galeandrandy ([info]galeandrandy) wrote in [info]bj_action on February 6th, 2010 at 06:50 am
It's building inside me; the pressure, the fullness, the overwhelming need, and suddenly it's too much, and I'm coming with a hard, sharp burst of release so intense, so incredibly deep that I'm only aware of Brian's orgasm pulsing through me as an echo of my own.

This part had to be read a few times, it's one of the most alluring and passionate paragraphs describing Justin reaching that place only Brian can bring him to, that I've ever read in all my years in reading b/j fiction.

Really a wonderful story and I love how simple and unrestrained this piece was. Thank you for writing it.
♥Rory
 
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