OK, first? Really, incredibly hot.
This was an awesome line:
I love to get him wet, too wet. All over so that my hands and fingers and dick slip and slide over smooth skin and rough pubes. I like him messy, covered in come and sweat and lube.
Second, I loved the format of this. Traveling around in time and getting multiple vignettes of hotness was a great approach.
And did I mention the hotness factor? *melts*
~Ellen
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