testdog65 ([info]testdog65) wrote in [info]bj_action on March 15th, 2008 at 10:45 pm
What a perfect combination of humor and heat. It was all so warm and enveloping. You really drew me in with the description of Justin wrapped around Brian. And the way that Justin woke up all irritated was priceless. But that sure didn't last long, and I loved the quick and immediate intensity of their need for each other. *fans self*

I really liked this:

I glanced up at him; he was all flushed cheeks, fiery eyes, and moist lips. Foreplay was all well and good, but sometimes it was just really fucking unnecessary.

And this:

I collapsed on top of him. Until I felt him pushing against me and mumbling that I was suffocating him. I thought that was only fair, considering it was how I started my day.

And of course Brian shuts off the alarm and goes back to sleep. A deliciously well done story!

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