HOLY
HELL
What you did here was/is/will always be AMAZING. Good god...my heart is pounding and it was hot, hot, hot, but it was so much more than that too. The ending with Justin telling Brian not to underestimate him - lajdf;lkja;jdsf;lajdsf;lja;sdfj;aljdsf;l
Brian's protective concern and telling Justin NO but ultimately letting him make his own decision - aldfj;lajdsf;lja;fjdlajsdfljasdf
The imagery you create paints the story in my mind. Each word is another piece of the story and I can't gobble them up fast enough!
A million thank yous for this!!!!