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MarinaNova Mods (marinanova_mod) wrote in marinanova_ooc,
@ 2012-09-01 10:50:00

Entry tags:

mod: hmd, mod: plotting

Game-wide HMD/Plotting!
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lol reposting to avoid extra comments

_tricky
2012-09-02 04:37 am UTC (link)

Player name: Candy

Character: Loki Laufeyson | Marvel main comics-verse (Earth 616) |

_tricky | ☑
Link to private HMD if preferred: Here if you want, but I'm fine with it being here
Comments: I'm open to any kind of plotting (and criticism, for that matter), so hit me with whatever. I just don't have any particular ideas myself (regarding plotting, that is), right now at least.

I'm particularly worried about the way Loki speaks, and how much he says. Because he talks a lot, and has this weird habit of combining modern slang with old fashioned speech forms and, and, it's just weird. I know I have to work on consistency a bit, too. /sob.

I also have this post about the character if that's at all helpful.

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bluemoondog
2012-09-04 03:28 am UTC (link)

I'm sadly not really very familiar with his canon, I only know the Loki from the movies s-sob, but I have enjoyed our thread a lot! I like that this younger Loki seems pretty friendly and positive. You can also tell the kid is clever and smart, which is very much like the Loki I know. I like that he's gotten on fairly well with Helix too. It's quite a feat to change his trolling to friendly conversation on the first go, so that's generally a really good sign! I can't wait to see where the CR leads.

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	_tricky 2012-09-05 07:09 am UTC (link)
	I'm glad - I always have worries when I play characters that are supposed to be smart, if they actually come across that way. So that's very good to hear! I liked that thread too, so I'm looking forward to more CR with them. (Reply to this) (Parent)

kitty_has_claws
2012-09-04 07:47 pm UTC (link)

Candy...Candy...Candy.

I love him.

I never read anything in Marvel with him in it, but just on the face of him I think he's an interesting character who immediately pinged needs in me to interact with him when reading the app, but the way you play him is just everything I hoped for and more!

I also enjoy his voice. I mean, I obviously can't tell you if it's IC or not, but it makes sense to me when I read his tags. I kind of get that old world meets modern. It makes sense for him and I think you do a nice job of bringing it through without making it seem awkward.

It's great to have you back. <3

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	_tricky 2012-09-05 07:06 am UTC (link)
	It is good to be back ;_; Thank you so much! (Reply to this) (Parent)

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