corbie ([info]altsunthinkable) wrote in [info]bj_action on January 11th, 2008 at 05:45 am
This is fabulous. Dead on S1 voices for both Brian and Justin. And wanton!Justin is always a personal favorite of mine. I love his boldness here na dhow easily he just gives himself over to the whole thing. And Brian's fascination with Justin's body and his pleasure. He was already done for, he just didn't know it yet.

This:
Brian presses the palm of his hand flat against Justin’s hole, the ring from the end of the string of beads threaded through his fingers, and gives a small push. Justin gasps and pushes back against the pressure.


is fucking hot.

And this: Justin’s panting with need now as his hips rock into a fuck that isn’t there.

I just really like this line.

Awesome stuff.
 
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