Yay, you did it, you wrote cranky!Brian :) Love the idea of Ted trying to get Brian's attention while Brian stares into a spoon. And Justin was so Justin.
“Either way, we’re still fucking and you’re still telling me. We’re just talking order of business now.”
Heeeeeeee Good job! Oh, ending and the sex was great too!
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