happier_bunny ([info]happier_bunny) wrote in [info]bj_action on January 11th, 2008 at 01:27 am
OH
HOLY
HELL


What you did here was/is/will always be AMAZING. Good god...my heart is pounding and it was hot, hot, hot, but it was so much more than that too. The ending with Justin telling Brian not to underestimate him - lajdf;lkja;jdsf;lajdsf;lja;sdfj;aljdsf;ljasfd

Brian's protective concern and telling Justin NO but ultimately letting him make his own decision - aldfj;lajdsf;lja;fjdlajsdfljasdf

The imagery you create paints the story in my mind. Each word is another piece of the story and I can't gobble them up fast enough!

A million thank yous for this!!!!
 
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