When Brian walks into the loft and up the steps to his bedroom to find Justin naked on his bed, working a large purple butt plug into his ass, he grins.
Excellent opening and what a fantastically hot visual!
And then this made my brain melt:
“You love that, don’t you?” Brian murmurs. “You love the burn. You love the stretch. You love being so full you don’t know what to do about it.”
I’m sure there’s more feedback I’d like to leave, but I’ve lost the ability to think for the moment. Guh!
~Ellen
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