Wow. How the hell do you write porn so well!? This was incredible. So intense. I loved getting to read both perspectives. My two favorite lines:

"You look so hot like this. I want you to suck my cock with that thing in your ass."

I sort of just sat here and stared at the screen after that one... *DED*... Then I kept reading...

He doesn't remember it later, but it was when my come hit his back that he came again.

And the last line, of course, is perfect.