And now I'm done and that was such a wonderful fic. Your writing is fantastic. Every single line and word is just exactly right.

I love that Justin smells like lemon-apple shampoo in this perfect moment you've created :) Vic's cameo is priceless. Ah I love Vic! Every fic should have a great little Vic cameo like this one lol.

This is a priceless, adorable image:
Brian ignores him as he pushes and rearranges limbs and hips and shoulders in an effort to make room for himself in the narrow bed


Brian starts kissing and licking his way down Justin's body, lingering at certain key places to nip or suck, tasting salt and boy sweat and desire.

um guhhhhhhhh. That is all :P

This is the perfect detail to make a hot scene even better:

He barely notices the sting of Justin's teeth as they bite into his palm.

And the end! *happy sigh* If I'd already uploaded it I'd use that awesome "Brian Kinney doesn't cuddle" icon :P