dirty gyppo ([info]graspthethorn) wrote in [info]no7_awz on December 13th, 2010 at 05:24 pm
Re: (WHY IS THIS SO LONG OMG I AM SO SORRY I JUST HAVE A LOT OF FEELINGS OKAY)
She stretches up and kisses him softly on the corner of his mouth
Corner of the mouth kisses are so beautiful and underused and like, idk, understated because it could so easily be actual open mouth snoggage but it isn't. it's ~elegant~ and hesitant and I LOVE IT. I just want to wrap them in cotton wall and gently put them away. And the stretching. Omg the stretching. IDK WHY, BUT I LOVE THAT BIT. ALDFGAABHFSLGFH

She hesitates in the doorway, just long enough for Max to consider stopping her again and taking her back into his arms, but before he dares, she is gone.
This is such a beautiful heartrending ending. And omg, I kinda want to cry because o god, the hesitation, the heartache, the way he wants to go to her and she wants him SO OBVIOUSLY but neither of them are willing to actually go that far, to acknowledge what's between them and omg, tears down my face ;~;

SO YEHHHHH THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THIS IS PERFECT AND I WILL FOREVER ADORE IT/YOU <3333333333333333333333333333333
 
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