Oh Ellen~
Your descriptions fill me with awe. I was holding my breath waiting for Brian to let Justin come. GUH.
You built the intensity and the anticipation so magically. And I loved it all but this line, When I do, his eyes take on that hooded look that makes me want to drop to my knees and suck him of made me swoon a bit.
love and kisses,
your slave
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happier_bunny (happier_bunny) wrote in bj_action on October 2nd, 2007 at 03:17 am