is such a beautiful heartrending ending. And omg, I kinda want to cry because o god, the hesitation, the heartache, the way he wants to go to her and she wants him SO OBVIOUSLY but neither of them are willing to actually go that far, to acknowledge what's between them and omg, tears down my face ;~;

SO YEHHHHH THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THIS IS PERFECT AND I WILL FOREVER ADORE IT/YOU <3333333333333333333333333333333
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