OH MY GOD! This is so good. Listen, I can't stand that you said you usually hate your stuff, because this extremely smart. Steadily paced and insightful. And you tell us all about them, without telling us anything! You show show show show show. In fact, what you TELL us is the opposite of what you show us. Which always us to actually THINK while we're reading porn, which most of us in this fandom love to do, but it's rare to find a fic that allows us to (simply because it's a real challenge for a writer and requires expertise, along with innate talent and instinct, which you have all of).

Obviously, I adore the premise. It's very similar to the one in my story that you read the other day: Justin is eager, Brian is in denial, his actions betray him, at Deb's, etc.

So that's the first thing that's great and likeable for me personally. But you really wrote them well. Very IC for both of them.

And this: You know he won't last long, he never does when he's in your mouth, so you do the things he likes. You pull your mouth back and circle the head of his dick with your tongue a few times, jerking his shaft, milking him of pre-come. You swallow him back down to his balls and squeeze his hip to let him know he can take control. He does, gripping your hair tightly and fucking your face. In seconds, he's coming down your throat, hot spurts of his distinctive tasting come.

You swallow it down and when he slumps, spent, you lick his dick a few times, cleaning him up and tucking him back in his pants.

Is I SWEAR TO GOD the hottest, sexiest, lovingest blowjob I've ever read. IT'S PERFECT. I could reread that and imagine it forever. In fact, I am absolutely going to rewatch that scene and think about this while I watch. Every once in a while, I read a fic and decide it's canon. This here is canon for me now. *Nods and places it in memories along with the other _alicesprings story in there*