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Krystle Harrison ([info]omggirlonthenet) wrote in [info]memebells,
@ 2012-01-13 20:23:00

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Entry tags:[rated] nc17, [rated] pg-13, [rated] r, [type] choices, [type] crack, [type] dark, [type] fluff, [type] memories, [type] serious, [warning] possible triggers

Good Ending/Bad Ending meme
Do you get a happily ever after? Or a 'Rocks fall, everyone dies'? Why not both?

* Post your characters and set up two scenes. One with an ideal setting (They got what they always wanted, hit it big, became rich and famous, etc.) and one with a bad twist of events (They're homeless, everyone hates them, maybe they're even dying!).
* Others respond to one of the two settings (Or both in different comments, if they want!)
* Respond.
* ???
* Profit!!!

Just remember: no ending is set in stone, good endings can turn sour, and bad endings can be made better. Just see where it takes you and enjoy the ride!



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Clopin Trouillefou ஐ Disney's Hunchback of Notre Dame ஐ OTA
[info]topsyturvygypsy
2012-01-15 01:20 am UTC (link)
Good Ending

He had never thought it was possible, but it had happened. Frollo was dead, the corruption in the justice system collapsed, and white Parisians were actually accepting the gypsies and even Quasimodo as humans, just as worthy of love and trust as everyone else. There was no need for a gypsy king anymore. Everyone was safe. He would remain king just because his people remained loyal to him, but he had a feeling that his title would die with him.

He was sitting on the roof of a bakery, letting the smell of bread and sugar waft past, and playing a happy tune on his fiddle while the children and some starry-eyed couples danced on the street, rejoicing at the beautiful day and Paris's prosperity.

Bad Ending

He had always known he would die, but he had never dared to think that...

All the gypsies. All of them. The Court of Miracles had been captured. It was a bloodbath. Clopin wasn't sure how many survived, if any. He just knew that was in the dungeon of the Palace of Justice, collapsed on the damp floor of his cell after yet another brutal lashing. Ridges as big as his little finger were raised on his back and blood kept his skin wet and sticky. His ribs jutted out under his skin and his battered body cried out for some kind of sustenance, but he had grown numb to the pain of his flesh and the pain in his heart had become just a constant ache. He wasn't sure how long he had been there, but it had to be long if he had gotten so accustomed to his own suffering.

He didn't know what they'd do to him. Burn him? Behead him? Blind and mutilate him before exiling him from France? Whatever they planned, he hoped they'd do it fast. He'd never felt so tired in his life.

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Bad ending
[info]prettylilbunny
2012-01-15 07:01 am UTC (link)
There was a low whippoorwill-call of a whistle, and another a moment later, and a patient silence, apparently waiting for a response. When none was immediately forthcoming, there was another whistle, somehow more insistent while still sounding like a bird-call to the untrained ear.

The gypsies may have been captured, but they had friends in high places, or low places, as the case may be, the Assassins chief among them. The two tribes had been allies for generations, at least half as long as anyone could remember, and a purge like the gypsies had suffered wouldn't go unnoticed, nor unavenged.

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[info]topsyturvygypsy
2012-01-15 07:25 am UTC (link)
It took him a moment to gather his strength before he weakly raised his head from the ground. The call... was it really what he thought it was, or just a bird?

He hardly had the moisture to wet his lips, but he did the best he could, then gave an answering whistle. His whistles were usually melodic and cheerful even in the darkest of times, but now? It's just a hoarse whisper.

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[info]prettylilbunny
2012-01-15 07:36 am UTC (link)
It was good enough for her, she was able to pinpoint him at least, and the whistle that followed was a quick 'yoo-hoo' of a sound.

It was a few minutes more before the scratching started, too steady and too determined to be a rat, and not long after before the drain grate was lifted away from its hinges, a slight young woman wriggling her way through and into his cell, giving a bow once she'd done so, "Your highness, they say you've an appointment with the guillotine in the morning, but I'm afraid you're going to have to miss it."

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[info]topsyturvygypsy
2012-01-15 07:43 am UTC (link)
He looked a mess, especially with his bare blood-soaked back out with lash marks crisscrossing existing scars, but his appearance was the last thing on his mind. He let out a soft, hoarse laugh, clenching his fists on the ground. "Ah, what a pity. I'm sure it will be quite disappointed, but what can you do?"

A joke, as usual. It was always jokes with him, even in the depths of despair.

He struggled to sit up, but he could barely manage it. He wouldn't be able to run through the draining on his own, and he knew it.

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[info]prettylilbunny
2012-01-15 08:16 am UTC (link)
"We'll just have to make do, won't we?" She replied, stooping back to the drain to pull a bundle through, "How often do they come back for you?" She asked, already unwrapping the oilcloth from around its contents, "Because if I'm going to work a miracle here I'm going to need a little bit of time to do so."

The first thing that she shook out of the bundle was a tunic, passing it over to him, "Not the luxury you're used to here, I know, but we all have to make sacrifices."

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[info]topsyturvygypsy
2012-01-15 01:53 pm UTC (link)
He took the tunic in hand. It was a bit of a struggle to put it on since it hurt like hell to raise his arms, but he didn't make a sound to indicate his discomfort. "Well, I suppose I will have to make do with this, but really, I'd expect better. I've gotten accustomed to the high living standards here, you know."

He eyed her bundle with muted curiosity. It didn't feel real, that he was getting saved. It was entirely possible he was hallucinating this. "I have no way to keep time here, mademoiselle. They're finished with me for now and won't come back until they think I can survive another lashing, if that helps at all."

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[info]prettylilbunny
2012-01-15 07:12 pm UTC (link)
"Then we'll simply have to move quickly." She said, giving a short nod. And move quickly she did, finishing unwrapping the bundle, nudging him gently out of the way so that she could shake ashes out of a waterskin, nudging them here and there into a roughly human silhouette.

That done, she dusted her hands, rolling the oilcloth back up and tucking it back down into the drain, replacing the grate once she'd done so, "We've been working on getting your lot out of here for the past few days, slow going, and we've lost more than we should have." Her voice was quiet, tone conversational as she worked a lockpick out of the end of her braid, setting to work on the lock to his cell as she did so, "You're one of the last still here, we shouldn't have to make another run tomorrow."

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[info]topsyturvygypsy
2012-01-15 08:38 pm UTC (link)
He was about to say something grateful--I'm forever in your debt, thank you, I'll do everything in my power to see them avenged--but the words catch in his throat when he realizes...

"There were other survivors?"

That was all that was in him. No feeling. No thought.

Just one niggling hope: that some of his people had really gotten out alive.

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[info]prettylilbunny
2012-01-15 08:53 pm UTC (link)
"A few." She replied, "No more than a handful, those that made it out of the fire, or were elsewhere at the time." And not all of them had survived Justice as well as he had, though the ones that had were being spirited away the same as he was. This was a concentrated, cooperative effort, something that had been planned and re-planned until they knew they could do it without getting caught.

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[info]topsyturvygypsy
2012-01-15 09:04 pm UTC (link)
He couldn't formulate a response. He barely had the strength to remain in a sitting position; he couldn't process this. He couldn't dredge up his broken hopes at the idea that there were even a few left.

"I..."

He couldn't. He couldn't say anything. He was too tired, and he was too weak.

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[info]prettylilbunny
2012-01-15 09:21 pm UTC (link)
"Your highness, you have to stay with me." She said, tone gone just a little sharp, "You won't be any good to the ones that are left if you don't stay together starting now. Do you understand me?"

She herself was only half gypsy, on her mother's side, but she had the same fire to her that her mother's people were, she wasn't about to let him slip away, not now.

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[info]topsyturvygypsy
2012-01-15 10:17 pm UTC (link)
"Yes. Of course." He scrubbed his face with his hands, forcing his mind back into motion. Escape. That's all he can think about right now. Escape. "Yes. Tell me when you have the lock picked and I'll follow." He'd make himself follow, even if his legs collapsed under him.

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... 'her mother's people were -known for-', use all the words next time, self. - [info]prettylilbunny, 2012-01-16 01:18 am UTC
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Happy ending! Because these two need a break ♥
[info]la_esmeralda
2012-01-20 11:44 pm UTC (link)
She loved her city at this time of day.

Truth be told, she loved her city at any time of day, but there was something almost magical about Paris in the morning, when the city shook off its quietness and came alive. She loved the hustle and bustle, the constant movement of people moving to and fro, going about their errands. She also loved making up little stories about her fellow Parisians and their tasks as she passed them, making her own way through the chaos. The chandler, for instance, was clutching a letter - bad news from his family in Rouen, perhaps. But the baker was as energetic as ever - he had his hands full and his shop full of clients, but still stopped to wave pleasantly at her. She smiled and waved back.

The sound of a violin caught her attention then - it was a rich, familiar sound. The musician coaxed notes out of the instrument the same way a storyteller pulled words out of the air - deftly, confidently. Only one person played that way. A smile tugged at her lips as she looked up, holding her hand to her eyes to shield them from the sun.

"Bon matin, monsieur," Esmeralda called out to him, her voice warm as velvet, her eyes sparkling mischievously. "You take my breath away with your song. But if you fall from there, I can't promise I won't laugh."

Actually, if he did fall she would be horrified, and there would be no end of fussing, but! He could certainly handle himself, and she was well aware of the fact, which left her in a perfect position to tease him.

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I think they'd both appreciate it :3
[info]topsyturvygypsy
2012-01-21 12:52 am UTC (link)
"You break my heart, mademoiselle." Clopin looked down, smiling warmly at Esmeralda as he played, and the sun caught his one earring and made it flash. "But, alas, I suppose my heart is meant for breaking. Come, come, sit by me and see the view! It's a glorious day; much too glorious for la perle de Paris to spend alone."

And besides, now that they could freely be out in the open, Clopin liked to relax with his adoptive daughter/little sister/apprentice. He could spend all the time with her he couldn't have while they were underground.

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It's nice to see them so happy, poor darlings
[info]la_esmeralda
2012-01-21 02:11 am UTC (link)
He didn't need to ask her twice. She scampered up the side of the bakery, heedless of the baker's gasps and insistence that she take care (and she did take care - she managed the climb very gracefully and modestly for one in a skirt). Sitting herself beside him, she leaned against him comfortably, gazing off into the horizon with a bit of a dreamy smile. The river Seine wound its way through the city before them. It was an old, familiar sight, even if the river always made her think of newness.

"I dreamt about following it, as a child," she said, indicating the river with a wave of her hand. "I used to imagine all the places it would rush off to, and that I would see along with it. I dreamt about the river carrying me away...far away, out to sea. I dreamt of running away so fast that nothing could catch up to me."

She sighed, then, but it wasn't an unhappy sigh, or even a melancholy one. She could remember the way it had been, now that it was no longer the same.

"And maybe I will follow the river, one day. But not for those reasons."

There had been times when, as a child, she might not have come back. But Paris was home - it truly was. Everyone she knew and loved was here. Her family was here.

She turned her head to smile at him.

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You can say that again <333
[info]topsyturvygypsy
2012-01-21 03:20 am UTC (link)
Clopin grinned when she sat next to him, and since he was so experienced, he was able to look out at the horizon she referenced without stopping his playing. "The sea is a beautiful place, ma cherie. I can take you there one day if you like."

He felt it when she smiled at him. He leaned towards her, kissing her forehead gently while keeping up the tune. "Gypsies are meant to travel, after all. You should get to follow the river."

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We'll torment them later but at least we're nice sometimes
[info]la_esmeralda
2012-01-21 06:12 am UTC (link)
"I would like that."

It made her a bit fluttery with anticipation, this idea of doing what she had only dreamt of doing for so long. Part of her longed to spread her wings and soar, to see where the wind and water might take her. But part of her wasn't ready to leave Paris just yet, not when it had finally opened its arms to her people.

She smiled at the kiss, closing her eyes briefly before reopening them, and fastening them on him wonderingly. It meant a great deal to her that he was so encouraging of her wish, and so willing to help her fulfill it. But it also made her realize that, apart from the safety and prosperity of their people, she knew very little about his own dreams.

"Is there anything you long to do? Something you've always wanted but never could? Anything at all?"

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Exactly. They can't hate us TOO much.
[info]topsyturvygypsy
2012-01-21 03:35 pm UTC (link)
It warmed his heart to see her so happy. After all the awfulness of Frollo and the genocide, he wanted to do everything in his power to keep her smiling. Maybe it was because circumstances allowed him to relax, maybe he was getting soft with age, but he wanted to spoil the girl.

But then she asked him those questions. It made him give a thoughtful pause, though his hand never stopped moving the bow across the fiddle's strings. It had been... a very, very long time since anyone had asked him that. Had asked him anything even like that. After one ascends to being a leader, people just stop treating you human.

So he had to think about it. When he was young, he knew exactly what he wanted, but now that the genocide was over and he had grown completely into his role as protector with age, well...

"I suppose I would like to wander again. I love Paris, but this fool was made to travel." That was really all he could think of. Maybe he'd like to have a family, but he's not a particularly monogamous man and he never met anyone who he wanted to have a child with, so he doubted that would be in the cards. As it stood, Esmeralda was the closest thing to living family he had, and he was perfectly fine with that. "It's been a long time since I thought about it."

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[info]la_esmeralda
2012-01-21 08:43 pm UTC (link)
Her eyes lit up at his response, at how perfectly well it corresponded with her own wish. She would have been a little reluctant to leave him, even though circumstances in their city were so improved. As wonderful as it would have been to return home and regale him with the stories of her adventures, it would be even more wonderful to embark on those adventures with him. She longed to travel through the countryside, to journey to the ocean, and see where the tide led her. But more than that, she wanted to explore a world in which he had the possibility to make decisions based on no one's betterment but his own.

"You should think about it," she asserted, looking out over the horizon once more. "Think about waking up everyday with no plans, no agenda, just the freedom to follow forgotten paths. To go where the wind takes you."

Life was a gift, but regret...regret was a poison. She couldn't imagine the regrets he must harbor, even after they had faced the worst and survived. The regrets of a leader were inevitable. But the regrets of a person who had always lived his life for others, never to explore his own potential...she would spare him that, if she could. As a child she had dreamed of wings of her own, but were it within her power, she would have willingly passed the gift of flight to him.

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[info]topsyturvygypsy
2012-01-21 09:14 pm UTC (link)
If she had asked most gypsies what their wishes were, travel would probably be in there. They were a nomadic people, after all, and Clopin had been stationary in Paris much longer than he had stayed anywhere else.

He arched an eyebrow, giving it some thought as he looked out at the city. "There are many places outside of Paris that I would like to see again," he conceded, "and even more places I want to go to for the first time, even if I don't know what they are yet." Although it went without saying that it would be dangerous, he had faith in his and Esmeralda's street smarts and ability to protect themselves.

Clopin had more regrets than anyone should have to have. He remembered every mistake he made, every gypsy hanged or beheaded or burned... It aged him, even if he didn't show it. It really did.

But even so, were it a choice, he'd prefer Esmeralda have the chance to run free over him. He's satisfied with the work he's done, even if he hasn't had the chance to live for himself in a long time. Esmeralda? She still has many years to live.

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[info]la_esmeralda
2012-01-21 11:27 pm UTC (link)
"Does it feel strange?" she asked - and then, after skipping a beat, she hastened to clarify, "Strange to have so many possibilities?"

She knew she was relieved that so much weight and responsibility had been removed from him; but at the same time, his defining role had been such a large part of his life, she wouldn't blame him if he did find the changes strange, even if they weren't unwelcome.

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[info]topsyturvygypsy
2012-01-22 12:21 am UTC (link)
"Very." No point in being evasive about it. Clopin was rarely one to unload his problems on others, but that was the truth: being a protector and leader had been his purpose for so long that he was having trouble finding anything different to live for. "The gypsies don't need their king anymore. Oui, I have more time to fool with, but it can be hard to think of what to do with myself."

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[info]la_esmeralda
2012-01-22 12:42 am UTC (link)
"You'll always be our king," she said firmly, quietly. A little half-smile tugged at her lips. "The position is a little less dangerous now than it once was. Think of it as an added bonus?"

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[info]topsyturvygypsy
2012-01-22 12:59 am UTC (link)
He smiled at her, giving her shoulder a gentle nudge with his own as his playing began to slow. "Oui, it is nice to not be constantly hunted." Although he still preferred to wear a mask when he went out in the open. Old habits die hard, and Clopin would always be suspicious of strangers. "Although maybe I should be worried about more people vying for my position." In truth he wasn't too worried since his people were loyal and he always put them ahead of himself, but there would always be the odd ambitious young man who would try to usurp the title of king through violence.

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