pendulumchanges ([info]pendulumchanges) wrote in [info]bj_action on January 10th, 2008 at 04:57 am
*guhhhhhhhhhh* Holy. Shit. Ellen!

A few of my favorite bits:

He’s suddenly much more interested in the conversation.

*snickers*

Finally, at the widest part, he stops, opens his eyes and stares straight at Brian, face flushed and eyes snapping with determination. Brian meets his stare and waits.

“Watch me, Brian. Watch me do it.” And Brian’s eyes refocus on the bead as Justin gives it one final push, letting his body do the work as he takes it inside.

It’s Brian who moans this time as he reaches out and runs a single finger around Justin’s entrance, closed up tight again, but this time with all the beads buried inside him. All the fucking beads. Jesus.


*DED DED DED* Whoa. Fantastic little section right there.

He steals a look towards Justin’s feet in time to see his toes curl

That line made me smile :)

Fantastic S1 story. I loved Justin's curiosity. Great job Ellen!
 
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